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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweet lord! Tahi.. Sone se pehle rulane ki kasam khakar aayi thi kya?

That was simply beautiful and so poignant!
Oh and those rings reminded me of school days.. the things we used to do back then! 😭

Loved it.. Why!!

This is why.. No matter, what happens to Arjun in the future, this is one relationship that he and we will never want to forget!

Great work, behna.. 👏👏

P.S. : no shoes.. No tamatars.. how about a box of fresh strawberries with some fat-free whipped Cream?! 😉😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

Sweet lord! Tahi.. Sone se pehle rulane ki kasam khakar aayi thi kya? Haila.. itna emotional tha kya? 😛 emotional subject mein meri number thodi kamm aati hai 😛

That was simply beautiful and so poignant! Thank You so very much☺️
Oh and those rings reminded me of school days.. the things we used to do back then! 😭


Oh heck yes 😭 Those were 'the' days. Something you can't go back to! Sucks

Loved it.. Why!!

This is why.. No matter, what happens to Arjun in the future, this is one relationship that he and we will never want to forget!

Exactly my thought when I started writing it down. Because in the end, when you lose somebody, every candle, every prayer is not going to make up for the fact that the only thing you have left is a hole in your life where that somebody that you cared about used to be.

Great work, behna.. 👏👏
Gracius...sangat ka asar hai 😉

P.S. : no shoes.. No tamatars.. how about a box of fresh strawberries with some fat-free whipped Cream?! 😉😛
eeeks... My favorite! 😃 can I have a homemade cake with it? 😛


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I m left speechless with the beautifully portrayed emotions.
Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow.. what beautiful piece loved it thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zebbie

I m left speechless with the beautifully portrayed emotions.
Loved it.


Thanks! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deepikz

Wow.. what beautiful piece loved it thanks for the pm😊


Thank You!😃

& for that wonderful siggy!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So serene,
my heart skipped a beat or maybe more...
the elegance,
the richness of ur thought has made me...
slightly cloudy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great work Tahi...loved it...
Reading this before paper...ab paper emotional ho ke likhungi...haha...kidding...But ssly...Beautiful...
The rings part was ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS Tahi 👏 loved it
very well written :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Di...
gm meri morning itni emotional aur beautiful bnane ke liye thank u...
u left me speechless
beautiful potray of emotions
well defining meaning of promise..
aww my bro arjun..!!!!
me sobbing...
loved it di...
me arni pankha khush hua,..
hats off di...
claps!!
avantika di ke coment par apke quote ne yad dila diya
rosh dialoge..
romantic subject me tumhare marks kam aate h acp arjun...
samjhe ya samjhau!!!!!
last line super amazing di..
me becum fan of ur writing
love u
tc..!!

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