OS ROMANCE KA JHATKA

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Hi guys I am here with an os...I hope u all like it
ROMANCE KA JHATKA

The silence prevailed in the ETF
conference room. three pairs of eyes
rotated between rathore n
arjun...while ria prayed it to b rathore
while Shree had drug case flashback
and chotu rememberd the day when
arjun had brought coffee for him.
Riya could no longer resist and spoke
"Rathore sir mujhe lagta hai...Yeh
kaam aapko hi karna chahiye..aap toh
jaantehain na ki arjun sir kitne gusse
wale hain ...and chotu aur Shree aap
jitne handsome b nai hain.." said riya
ignoring arjun's glares.
Shree and chotu didn't even feel one
percent sad this time having been
rejected from list of handsome men of
ETF
"haan rathore Yeh kaam tumhe he
karna hoga" said arjun seriously
"ok Shree us ladki k bare mein sari
info do mujhe"ordered rathore.
"sir ladki ka naam megha hai...ek don
ki beti hai. us don ko pakadhne k
baare mein sirf woh janti hai...is ladki
ki sirf ek hi kamzori hai...handsome
ladke...Jo ladka usse dump kare Yeh
uska murder kar deti hai..." shree bits
his lips & continued "kal evening mei
hotel pine palace mein ek party mein
ane wali hai..." Shree completed
trying to see some fear in rathore's
eyes.
"okay phir kal party mein milte hain.
Next day hotel pine palace::
All ETF members reached the hotel
and Shree adjusted Bluetooth to
rathore and connectd it with rest
team...
"sir aapko uska phone hasil karna
hoga...ok??"
"theek hai" nodded rathore.
They went inside the hotel and riya
went to a group of girls enjoying
gossiping.
Ria: excuse me...kya aap mujhe bata
sakti hain megha aap mein se kaun
hai...woh acc...
"are hum mein se megha koi nai
hai...megha woh hai...the girl with
blackdress near the fountain..." the
girl replied.
without letting riya complete her
sentence riya thanked and went
towards the team while other girl in
the group said "are yaar yahan do do
megha hain...ek woh don ki beti aur
dusri apni meghu...megha Singh...ab
tune usko meghu ka bola ho sakta hai
Yeh us don wali megha ko dhondh rahi
ho??"
"are use sirf ladke he dhondte
hain...ladkiyan nahi..."said the girl
laughing.
"but apni meghu toh uski opposite
hai...Ladkon se use nafrat hai...she
doesn'tbelieve in love" the girl said
looking towards megha.
Rathore went to the girl n deliberately
collided with her..the girl was wearing
high heels ...she lost her balance n
held rathore's collar for
support...rathore was fast enough to
encircle his arms around her
waist...he pretended to be lost in her
eyes...he remembered a scene from a
serial where the hero collides with a
girl and have a long eye lock...rathore
did same...n put on a romantic look on
his face...when the girl pushed him..
"hey mister dekh k nahi chal
sakte...apne aapko hero mat
samjho..." a fuming megha yelled
"oh miss dekh kar hi chal raha tha but
jaise he aapke chehre pe nazar padi
toh baki aab kuch dikhna band ho
gaya...well Iam sameer ...naam toh
suna he hoga...well u can call me
Sam..." rathore copied few lines of
shahrukh khan inorder to impress her.
"oye zyada shahrukh mat bano..tum
jaise boht ladke dekhne hain...ladki
dekho nahi ki chalu ho gaye..."she
said greeting her teeth.
"abh aap itni khubsurat hain ki aapko
dekhkar mere andar ka shahrukh
bahar aa Jata hai..he smiled cheekily.
"are aap party mein b kitaab lekar aayi
hain...mujhe b novels ka boht interest
hai..."said rathore thinking why she is
not getting trapped in his plan.
"haan boht interest hai novels
mein...woh novel padhi hai
aapne...meri sandle aur aapka
muh..."she said sarcastically.
Rathore got her hidden meaning but
chose to ignore it for the time being
and promised himself to take revenge
once her father is caught.
"waise beautiful dekho kitni romantic
susan hai...can I have the pleasure
to ...I mean can I have a dance with
u??" said rathore.
meanwhile whole ETF was hearing
rathore's convo n were having a good
time.
"Shree mein toh kehta hoon hame
lovelife mein b rathore sir ko apna
chief bana Lena chahiye...hamari love
life ko char chand lag
jayenge..."whispered chotu.
"Aap ko koi haq nahi banta ki aap ISS
qadar khubsurat deekhain ...kya aap
jantihain ki aapki aadaon se kitne log
Marjate hain.." said rathore.
"kya...!!!dusron ka toh pata nahi but
aap mujhse Mar jayenge ager aapne
aapni bakbak band nahi ki..." said
megha pointing her finger towards
rathore.
Rathore could hear Shree chotu n riya
giggling at the other end of ear piece.
He knew Arjun would be enjoying his
condition...Rathore sulked imagining
the smirk on arjun's face...
"no sameer...apne ander k rajput ko
jagao...ab Yeh tumhari izzat ka sawal
hai...ab is ladki ko patana he
padega...by hook or by crook..."he
promised himself"
"Are aap toh naraz he ho gayi..waise
ismein aapki b galati nahi hai...woh
kisi nekaha hai na...
KADAM CHUN CHUN K RAKHTI HAI
KAMAR BALKHAYI JATI HAI
KHUDA JAB HUSN DETA HAI NASAKAT
AAJATI HAI

...said rathore trying his best to
impress the girl in front of him.
"kya tum mera peecha nai
chodoge.???" asked megha looking
towards the man who looks descent
but his behavior resembled a roadside
Romeo..
"meine kaha na miss beautiful...sirf
ek dance..."said rathore hoping he
would pataofy her during the dance.
Rathore went quickly through the
vedio he had downloaded of a dance
sequence...n tried to remember the
steps where the boy tried to get close
to the girl. Soon they were on dance
floor and rathore pulled her close to
himself and slided his hand on her
waist...it was first time he was doing
such things...and he prayed for quick
end to this drama.
Meanwhile riya looked angrily towards
arjun n spoke "dekhiye rathore sir k
natal mein b kitni chemistry
hai...kitna natal bhara romance kar
rahe hain...aur ek aap hain...huh!!!"
Arjun was about to answer when he
saw Shree coming towards them"sir
Yeh Megha woh megha nahi hai" Shree
said with fear.
"kya??? saaf saaf bolo..."arjun noticed
Shree's fear.
Shree explained that dons daughter
hadn't come to party n rathore is
romancing a wrong girl and he had
enquired about the girl...n the girl is a
black belt.
"Shree jao aur rathore ko bhula k Lao
yahan jaldi" Arjun ordered


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shree went to rathore "sir mujhe
aapse
kuch kehna hai...zara idhar aaye"
"Shree tum jao tum kuch nai
jaante ...I
know mujhe kya karna hai..."said
rathore
who thought Shree came to give him
some tips on flirting n he wanted to
pataofy megha without anyones help.
shree went to arjun n explained that
rathore was not listening to anyone..
Something was stuck at megha's
shoulder ...rathore bent to remove
it...from far it appeared as if he was
kissing her shoulder...riya chotu n
Shreea
eyes poped out while arjun was
worried
for his friend.
"Yeh ek he din mein sameer rathore se
imran hashmi ban Chaka hai...koi ise
roko warna iska suspension koi nahi
rok
payega.." murmured arjun.
Meanwhile rathore looked towards
megha
to know her answer.
"theek hai dear...agar tum dad se
baath
karna chahte ho to kuch time ruko
acctually woh meeting main honge".
"acha haan drugs and arms kaise
supply
karte hain". asked rathore
"haan isi baare main" she said with a
smile. rathore laughed inwardly at
how he
was able to trick the girl...now he
would
talk with her father and get
information.
"bada aaya meeting attend karney
wala...murderer kahin ka...he
thought.
"acha Sam aapni hobbies k bare mein
batao na.." asked megha in a sweet
tone.
"mein bas yahi ...shoot karna...n
thodi
poetry"rathore said
"acha zara koi poem phir
sunao"megha
requested
"acha suno"he asked Shree to dictate
him
poem.
Shree looked at arjun
"ab kya keh raha hai Yeh imran
hashmi
ab.."arjun questioned
"sir ab woh ghalib bana chahte
hain"Shree explained
"Shree woh poem dictate karo jo hum
ne subah padha tha.." arjun winked
"okay "Shree winked back n began to
dictate while rathore started reciting

Dil Ka Dard Dil Torrne Waley Kiya
Jaaney
Pyar Ke Rivajon Ko Zamana Kiya
Jaaney
Hoti Hai Kitni Takleef Larrki Ko
Pataney Main
Ye Ghar Pe Baitha Larrki Ka Baap Kiya
Jaaney
?
Hai Tu Agar Mera Dilbar
Hai Tu Agar Mera Dilbar
To Aaj Ke Lunch Ka Bill Tu Bhar
Hum Guzre Un Ki Gali Se Ajab Ittefaq Tha
Hum Guzre Un Ki Gali Se Ajab Ittefaq Tha
Unhon Ne Phenka Hum Pe Phool
Lekin Gamla Bhi Saath Tha
?
Un Ki Gali Ke Chakkar Kaat Kaat Kar
Kutte Bhi Hamare Yaar Ho Gaey
Woh To Hamare Ho Na Sakey
Hum Kutton Ke Sardar Ho Gaey
?
Na Woh Inkaar Karti Hai
Na Woh Ikraar Karti Hai
Kambakhat Mere Hi Sapnon Main Aa Kar
Mere Dost Se Pyaar Karti Hai

"ha ha ...kya "megha started laughing.
"haso mat apne dad se baat karwona"
rathore requested

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acha theek hai...mein no. deti hoon
tum
call karo..********"megha gave him
no...
Arjun couldn't see his friend in such a
condition so he stepped to save him
while all ETF members followed him
giggling.
Rathoresaw arjun n said
"rawte tum is ladki ka cell phone chk
karo...tab tak mein iske Baap se baat
karta hoon"said rathore
Arjun wanted to stop him but before
he
could do that megha's father spoke at
other end.
"hello...kaun bol raha hai.."said the
man.
"tera baap...sameer rathore..."said
rathore smiling at his team to show
them
that he was successful at last..
"Sam bas karo..."arjun pleaded
"nahi rawte...aaj iske baap ka band
Bajaoun ha..."said rathore while
meghas
father spoke.
"sameer dhamsingh rathore...pichle
dino
rajhasthan Gaye the...apni akal b wahi
chod aaye kya...apne senior se is
tarah
baat karte hain bhool chuke ho
kya??"shouted meghas father.
"Tumhe mera pura naam kaise
pata..."said rathore suspiciously
"kyunki tumhari appointment meine
he
kar wayi thi...hum crime branch k
commissioner bol rahe hain...Mr
Singh"i nformed meghas father.
Rathore looked towards megha who
told
him that she is daughter of
commissioner..n knew how to settle
scores with roadside Romeos.
"Mein Tumhe yahi batana chahta tha
Sam
per tum pe toh imran hashmi ka bhoot
sawar tha.."said arjun little irritated.
Rathore was going to answer him
when
Mr Singh spoke
"kya huwa...jawab do rathore"
Rathore looked towards his team
murderously and they ran from there
& arjun knew rathore had a long
explaination to give so he left.
After an hours explaination rathore
was
able to convince commissioner of his
behavior.He went towards parking and
saw both the SUVs were gone.
"Yeh rawte mujhe imran hashmi keh
raha
hai...khud akela SUV mein riya k saath
jawani diwaani ki shooting kar raha
hoga.."
"Excuse me.."a female voice came
Rathore turned n saw megha smiling.
"chaliye mei aapko ghar chod deti
hoon
Sam...pehle mere saath chaliye..coffee
pite hain mere ghar pe...dad k
saath" said megha grinning.
"no thanks...mujhe kuch kaam
hai..."said
rathore and promising himself that he
would turn gabar Singh from imran
hashmi n wont leave his team...
[the end]

PLZ NO ANDA TAMATAR...
Shru n Sree thanks a lot for help
Edited by samiya.059 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayyy m first...;)
res..will edit tomorrow pakka

Edited ..


First of Sammy dear awesome concept total faadu hai ye sachi mai... 😆

Rathore was trying to impress Megha was more funnier...
kya yaar apne unhe roadside romeo hi bana diya tha hahHa...
absolutely loved it... gorgeously penned down.

Hayeee Rathore aur Emraan Hashmi 🤣 🤣 🤣 that completely made my day 🤣

and the end where Megha cals him for coffee Ufff I can't choose pura ka pura Os mujhe behat pasand aagya...
hum aapke dhasu dimaag aur writing ke fan baan gaye hai dear 😳
Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Too good..

Rathod & Emraan Hashmi...😆😆😆
bechara Rathod...
OMG so Megha is Co0mm. daughter...
Isiliye serial mai bhi Rathod Gabbar bana ghumta hai.😆😆😆😉.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sam again u rr back with os😊
OS k naam romance ka jatka 😉
arre va riya ne kaha rathord ko
"aapke jitna handsome shree aur chotu nahi hai"
to party mai do do megha hai 😉
arre va kya baat kar rahi magha na rathord se😆
aur novel to mari sandle aur aapka muh🤣
chotu want to love tips from rathord 😆
arjun bi na ek din mai rathord imran banana chahata hai🤣
baap re magha to commissinor ki baati nikali😆
bechara rathord buri tarahse pass gaya😆
i totaly loved this os
sam so well written 👏
Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Di awesum
superb wali os
truly loved it ah ah..
amazing..
title wow di
u rock!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey bhagwaan...!!! IMRAAN HASHMI!!! Hey bhagwaan... ladki patayi bhi to galat... bichaara Sameer
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Posted: 12 years ago
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EDITED**

superbly written sweetheart..loved every bit of it. It was damn hilarious 🤣 🤣.
Rathod is flirting to pataofy don's daughter thats too he impressed commussioner's daughter 🤣
Rathod se Imran Hashmi 🤣 Gabbar singh 🤣 jawani deewani ki shooting 🤣 OMG haste haste face pe pain ho raha hai & My mom was thinking I need to go to Asylum 😆
Superb concept dear,aapke dimaag me idea aate kahanse hai?? udhar do please 😛 & those 'truck ki piche wali sayari' god I am dead 🤢
awesome,superb,mindbiggling.
A huge hug to you sister.
Edited by -sree13- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres

Superb Samu...
Loved it...
It created a filmy mood...
😊
Edited by .9.Sara.9. - 12 years ago

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