|| Ariya FF- The Burning Ice || ON HOLD imp note pg 24

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

By-Mumu (Moumimon)

hello guys..
Pls bore mat hona..
Ye vampire aapka picha kabhi nahi chdegi...

Suddenly sth struck in my mind and here i m again started...

So this is on ariya..
My heart still sticking to them..
Isn't it a good thing..

As always its diff concept...

Will post the prolouge soon...
Stick to ariya...

Edited by Vampire-queen - 11 years ago

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

INDEX

Chapter One:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3539952/ariya-ff-the-burning-ice-on-hold-imp-note-pg-24?pn=8

Chapter Two:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3539952/ariya-ff-the-burning-ice-on-hold-imp-note-pg-24?pn=14

Chapter Three
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3539952/ariya-ff-the-burning-ice-on-hold-imp-note-pg-24

Edited by Vampire-queen - 11 years ago

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

The Burning Ice

He was shivering with cold...so was she... The cold thunder wind was hurting both of them... And she was there in a broken old snow covered car ,along with him... She hates it but she have to..
She slowly put her hands around his back and he also made her closer...he also don't want..
But the condition is the worst thing , and both of them couldn't deny the destiny...atleast not this time...

Only one long jacket covered both of them... That was not enough...
If their temp. Won't increase , it would result fatal for both of them...

No choice left.. She hugged him tightly and wanna feel his warmth..not for any desire...but only and only for survival...

He cursed himself for not not to listen his best friends advice...now he can't say snow trecking is most enjoyable thing in this wolrd...not then , when any one struck in a old broken car, only having one jacket that is helping him to keep his warmth ..and with a girl...

'' hey !! Tum aur paas nahi aa sakti'' he said.

'' ab kya tumhare andar ghus jau..
Ab toh micrometer ka distance bhi nahi hai hamare bich'' she said looking at him angrily..

'' yeah thats the spirit, aur gussa karo..jitna gussa karoge utna hi tumhara temp. Badega..'' he said..

'' what?? Ab kya mai gussa bhi tumhare kehene pe karun..''

'' tum chaho toh beshak mar sakti ho, but mai nahi... Mujhe zinda wapas jana hai..''

They shut their mouth up with the another stroke of snow filled wind..

He came more closer to her..

'' dekho mera , faida utha ne ki kosish mat karo ..ok..''
she said in uncomfortness..

'' faida, my foot.. Yaha se zinda bahar jayenge ya nahi iska guareenty nahi hai.. Faida..''

He again tried to connect the control room of the tracking point..
To their goodluk it connected..

'' hello...hello.. Tracking code 361..arjun..here.. Pls help ..
A girl is also here with me..
Help us..''

the line disconnected..
'' otherwisre u wll get our snow cube body the day after '' he said..

'' lets wait..''she said..

Wht else we can do ??
Lets wait.. He said to her...''

guys tell me how is this..
Diff na..

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NeethuEli

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Posted: 12 years ago

Really diff.

Interesting start. So arjun is stuck somewhere with a girl. Riya, right?

Wonder how they got there. They seem to be enemies at present.

Do continue soon.

Edited by Hermione1234 - 12 years ago

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

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Posted: 12 years ago

humara peecha mat choro vampire...

diff concept.jaldi update karo.

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Tabassum

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Posted: 12 years ago

Arjun Riya locked in car woh bhi itne thand me 😉 . Interesting Very Interesting.
Different concept. Pls update soon .

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow interesting concept...!!!

arjun stuck with riya right? wo bhi snow mai with only one jacket to make themselves warm...!!! kuch aur hi krna padega inko temperature increase karne ke liye😉😆

but how did they got here?

continue soon...!!! eagerly waiting for the next part...!!!

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debu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey vampu dear! Great concept yaar! Barf mein aag laga di tumne toh! Lovely prologue 😉 Ariya based ff was craving for 1 thank u for writing and its defo great that u are sticking to them i am as well 😛 Ariya caught at a treking point in a broken car now thats intresting*i guess the gal is Riya only* 😆 Pyara pyara nok jhok eagerly waiting for the coming up plot 👏 pls continue soon will love to read it 😃