Arni OS - Promise

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi All ,
My last OS was Hope which was on Arisha ...but this one is on Arni❤️
Its not sad but then yes it is how you percive it .
@Tina- I was reading your Arni OS and this idea clicked ...😃
All jhootis , chappals allowed but please i want the full pair 😆😆..and if you guys plan on throwing eatables only fat free allowed ..actually me on a diet .
@All - Do read and comment it really wouldnt hurt
P.S- Not sure about the title /errors but then again its 1 AM and i am sleepy🥱
Arni OS - Promise

"Arjun ,sab theek se ho jayega , tension mat le "

"Bas last minute's preparations dekh raha hun Sam"

"Uske liye main hun na baba, Aap bas tayiaar ho jaiye baarat aati hi hogi"

"Abhi ,bas ek baar mandap check kar leta hun ,uske baad chala jaunga "

"Abhi tum jakar tayar ho jao, yeh waise bhi kisiki nahi sunta" Sam added

After an hour after the arrival of baraat the bride descended accompanied by her sister in law and few friends . Diya Arjun Rawte was all set to become Mrs Sahil Shekhawat today .B efore going to the mandap she looked towards her father who just smiled her gesturing her to move forward .While the rituals were going on Arjun couldn't help to think about last 20 years.

20 Years earlier (Arjun POV)

Sikander had been killed and Roshini was in peace but there was a hollow within him. No matter he got her justice but the truth was that he could never bring her back .He had accepted the fact that he has to live with just her memories .S ameer was always there but sometimes he just wondered how different would it have been if she was here .Today was her birthday and after wishing her he left for the office .While traveling he caught the sight of her school and had a string urge to visit.As he went towards the empty Art room he saw there were 2 kids inside, but what shook him was that they were cutting the cake for Roshini and singing her a birthday song. Later he came to know that they were orphaned at a early age. Roshini had cared for them as mother rather than a teacher. They had missed her as much as he did as they were yet again orphaned by her untimely death.

Her birthday she had joined all 3 of them in a thread of love . He started visiting both of them more often , at the beginning they were hesitant but knowing that he was Roshini Husband they relaxed with him.All his eveings were spent in th NGO where they both were stayingtalking about their routine and of course Roshini . It was her birthday the verynext year that they about had called him Baba for the first time .Sam was escatic as were Shree & Chotu when they came to know that he was offically adopting both of them

Thus started the journey of their life , their family.

"Baba"

Her daughter voice broke his chain of thoughts and see could see the tears swimming in her eyes. With a heavy heart he led her towards Sahil .

"Take care of her Sahil"

"I'll do "he replied with utmost sincerity

As all the guest went all of them retired to the room , only Abhi came with him .

"Are you okay baba"

"Why are you asking that Abhi"

"I saw it Baba, during the wedding ,in every ritual you were missing Mom, so just wanted to check also Diya had called to check with you."

"I am fine Abhi, Roshini lives in me, don't worry and tell Diya not to worry "

"Will do ,Good night Baba"

"Good Night Abhi"

He went to sleep thinking about their children who loved him to core-Abhimanyu & Diya

Abhimanyu was a mirror image of himself. Professionally he had the same anger, attitude, observation skills as him or even better and no wonder he was one of the most respected Officer in today. Whereas Diya was the light of their house just like his Roshini, she was the calmer one amongst the too.She was a painter like her mother and had made a name for herself. Time has passed so quickly with them he never realized that Abhi was now father of two kids and Diya had started her new life. He had finally fulfilled all the responsibilities and promise made to Roshini to live now if only he could meet her.As god had finally heard his plea he heard her voice

"Arjun , Chailye main aapko lene aayi hun" he heard the voice

He saw her standing by the window in her white Anarkali dress which he loved on her ,the one woman who ruled his hearts with her hand outstretched to him .

"Roshini bacche, "

"Ab who bade hogaye hai Arjun , Ab mujhe Aapki zarurat hai" she replied with a smile

"Bahut intezaar karvya tumne Roshini " he said as he took her hand

Next day, Diya came home only to be greeted by her dad lying immobile on his bed with smile on his lips. Everyone was teary eyed and mourning over the loss but only few knew that their loss was his gain

Arjun saw their kids going through various photo albums remebering the old memories ,they were being strong for each other . Yes she was right they had grown up

The world lost Arjun Suryakant Rawte, the best commissioner of Mumbai, Sameer Rathore lost his best friend, Abhi & Diya lost their father but not a drop of tear was shed .They send him off with a smile as they knew he was with whom he belonged and he was happy there.

Arjun was finally reunited with his Roshini Forever!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arni...buhuuu 😭😭

It's beautiful, dost! 😭 main bilkul senti ho gaayi! Very poignant and celestially written!👏👏

Wahaan jahaan tuhi mera libaas hai,
Wahaan jahaan teri hi bas talaash hai,
Wahaan jahaan tujhi pe khatm aas hai,
Wahin shuru, wahin pe daafn jaan hai.

Edited by despicable_me - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written.
Mere aakho mein aansu aagaye hai. I just loved it to the core.
Love ArNi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful love my ArNi forever
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was such a beautiful OS :) loved it
i literally had tears in my eyes while reading it
very well written
great job 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No words to explain...
It was SUPERB..
AWESOME..
Keep writing..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww
sia dear
u made me sob
heart touching
loved it
claps
pls keep more writing on arni
amazing..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: despicable_me

Arni...buhuuu 😭😭

It's beautiful, dost! 😭 main bilkul senti ho gaayi! Very poignant and celestially written!👏👏

Wahaan jahaan tuhi mera libaas hai,
Wahaan jahaan teri hi bas talaash hai,
Wahaan jahaan tujhi pe khatm aas hai,
Wahin shuru, wahin pe daafn jaan hai.

Thanks partner !!!
U know what lead to this 😃
satanslove thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Payal_156

Aww
sia dear
u made me sob
heart touching
loved it
claps
pls keep more writing on arni
amazing..!

Thanks Payal
I was watching old falshbacks of Arni and had read Tina OS !! It all lead to this ...was missing Roshini on the show
satanslove thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zebbie

Beautifully written.
Mere aakho mein aansu aagaye hai. I just loved it to the core.
Love ArNi.

Thanks Zebbie😛

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