||ArIya|| Souls Separation[Chapter2-Page18] - Page 7

Originally posted by: a.anu

nice start.continue...

thanks dear..update coming😳

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awesome😊

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Originally posted by: prava55663

super start...nice concept..
Loved thebanner..

Amazing update..so riya narrating story..interesting..

thanks for liking it dear..hope it's come out awesomely...😳

Originally posted by: srividhya68

continue soon...!! eagerly waiting for the next part...!!

update coming dear...😳

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

hey moumi ek update or dard ka dedo.

will update Dard soon megha@..work on it...😳

Back With new Update hope you all liked it..here you go for Chapter 1b...😳😳😳

Chapter 1b:

Eye koyii ghar nehi ek bara sa launce ka ek hissa hain'itne sare kamre ke bich ek karma'wo baitha huya hain Rocking Chair main'Chair toh rocking hain paar wo'

Bahar barish ho rahi hain..subkuch dhoke le ja rahii hain sheher ka'kitni dhul jam jata hain sheher main pher barish ake use dho deta hain..pher puri sheher naye hawa main behne lagte hain..pher issi sheher ko dekhke lagta hii nehi ki kabhi kahi bhi koyii dhul thi'.

Log kehte hain rone se dukh kaam hote hain..maan ko thori shanty milte hain..jaise barish ke baat hawa ko milte hain waise hi'paar main ro bhi nehi sakta'shayed iss janam main mujhey shanti nehi mil sakta'

Iss janam..Wo khud ki soch se pereshan hain..main iss janam kaise keh rahi hoon'mujhey vagwaan pe bharosa toh nehi..pher dusra janam kaisa'nehi ho sakti koyii aur janam aur ek jindegi'

Agar Vagwaan hoti toh main aaj aise nehi hota..uske zindegi aise nehi hoti'Aisa toh nehi tha wo aisa kabhi banna bhi nehi chahta tha..pehle wo chala gaya jo mere dil ki itni karib thi ki main use dur jane ke bare main kabhi socha tak nehi'phir mujhme kuch badlav aye'aise baan gaya tha ki kabhi kisike saath'

Pher mere zindegii main wo aye jo sabkuch apne haton se sajaya..mujhey mere ghar ko mere sapno ko'phir uss darinde ne use bhi mujhse chin liya'usse mera Rishta tha eye uski galti thi'wo mera patni tha iss liye mar diya usne'mujhey aisa banne main maajboor kiya usne 'use nehi chorungii main'meri zindegi ki baas ek hii maksaad hain uss darinde ko uski asli jagah pohcha..meri patni ko insaaf dilana'

Aise hii thik hoon main..abb Mera iss Tufan ke baad bhikhre huye zindegi main use ane ki kiya jarurat thi..iss bhikhri huyii mujhey aur bikharne chalii ayiii..Kyun ayii hain wo'wo ja chuki thi pher kyun ayii..kyun!!!

Wo mera sabse assa 'choro uss baatko usne hii toh chorke gaya tha mujhey..mere bare main ek baar bhi nehi socha..ek baar bhi nehi'nehi socha ki uss din jo huya usmain meri koyi galti nehi thi!!Itna hii bharosa tha use mujhpaar'Aise chali gayii ki kabhi nehi milna hoga'kabhi nehi''.

Paar eye zindegi bhi kitni ajeeb hoti hain jaab wo chali gayi tab samajh aya mujhey wo mera kiya tha..kiya tha!!!kash pehle samjh jati use jane hii nehi deti'paar abb eye sochke kiya fyda wo loutna toh kiya..usse mera dusri mulakat bhi nehi ho sakta..pata nehi kaha chali gayi thi'

Zindegii bhi ajeeb hain.. na hone wali mulakatein phirse huyii..paar main na kuch keh paya..na use rok paya..pata nehi kaise khamoshi thi..kaisa rishta tha..kaisa duri thi thi..ya pher kuch tha hii nehi'

Wo bhi chala gaya bina kuch kahe..shayed kuch kehna hii nehi tha..waise bhi aajnabiiyon se kaise baatein!!!kaisa Rishta'

Phir ajj use kiya huya mujhey dekhte huye bhi wo uha kaise rahi..meri saath kaam kaise kari kaise..Main use pehchan bhi nehi paya aur use taakleef bhi nehi huyi..waise hone bhi nehi chahiye..phir uski mujhey na pehchanna ya pher mere use na pehchan na mujhey itni taakleef kyun de rahi hain..kyun'

Kyun Ajj mere samne ake wo aise khare huye jaha se hum kabhi ek dusre ko pehchaan nehi payenge..kyun aise khari huyii woo'jaha taakleef baas mujhey hogaa'..

To Be Continued'''

Here is 2nd chapter one Souls separation hope you all liked it..I know it's quit short update..but i promise you guys next part will be long one...give your feedback please..waiting for your feedback...😳😳😳

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Wow... Intense and Beautiful update!! LOVED it!!

This was beautiful!!
Loved the way you described Arjun's POV...
So Roshni is dead and he has to avenge her death..Then came Riya but she went way, I think there is some misunderstanding or something between them🤔
But then they came face to face today. but behaved like strangers...

Amazing update, contd soon dear :D

Awesome update.
Love arjun pov.
You described beautifully.
Continue soon.

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