New Raesha OS: Buddha mil gaya. Updtd IMP. NOTE

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hola guyyz...

Chemistry parh parh k thak gayi.
thought i need a break!!!!

So...
this is my first Raesha OS, so bhulchuk ho to maf karna...
inspired by Tina di's "Moochwala" OS.
N vidu di's Pehla pehla pyaar...

i'll update it in 6-7 parts...
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IMP. NOTE

as i said,
k i hav taken inspiration from Tina n vidu di's work.

To agar Plot ya dialogs me similiarities dikhe to plz excuse it... Plz

(im not that original)😳
I AM NOT STEALING ANYONES WORK N CLIAMING IT AS MY OWN!!
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INDEX

part 1 - pg 1
Part 2 - pg 1.
part 3 - pg 1.
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i know i am not as gud a writer then as gud readerz U ppl R.
but please guyz 1 comnt...

this much a little reward cnt u, my dear frndz giv me 4 all this mehnat???
Please...?????

Ok!!! I quit!!
but atlst hit the like buttn please!!
aap sabko Rathor ki mooncho ki kasam!!
😳

lyk Maroge to PM tumhara.
Comnt dammit :P

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Posted: 12 years ago
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He sat there in his cabin deep in thought...
Someone knockd.
"Yes come in"

Walked in the Angel of his dreams...
he just kept staring.
"Sir!!, Sameer sir"

"Tumhare muh se Sameer kitna acha lagta hai. Aisha "
She blushed...
He realized what he just said..

"No i mean, sab Rathor sir bulate hai na...
wese tum kuch kehne ayi thi ryt?"

"Ha sir, wo comisner sir ka phone aya tha, wo aaj koi case nahi hai, isliye hame day off mila hai."

"Oh! Thik hai,
chalo sabko batate hai."

She gave a scared look
"wo sir maine sabko batadiya, n um, Sab chale gaye, Sorry sir, bin puche hi..."

"Sorry ki kya baat hai? U did good thing,
bytheway, chalo, tumhe ghar drop..."
"Wo sir...
wo mai...
mai ghar ni jane wali thi..."
"to phir?"

She hesitates...
"U can tell me as a friend Aisha!!"

"Sir... Wo mera amusmnt park jane ka mann kar raha tha."

"dhat pagli!!
Waha koi akela jata hai kya!!
chalo hum dono sath chalte he.
we'll hav fun"

"Sir!!??"
"No sir, Sameer,
n yes. Ab chalo!"


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PRE: Raesha have loads of fun!!
Edited by Sumu4JayD - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!!! I love ur Os!!! It is very new and different...and ijust like de concept !!!
Continue soon...
Edited by Sarun-Lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rathor led her out of the ofic n into his SUV
all the while holding her hand.
In the Car...

Ra: toh?? Kaunse park me jaogi

Ai: um...
Fairytale Garden Andheri East.?

Ra: Sure!!

They reachd the park in 30mins...
all the while chatting merrily!!

They enterd the park...
it was wednesday so not much crowd...

They rode the Roller coaster and to Aisha's surprize, Rathore squeezd his eyes shut n clung to her for dear life...
then they rode the bumper car, magic Carpet n many more.
Had a lovely lunch in a 'Tong.'

All day long they did khub masti...


Sparks flew when they entered the water world...

there they had a rule that guyz had to change into tees n shorts n girl into Bikini...
the park lended the clothes...

well that was OK for Rathor, but poor Aisha...

well what could she do...

She came out wearing a bikini..
however it had a Net shirt n mini skirt over it...

She looked Angelic.
causing Havoc to his heart...

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Pre: Seeing her like that Rathor goes Gaga...
n he proposes
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
plz update soon

Sameer 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one..
Rathod and Ayesha in amusement part..
That was great..
Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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IMP NOTE.


now this is rly Mean!!!!

Out of 226 views, i get, 5 ppl liking my babe n only 3 of my Dear BBs comnting...
Now that aint fair...!???

Or is it U tell me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sparkling Awesome Graphic
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
i was waiting for this yesterday...
too good...
directly boldiya??😲?oye hoy sameer ji amusement park lady love ke saath aur roller coster se darr...??!!!!😲😆😆😆 rowdy rathod ko kisi chees se darr bhi lagta hai😆😆😆😆
ab kya karenge sam ji...aisha ko uss avtar mein dekh?!!!
only one song i wan 4 sam..
'haal kaisa hai janab ka?????'😉
m waiting for part 3. update soon behna
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Posted: 12 years ago
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P3.

She came out in a white net shirt n mini skirt...

He just gaped!!
making her go Red...

Ai: Sir... Sameer??
um.. Aise kya dekh rahe hai?? Please...
i feel embarasd...

He went near her with eyes full of a hunger...
she just stood still,
Shocked...
Paralyzd...
Frozen...

he pulled her by the hand,
n she crashed to his chest.
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BackGround Music


Ai: Dhak Dhak Karne laga...
O mora jiya ra darrhne laga...
Saiyyaa, baiya chorh na.
Kachhi kaliya torhna...


[COLOR=BLUE] Ra: Dilse dil mil gaya,
Mujhse kaisi yeh haya...!?
Tu hai meri dilruba...
Kya lagti hai wah re wah!!!

Raesha: dhak dhak karne laga..

"Ahem"!!
They came out of their tranc n saw ppl staring...
Both went red😳

a attndnt came forward.
"Sir, if u want secluded area hai yaha..."

Ai: Oh!! No no, koi zarurat nahi, we r just fre...

Rathor cut her short...

Ra: yes please...
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Pre: rathor confsn.
Aisha mock angry...
Rathor mananafy's n
HOT WALA ROMANC

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