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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Ohh god ye kya pankuuu tumne to hosh udda diye...
riya talliii feelll jealous...
Arjun act as kiss ..
Finaly ariya ke bich sab thik..
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Ohhh god shasha ne to tem bada diya...
50 Kiss or home lolll ...
sab kuch amazing ker liya..

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Waooo pvly dr love rawte style..
kya interogation the..
Waoo arjun is so cute..
Kolkta riyas hand waiting update soon...

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Krinal

@MissC

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Thanks for the PM 😃

It's an awesome story and last last update was amazing 😃

Read all the parts together

Love Arjun's plan to make Riya jealous by pretending that he and Emily are together

OMG Aisha took Arjun and Emily's voices in Arjun's cabin in the wrong way and told Riya about it 😲

Haha Aisha took Sam away when Emily asked him to dance with her in the party 😆

Sam and Aisha's scenes were really good

Aisha talking about the return gift was really funny

Finally Arjun and Riya are back together

Love the way Arjun let Riya know about Sam and Aisha's night together and cut the call at the right time

Aww Arjun's going to Kolkata to ask Riya's parents for Riya's hand in marriage

He's such a gentleman

Can't wait to read the next update

Continue soon 😊

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Awesome,fab,fantastic

Love the convo of Ariya and samesha

Update soon

Next time pls pm me

Mishti

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

ooww..

fantastic update!!!!!!

loved it!!

haah./...unka interrrogation...great!!😃😃

update sooonnn,,,,

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zaynie259

@zaynie259

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Nearly a month now yr...

wen will u update??

cant wait now

please hurry up

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piyal

@Pankhuri96

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

hi...

back with

part 8

At evening:::

Ria's home

Arj:ria main kuchh dino ke liye bahar jaa raha hu...

Ria:kaha???

Arj:Kolkata...

Ria:kyun???

Arj:tumhara hath mangne...

Ria:(teary eyes)sach????

Arj:ha...baba...sach...

Ria:thanx arjun...for make my life happy...

arj:same here...

ria:kaab jaa rahe hai???

arj:kal...

in short cut...

arjun ria ke ghar jake ussa hath mangta hai...ria ke mom dad razi ho jate hai...finally unki shaadi ke date fix ho jati hai...twist yeh tha ki samesha aur ariya ki shadi ek hi din...ek hi mandap pe...but ritualls alag hongi...ariya ki bengali...and samesha ki rajasthani ritualls ke hisabv se...

(mature part...ek glass cold water sath leke baithna...)

finally

SUHAG RAAT

ria is sitting on the bed...arjun comes...sits besides her...ghunghat uthata hai...

arj:ria...

ria:hmmm...

arj:bahat achchhi lag rahi ho...

ria:thanx...

arjun comes more closer...kisses on her cheeks...ria downs her eye lashes...he kisses on another cheeks...

ria:arjun...

arj:sorry...main kuchh zyada hi...

ria:nahi...aapne kuchh galat nahi kia...

she moves forward and kisses on his cheeks...

arjun understands her wish...he leands down andplaces a wet kiss on her lips...the kiss was soft,slow,...but after some time it becomes passionate...ria is struggling with his kurta's buttons...arjun helps her...they brock the kiss because of lack of air...they are looking each other's eyes...arjun lays her down on the bed...slowly removes her pallu...unhook her blause...some time after they are breathing heavely...

ria:ar...jun...

arj:hmmm...

ria:thanx...

arj:kyun????

ria:meri life me ane ke liye...mujhe pura karne ke liye...

arj:it's ok...i lv u...

ria:love u too...

they again kisses each other...the full moon was the witness of their love...

THE END

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