SS :Mere Jeevansathi part 22 pg 38 SEPT 1 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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next part post karo na

me waiting
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PART 8
Purva's Maa tense. Purva also get tense , she like his mother , but she worried about him , she dn't know about him , she can't see him. she takes deep breath & close her eyes.
Here At Boy's house.
His Mother ask him "Sonu dekhi tune photo , kaise hai , pasand aayi na , to phone karu unhe , tu milega na use ??? " "Mom take a break , itne saare saval ek saath , ok i like her , par mujhe use milna hai & ek do baar , aur Maa aapne unhe mere bare mai bata diya na.?" he ask his mother. "Sirf thoda hi bata diya hai , sab kuch nhi. aaj hi tere Papa ke haatho se teri photo aur information de deti hue." She informes him. "Theek hai , tab aap hi bol do ki mujhe unse milna hai. " He tell his mother.
At Purva's Home
Purva helping her mother in kitchen. Suddenely her father come in & inform "Unke tarah se ha aayi hai , lekin ladka hamari Purva se milna chahta hai. Aur ha abhi uske Pitaji aa rahe hai uski photo aur information lekar. " "Kya abhi , Purva jaa tu jake taiyyar ho , kuch ache kapde pehen le ye jeans nahi chlegi." her mother inform him. After half hour his father come at her home & handed over photo & info in her father's hand. Purva bring them Tea with Bisciuts & snacks. She also take his blessings. and stand near sofa. Purva's father handed her photo & ask her to see it. She open big envelop & reads his info. She shock when she reads his name. "Hmm , na Purva naam ek jaisa ho sakta hai." she thinks to himself & again starts to read. She reads all info & understands yes its him , "no Purva , no he is not , but agar vahi hua to... nahi Purva ... " she thinks to herself & immeadtly see hold his photo & look at him. She cannot belive her eyes. She just look at him , he look perfect in black shirt , his eyes hold her gaze on him , his smile made her heart beat faster, Purva felt that she is falling down , for support she tightly hold sofa. After a minutes his father goes from there. Her mother come in front of her & ask "Tune photo dekhi , kaise hai ? theek to hai na? " Purva just look at her blankly & goes to her room. She can't register her mind , she got huge shock. she place her hand on her heart & feels her heart racing fastly. Suddenely somone hold her shoulder & she scared , " Purva kaha kho gyi thi , are maine kya pucha tujhe? " Her mother ask her angrily. Purva just give his photo to her , her mother sees it & says "Dekhne mai to acha hai , par pata nahi bartaav mai kaisa hai , acha sun tu jab milegi na , tab theek se baat kar use. " her mother informs her. Aur kal mil rahe ho tum dono vo THE ORCHIDS mai sham ko 8:00 baje , uski shooting hai , isiliye vo late aayega, aur ha khane se pehele sab kuch dekh lena , aaj kal ke ladko ka koi bharosa nahi. " "Aise kaise nahi Maa , bharosa hai na ... "Purva unknowgliyl says. "Tujhe photo dekh kar pata chala uske bare mai... "her mother ask her, Her father also see photo & says "Are maine dekha hai ise , T.V per , acha kaam kar leta hai."
Here Shaleen's Home
Next dy he follow his routine , his mother give him new set of instructions, "Dekh kuch ulta seedha mat bol , ladki achi hai , jyada has mat , varna sochegi ki tu pagal hai , aur ha teri filmo ki baate mat kar , lekin teri saari baate uske saamne rakh , aur ha nervous nahi hona , kuch help lagi to mujhe call kar. " Shaleen just look at his Dad, "Are o , mera beta jaanta hai ki use kya karna hai , vo koi school admission ke interview ke liye nahi jaa raha hai samaz gayi." His mother nodded & goes from there. Shaleen also go to his work
Finally after lot of thinking & blushing Purva wears white colour anarkali dress with blue border . She reaches Hotel at 7:40pm. She gets nervous. She stands near gate & frequtly look at her watch . At 7 : 45 she decides go to inside , because all look at her . At sharp 8:00pm he enters & searches for her , his gaze stop at her , he look at her & smile crept on his lips. Purva gets nervous & look here & there. Suddenely he come infront of her & said "Hi " She lift her head & sees , he stading there. White shirt with blue jeans, he is smiling , he forwards his hand , Purva justy look at him . So , he withdraw his hand back. Shaleen signals her to seat , Purva nooded & take seat.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Meri waat laga di

shaleen ka rishta ...he bhagwaan

i m blushing badly ..imagine kar karke

d first dinner date

n i m thinking about him


Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago
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PART 8 (b)
They seat & look at each other & look here & there , Purva start to play with duptta while Shaleen play with his fingers. Sudeenely Shaleen says , "Vo hame andar chale , vaha andar bhi kuch seats hoti hai , yaha sab log... " he stops when Purva look at her. She nooded & they change place , Now they entered into small room with only 4 to 5 seats there , They choose corner seat & seats there. "Are u comfortable now?" Shaleen ask Purva in slow tone. Purva just nodded . "Aaj tumhara mounvrat hai?" he ask her to change atmosphere. Purva look at him & ask him "Nahi to , par aapko aisa kyu laga.?" "Vo tum kuch bol hi nahi rahi thi , aur Maa ne to kaha tha... " he start to atlk but suddenely Purva interrput him "Maine us din bahut kuch bol diya hai na , mai bahut bolti hue. " she ask him . Shaleen just smile at her & says "Nahi Maa to aap se badi khush hai. " Waiter comes there to take order , they both look at each other "Bhaiyya baad mai aana." Shaleen request him. "Amm , menu decide kare?" he ask her . "Ha" she ans him. he give to Menucard to her . she take it & starts to read , Suddenely she look at him & founds he check his mobile , must be msgs she thought. & ask him in slow tone "vo aap kya khaynge?" " kuch bhi , vaise mai jyada bahar ka nhi khata." he informed her. "mai bhi nahi .. " They orderd food, Food yet to come , but both parties are silent , no one talk to each other. Suddenely he call her , "Purva " "hmm " she give response him . "Vo kuch kehena tha ... " he starts to spaek. "Ji boliye na..." she says him.
Shaleen : Tume shayd janti ho mujhe , matlab T.V pe tumne mujhe dekha hoga.
Purva : ha. dekha hai , mai aapki serial bhi dekhti hue , ek bhi epi miss nahi karti. ( she informed him like a excitede fan)
Shaleen : (smile little ) Thx. Purva vo mai ye kehena chahta ki , mari life tumhare saamne hai , kab khaata hue , sota hue , ghar aata hue , iska koi time nahi hota . Do din chutti hoti hai usme mai ghar jaata hue , ya phir ghar mai sota reheta hue , agar hamari shadi ho bhi gayi to mai tumhare saath har time nahi reh sakta , means my profession not allowed me to do so. Mera jo kuch bhi hai sab is career ke karan , aur mere sapne bhi bade hai , tum in sab ke saath adjust kar sakti ho ?
Purva : Mai ye jaanti hue , halki meri life bhi aapki life jaise hi hai , kaam ke shifts , har month shift change hoti hai. aur ghar aati hue to kuch banakar kha leti hue , aur chutti ke din to sab kuch aaram se. Isiliye mai samaz sakti hue aapki life ko.
Shaleen : Purva , tumhe pata hai mai bhi clg mai smart tha , kisi ko bhi nahi laga ki mai line chnge kar dunga , par mujhe ek mauka mila aur maine sab badal diya. aur mai khush hue jo mai kuch kar raha hue isme , lekin mujhe aur bhi aage jana hai.
Purva : (smile at him) Jee janti hue.
Shaleen : (look at her with smile ) tum to sab janti ho mere bare , homework karke aayi ho ?
Purva : ( also starts to smile , she smile from heart)
Shaleen just llok at her & lost in her smile. But she stop , Shaleen look here & there & sees waiter is coming to serve their food. They start to eat their food.
Shaleen : Tum apne bare mai kuch bata do.
Purva : mere bare... (she think ) hmm ha ... mai bahut baat karti hue , aur ha mai ghussa bhi hoti hue . aur mujhe khana bana na aata hai , sab tradition pata hai.( she inform him innocently.)
Shaleen : Hmm intersting , to tum bahut bolti ho. acha hai ... Mai bahut jaldi ghussa ho jata hue , khana bana sakta hue , ghar saaf kar sakta hue , aur...
Suddenly Purva starts to cough badly. She choked her food. Shaleen immedatly goes to near her & caressing her back slowly, she fearly hold his hand tightly. Shaleen help her to drink water, she slowly drinks water. She takes deep breath & look at Shaleen who seat very close her , she look at him , he also look at her , both lost in each other, Purva lower her gaze & found she hold his palm tightly . Suddenely she felt he touch her , he removes her hair that comes in front of her face & tuck it behind her ear slowly. She shivers & look at him "Vo... " Shaleen immeadtly leaves her hand & ask her "Are u ok?" She nooded in yes. They exchange their views while enjying their dinner. After dinner he ask her that he is coming to drp her home. She nodded happily. Now he drive car & Purva give him address. Now they both talk freely , They laugh with each other , she felt happy , don't know but her tension about her life partner is vanishes in air. He is so understanding & down to earth. They reaches her hom. Purva bid by bye & starts to walk towards her building suddenely she hears he call her , she turn around , he is coming there & says her "Purva tum achhi ladki ho , mere bare mai sab kuch jan ne ke baad kya tum rishte ke liye ready ho?" Purva ans him "Ha mai ready hue , mujhe acha laga ki aapne mujhe sab kuch bata diya , sab clear kar diya taki baad mai koi problem na ho , aap bade ache insaan hai , bilkul bhi garv & ego nahi hai aap mai , sach kahu to mai bhi aisa hi partner chahti thi , jo mere man ko samaze , aur aap bilikul vaise hai jaise mai chahti thi. " "To mai ye rishta ,,, " Shaleen ask her slowly. "Pakka samaz lijiye... " she complete his sentence. Shaleen just happily hug her , she gets shy to hold him back she just hold her dress tightly & closes her eyes happily , she smells his scent , she feel so secure in his strong arms . She feel he kiss her hair & bend down , her heart skips beat , he slowly whispers in her ears , "Thx Purva , so Good Night my would be wife.." And parted from her . Purva blushes hardly. Shaleen turn & start to go , when Purva call him "Suniye ... " he stop in his track. "ghar peheunchne ke baad call kijiye. dheere gadi chalna." she order him . "ok kar dunga." he leaves & Purva comes her home.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Am simply lost !!!

Uff... U n ur storiess... They always give goosebumps...
Apke stories padhke dil asha jagti h ki fans v apne star k life partners ban sakte h...

Wowww... Sooo romanticcc...

Bb... U.ok na :-P pani du ??? :-P :-P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
nice update
loved all the parts
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Di grt..
shaleen ji
n purva di superb pair
purva di wid shaleen ji both rock..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey Purva
apki to lottery lag gayi.😉
awesome update.
continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@BB : haan ..paani chahiye

@Manali di: i m lost while reading ur story ...OMG had a big ear to ear smile ☺️ ❤️ ☺️

i read part B ...thoda thoda karke ...

i cant read it ek saath ..i mean ...ek saath read karti to kahin heart attack na aa jaata

Awesum ..☺️ ❤️ ☺️ ❤️ ☺️ ❤️

☺️ ❤️ ☺️ ❤️ ☺️ ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Woww!!
Kya update tha...First meet😳
Sooo cutee😳
Update jaldii

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