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Part 1

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13th February

8:00 pm

Trinity Road

Thank you so much ACP Sir. I can't imagine what would have happened if ETF did not reached on time. Thank you again! said Isha nervously.

No need to thank us. It is our duty to help people, rathore said with a reassuring smile.

Thank you Sir.You are such a Gentle-Man! She said giving a sweet smile.

Color drained from his face and he stood there still for a moment. It has been 5 years since that incident''I still get goose bumps every time I recall that incident.

Sir? Sir? Are you okay? She asked worriedly on seeing sudden change in his expression.

Yy-yeah I am fine'he stammered. He composed himself and said, it's getting quite late now your parents must be concerned about you. Shree! He called.

Yes Sir..shree came towards his direction.

Drop isha home..he said.

Yes sir..shree replied. Shall we Ma'am?

She nodded and they sat in the car and left.

I walked toward my car. Got in grabbed a bottle of water and Gulped it.

I glanced around acknowledging the fact that it is the same place sending shivers down my spine.

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5 years ago

14th February

6:00 am

Sameer's home



Daily Horoscope

Pisces: This will be an energetic week and you will forge ahead with great zest. You will make progress in all spheres ' power, finances and progress will all be yours. Ganesha says the stars are conspiring in your favour, and you will get the much needed love and support from your family members, friends and relatives. On the professional front, you will now reap the benefits of your past labours. Romance, too, is on the cards, and you will experience true love, the highest of all emotions in which you are totally oblivious of yourself or your interests and just concerned about the happiness and well being of the person you love to the exclusion of everything else.


I shake my head in disbelief. Romance ya right!


Okay , now don't give me those judgmental looks. I'm not a "Jaane kyu log pyaar karte hain" types but again I don't believe in love. Why?


Because I don't know what being in love feels like. I grew up in a family without love. My mother left me and my father when I was 5 . But I always wonder what being in love feels like'..


-Beep_


The phone rang breaking my chain of thoughts. I glanced at my blackberry and smirked.


-Beep-


1 new text message.

It read-

Hi sameer..abhi khadoos se baat hui'usne kahan aaj hume mall mein duty karni hogi aaj v-day ki wajah se waha kafi rush hoga aur celebrities bhi hoge. So City Mall @ 10 a.m!

Mall? Seriously?

Sometimes I doubt am I a police officer or a bodyguard?

These early days are definitely going to be unforgettable!

I kept my phone on the table and made my way towards the room to get ready.


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City Mall

9:45 am

I entered the mall. It was decorated in pink and white theme. The Baby pink and white fabric covered the ceilings and the walls. The escalators were decorated with the streamers and fairy lights and different shapes of balloons coordinating with the theme were scattered on the floor.


God the crowd is huge!


Looks like the whole city is here I sighed and walked towards my colleagues who was standing near a mobile store.


We were dressed in casuals so as to mingle with the crowd and to keep a watch on the activities. We divided our duties and went to our respective area covering the whole mall.


I reached the 1st floor and started scanning the area quietly.


11:00 am


Sitting in the cafe and sipping my cappuccino. I could see a bunch of youngsters sitting and enjoying, teasing each other..a smile crept on my lips remembering my training days. We were the most notorious one's in our batch. Always on the hit list of our major, but he was not able to catch us red-handed ever I chuckled softly, I looked around a lot of activities were going on..


Hello guys!


How is everybody feeling?


Greaaattt'.the people answered.


Okay, as we know we are here to celebrate Valentine's day with our special someone'he said with a smile. Guys we have arranged few games for you people so who would like to volunteer for our first game?


Come on guys'aisa mauka phir nahi milega, he winked.


Us! A girl screamed.


A girl and a boy from the group got up and walked in the host's direction.


My attention got diverted when I heard a sweet voice. I turned and what I saw made my heart skip a beat...<3


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8.2 seconds'.

Yes!

It takes 8.2 seconds to fall in Love-at-first site!

The moment I laid my eyes on her I knew this is it. I don't know how but I have this strong sensation rising in my chest making my brain go numb.

This is love'and this feeling'.it feels'.it feels like'..I am alive!

I was shamelessly staring at her. If she saw me staring at her she is definitely going to take me as a crazy stalker. Thankfully, she didn't.

Sir? Sir?? The waiter said.

Yeah? I almost shouted. Making heads turn to look at me.


I apologized and asked him what is the matter?

Sir, I just came to ask would you like to order anything? he replied.

Um..yeah one coffee please..thank you I said.

Sir? Which one hot or cold? He asked.

Hot , I replied feeling frustrated and then turning my attention towards the girl.

Sir? We have added some new cookies in the menu would you like to try them? He asked beamingly.

I gave him a "look" and he literally ran away.

Ahhh!

It feels as if I could watch and adore her for the rest of my life.

There she was sitting next to next my table. She was wearing a white off shoulder dress with a baby pink shrug. She was fair in complexion and had sharp features. Her eyes are very attractive. Her hair, they were mid-length dark brown in color flowing over her shoulder. She was engrossed in a book and she carefully tucked a lock of hair behind her ear which was disturbing her and sipped her coffee.


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Host: Guys, we are done with our games I hope everybody enjoyed.

It happens sometime we have so much to tell to the person we love but we feel hesitant. I know many of you want to confess you feeling to your special someone. Hold nothing back guys!

As they say, "kya pata kal ho na ho".

Anybody? He asked.

I raised my hand and as he announced the room was filled with applauses and people cheering me.

*POP*

Congratulation sameer! You have officially lost it a voice in my head said.

Shut up! Don't listen to him, just go on! Another voice said.


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Her attention drifted from the book due to the sudden chaos.

I started walking toward the dais and took the guitar which was kept near the dais. The guy handed me the mic.

Hello everybody.Wishing everybody a very Happy Valentine's Day. My name is Sameer. I am going to sing the song Haal-e-dil. I paused for a while. Okay so, this song is dedicated to the pretty girl in white' 😳

She looked up at me in confusion. I smiled at her innocent beauty. Our eyes locked, and she gave me a smile which made my heart melt and then she looked away shyly.

Hey kaash, kaash yun hota
Har shaam saath tu hota
Chup-chap dil na yun rota
Har shaam saath tu hota

Guzara ho tere bin guzara ab muskil hai lagta
Nazara ho tera hi nazara ab har din hai lagta...

She looked at me I looked at her but this time she didn't look away. She has those perfect eyes. The eyes to die for!

She had a lot of depth in her eyes. As they say eyes are the mirror of the soul, I could reach her soul through them. Though she was smiling all the time but I could see pain in her eyes which is piercing her heart.

Hale dil tujhko sunata
Dil agar yeh bol pata
Bakhuda tujhko hai chahta jaan..


Tere sang jo pal bitaata
Waqt se main woh maang laata
Yaad karke muskuraata haan
Woo oo oo ..


The people were hooting and applauding. I could see more people coming in the caf hearing me singing. But the only thing that mattered that time was "she".


You're the one
Our love what is meant to be.
I know you feel it too when I look at you....


Khwaabon ka kab tak loon sahara.
Ab toh tu aaja khudaraaa...
Meri yeh dono paagal aankhein...

My eyes were on her.


Har pal maange tera nazara.
Aa samjaun inko kis tarah.
Inpe mera bas nahin chalta haan.

Haal e dil tujhko sunata.
Dil agar yeh bol pata.
Bakhuda tujhko hai jata jaan.

She got up and started walking towards the door. Paused at the door for a moment and walked away without looking back.

I was taken aback. What happened? Didn't she like the song? Why did she walk away?


She didn't even look back once'..


Tere sang jo pal bitata.
Waqt se main woh maang lata.
Yaad karke muskuraata haan.
Woo oo...


I hurriedly finished the song and made my way through the crowd. I came out of the caf and looked around .I saw her getting down the escalator and she nearly reached the exit. I followed her but by the time I reached the exit she had already left the mall.


Damn it!


It feels like that feeling when you are this close of getting something you love and but you just lose it.

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Sam'Sam''..Sameer a man shouted. I turned back to look at the person.


Sameer:[surprised] Arjun! Tu yahan? I hugged him.


Sameer: Kaisa hain yaar?


Arjun:[merrily] Main theek hu yaar tu bata?


We broke the hug.


Main bhi..aur bata roshni bhabhi kasie hain? I asked teasingly.


Madam bhi theek hain..he answered with a grin.


Aur yeh dukaan leke kahan jaa raha hain? I chuckled softly.


Aaj valentine's day hain na bas roshni ke liye thodi shopping kar raha tha..he replied.


We stared at each other for a while and then burst out laughing. Arjun's life has indeed changed after his marriage with roshni. Who can tell he is the same guy who once didn't even care to give a damn and now look at just him. I couldn't help but smile at my friend.


Saale! Has mat tere bhi din aayge..he said with a smirk.


I wish mere yeh din bhut jald aaye..I murmured dreamily.


Kuch kahan tune? He asked feeling confused.


Kuch nahi, I said feeling amused. 1 ghanta nahi hua mile hue aur yeh haal I wondered.


Chal ab main jata hu roshni ghar pe wait kar rahi hogi and then he left.


Leaving a utterly bewilder Sameer behind.


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Edited by Sinner.gurl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Already read it... It's amazing do cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful pls continue n dont forget to comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey it is wounderful update
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome..
a girl sending shivers on rathore's spine😉
wud lyk to know the incident..
"jane kyu log pyar krte hai"😛
imaging rathore's voice😉
v-day mei mil gai'voh'😉
update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds Intersting , plz PM me.
All D Best For ur New & First wrk.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its amazing...
do cont. soon...😊
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hey continue res...
thanks fr PM
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Originally posted by: Samaira32

Already read it... It's amazing do cont soon...




Thank you for reading! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kgmu86

wonderful pls continue n dont forget to comment




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