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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
just read th last two updates n thy r amazing dr.

th couple u choose for mr n mrs gupta is really sweet.

awww ariya first kiss n their confession in front of their friends is simply mindblowing.

all th couples r lovely.

take ur time dr. no need to rush as studies comes first.

continue soon.




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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Thats fine take your time
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: akanksha1371986

just read th last two updates n thy r amazing dr.


th couple u choose for mr n mrs gupta is really sweet.

awww ariya first kiss n their confession in front of their friends is simply mindblowing.

all th couples r lovely.

take ur time dr. no need to rush as studies comes first.

continue soon.





Thanks for supporting and understanding
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

chapter 9

Back at school and today is a basketball game against their rivals. Everyone is pumped up.

It's the last minute left and our team is down by 2 and the score is 93-95. Arjun is the captain and is talking to the team. it's a time out. The 5 players on court from our team are Shree--Point Guard, Raj--Shooting Guard, Arjun--Small Forward, Sameer--Power Forward, and Chotu--Center.

Chotu takes out the ball and passes it to Shree. Shree dribbles it down the court, and a defends is defending him and Shree moves the ball between his legs and passes it to Arjun. Just then Arjun defender tightens his defense and the other team know that Arjun is good(obviously our Arjun is the best). The other team makes a huge mistake by leaving Raj open and they knew that Raj is the shooting guard and is # 1 High School 3 point shooter in USA. Raj's defender goes to help Arjun defender in defense and Arjun sees Raj wide open calling for the ball and Arjun passes him the ball and it's a 3 pointer. Our team is up by 1.
The other team has the ball but Shree Sameer steals the ball passes it to Shree. Shree to Raj. Raj to Arjun and Arjun to Chotu who was under the basket and he makes it and we are up by 3 points.
We tight the defense which makes the other team accidently throw it out of bounce. Shree dribbles the ball passes it to Sameer. Sameer passes it to Arjun. Arjun dribbles the ball between his balls and behind his back crosses over his defender and lays it in. BUZZZ
WE WON!!!!!!
Our crowd was on their feet and the whole team hugs each other. After talking to the boyzz in the locker room coach{Mr. Gupta} let them free.
Mrs. Gupta comes up to Mr. Gupta and kisses him on his lips and congrats him. Ayesha kisses Sameer, Harman kisses Raj, Lisa kisses Shree, Sakshi kisses Chotu, and Sukh kisses Jeet.
"WOW that was some game, I didn't know you were that good with dribbling and that pass to Raj was perfect" said Riya. "Thanks babe" said Arjun "Lets go I will drop you home."
Arjun parks the car in front of Riya's house and was about to get out but Arjun pulls her and Riya falls on his chest and then Arjun leans in and kisses Riya right on her soft lips. They kissed for a while but they had no idea that Mrs. Mukherjee was watching all of this.
She was actually happy for them because she wants Riya to have a happy life because she will die soon because of cancer. She tried to tell Riya a lot of time but never had the guts to do so.
Riya enters the house and sees her mom lying on the floor.
Plzzz be honest and tell me how it is
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
OMG this is emotional
but that was nice arjun loves riya.
continue soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ...amanvirdi...

OMG this is emotional

but that was nice arjun loves riya.
continue soon
thnx for pm

Thanks buddy
will try to update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Nice update... but last part ws unexpected... continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Oh No!! Riya's mom has cancer?? Poor Ri!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arjunkibehen

Oh No!! Riya's mom has cancer?? Poor Ri!!!

coming with a twist soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
match was nice... it was full of kissing session after match😲🤣 great
omg riya's mom has cancer poor ri
what's gonna happen next?
update soon

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