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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Superb update... beautifully written... the silent convo b/w Ariya was amaingly written... update soon...

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Kitna emotional tha😭

Dard hi dard tha😭

and Riya had to run away to cry😭

Lovely and nicely portrayed, please continue😊

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Sadiya.67

@Sadiya.67

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

awesome di
kya likha hai...am in love with dis ss
thanks for pm

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

👏👏 Awesme

Poem bhi ekdum mast thi..

You potryed their thinks very well , plz update soon.

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

fantastic update :) loved it

feeling bad for riya 😭

loved the silent conversation between ariya... very well written

poem was beautiful :)

eagerly waiting to know what happened in the past

update soon

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

nice
poor ariya
eagerly w8ing to know what happened in the past
cont soon

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: funkylicious

res

waiting dear ...

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

nice part...

wt happened in past...

cont soon...

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@Wj.mad

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

amazing dear
do arjun nd riyd have a bad past
but definately they'll have a bright future

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

"gham se tareek lamhoun mei be
Tumhari yaadoun ki shama dil mei jala kar rakhi
Ek na ek din meri baat utregi tumhare dil mei
yeh jeene ke liye umeed kafi the..."

absolutely touching line. infact the whole verses was so touching I got emotional reading them. 😳 😳 what should I tell I am absolutely overfilled with the magical poems,too good they were as everytime 👏 👏 the secret past of their life was pulling my interest more to it. What happened in their past?? I couldn't imagine that Arjun betrayed her or its just a MU. Well for that I am eagerly loiking for the story to procced 😊

Happy V week dear. Continue soon my energy booster. Love you 🤗 🤗

p.s. for the late reading & commenting I definitely know you will accept my appology 😛

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