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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey gusy this was a challenge i accepted that was given by tani since i am the WOTW
Enjoy and please comment

os :The Proposal

It was 2yeasrs since she joined ETF as Tech Specialist she was own as the Teck Freak she loved everything to do with technology she was a gadget and gizmo geek even her friends shree the reaseatch specialist and chotu use to tease her . It was 10 pm everyone was busy working on the case. They had to all fly out tommrow to dehli to do more investigation Her Arjun Sir was already there busy working his sharp mind away gathering clues . she was missing him like crazy but she knew that the arrogant sudo ACP Rawte was probably not even think of her once. She knew he never liked her at that what she thought until this very night she would find out his true feelings.

Riya was working away when suddenly her screen beeped and there was a message for a video chat with her one and only arjun Sir .

"Rathore sir Arjun sir video chat pe aaye hai maybe kuch lead mila hai" says riya.

"Haan screen pe dalo" says Rathore

"Haan rawte kya hai koi lead mila" says rathore

"Haan roy hotel zen main tha bhaaki ki detail kal de tha Riya khan hai kuch kaam hai us se" says Arjun

"Ji Sir kya kaam hai: she said

"Karan ki call record nikalo and shinde ki bank staments hai"

"Ok sir ho let me see" she says

"acha haan sab kuch hai kal ki liye check karo abhi we will need all the techno things of yours roy bhi tere jaisa teck geek jo hai and the staments" he says

"Haan sir hai" she says

" Double check karo abhi" yells arjun(with a slight smile)

"Yaar video conference main bhi riya ko yell kar re ho who" whispers chotu

"Haan yaar aisa lag ra hai who yahi hai office main unka gussa itna hai ki jaise screen se jump kar ke aayge yahaan" jokes shree

"Ok" she says

"Pen drive" ? says arjun

Check says Riya

"Credit card staments"? Says arjun

"Check" says Riya?

"IMac"( the new apple laptop)? Says arjun

Check says Riya

"Ipad"? Says arjun

Check say Riya

"Ipod"? Says Arjun

"Check Sir" says Riya (who was getting slightly annoyed )

"Iphone"? Says Arjun

"Check Sir"! Says Riya

"I LOVE YOU "! Says Arjun with a smirk and a naughty sparkle in his eyes

The whole ETF team were shocked

"Check Uff sir sab kuch hai" '."KYA WHAT" Says Riya (realzing what he just said )

Arjun starts laughing so does the team

"Arre I LOVE YOU RIYA" '"Ms.Riya Mukherjee Will YOU MARRY ME AND BECOME MRS .ARJUN RAWTE ? SAYS ARJUN

ANOTHER SOCK FOR RIYA AND THE TEAM

Riya controls her smile and looks upset

Arre itna gussa kyun ho re ho ? for almost a year in a half you have been in love with me hoping ki id fall for you and aaj tum gussa ho re ho says arjun

"ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte gussa tho hoge na main . What was that IMAC,IPAD,IPHONE,IPOD, I LOVE You"?

"After all I'M A GIRL NOT STEVE JOBS "! " koi aisa apne dil ki baat khe the kya" ? "Is this how one proposes "? "In the middle of a CASE and that to video Conference main O GOD MEN " ? "

If you Love me then propose like a Gentleman come here face to face get down on one knee and ask me again" . "IF YOU LIKE IT THEN PUT A RING ON IT ! SAMHJE YA SAMJAO"?

Arjun starts laughing

"Acha baba uff tum jab yahaan aaoge kal investigation ki baad" "we will go ring shopping ab Khush ab tho gussa chor do na please Yeh Live YouTube pe hai"! "I bet we will get a million hits for this kyun my Tecno geeky jaan e maan" smiles Arjun

"WHAT YOU TUBE! Live ! hits" ?" huh what do you think ki im that Koran sensation gangnam dance hoon kya" ? "hit tho hoge but You tube ke nahi mere haat ki tum pe" says riya

"Aye haye gussa phir hoge" ? " acha baba sorry holding ears maaf bhi karo please" says Arjun

"Ok fine maaf kiya and YES I WILL MARRY YOU I'D LOVE TO BECOME MRS.ARJUN RAWTE " she says with a smile

YES! HE SAYS AND JUMPS UP FROM HIS CHAIR AND HAND HIS HANDS UP IN THE AIR

"Ab tho I love you to bol do na" says arjun

Her eyes pop

"Acha theek hai but kal ring jab finger pe hoge thab" says Riya

"Kya ? not fair" says ARJUN

"Arre Everything is Fair in Love and War and ek aur baat Saber ka phal meetha hota hai ACP RAWTE SAMHJE YA SAMAJO"

HE IS SHOCKED AND SMILING HARD

SHE WINKS AND BLOWS A KISS AND CLOSES THE VIDEO CONFERNCE AND BLUSHS HARD TURNING CRIMSON RED
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Payal_156 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh itna romantic di..
loved it..
thank u tani di fr d challenge..
grt gng fiza di.!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome fiza di

thank u for taking in the challenge ...

u know wat...i also said , WHAT while readin I L U

even i was shocked ...

seriously u wrote it in a different way n i loved d writing ...

it was awesum , i m Smiling while reading d best confession

kitna awesum confession tha ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww...
That was so Romantic and cute. Iphone Ipad Imac check I love u check. 🤣.
Yeh Arjun bhi na sab ke samne case ke bich order dete dete purpose. Yeh sirf Arjun hi kar sakta hai.
It was beautiful Fiza di. Great idea Tani. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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romantic update...👏.👏.👏.
arjun proposed style was so superb...
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb. Bless you for this os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS... Arjun's proposal ws really different... Loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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as usual rockin hai Di...

hugsss congratulations once again 🤗

Its so romantic...haha she compared herself with Steve jobs rofl Di ur too good...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆!! super awsomeee!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb os...!!!
loved it...!!!!
kya hatke style hai arjun ka propose krne ka...!!!😉😆
lol bechari riya shock ho gai...!!!😆
congratz on being wotw...!!!!😊

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