SS:Officer(DISCONTINUED)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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*Siren* *Siren* *Siren*
The ambulance rushed in the entrance of LILAVATI HOSPITAL

As the door opened...the staff hurried away the strecher into the emergency deptt.
A man along with the patient kept pace wid them
"Move faster..call the.doctor""

"kya hua...whats d case?"asked the doctor who just arrived

"Xzora 2 poisning doctor...kuch kariye"

"Is ka to koi ilaaj nahi h"said d doctor

The man grabbed doctor's collar nd said"kaise doctor h aap...kuch kare bina aap ye kaise keh skte h"
Doctor-dekhiye...baat smjhiye
""Mai kuch nahi jaanta...aapko ise theek krna hi hoga..samje ya..."he continued while gripping his collar more tightly

"Ye kya kr rhe ho raute...pagalpan band kro..."the another man said while pulling him away

"Nahi rathore..riya ko bachana hi hoga"

Rathore-doctor sahab...mai inki tarf se maafi mangta hu..par pllz riya ko bacha lijiye...kuch to kariye. Kuch bhi..

"Thik h...nurse...inhe andar le chalo"
Arjun started goin wid them when doctor said"aap andar nahi aa skte"

"Lekin.."

"Raute...unhe apna kaam krne do...docsaab aap plz jaldi jaiye""

Rathore-raute apne gusse pe control krna sikho...us doctor ka collar pakadne ki kya zarurat thi..tumhari yehi harkatei...tumhe ek din bahut badi musibat mei dlwaengi..
Tum ek bahut ache officer ho..lekin apna temprament badlo..warna ye bahut bura hoga..

Arjun-acha officer... Kis hak se muje acha officer keh rhe ho tum rathoore..

Mai sirf criminals pakad skta hu...apno ko bacha ni skta..

Rathore stared at him wid a blank face
Arjun cntinued
"Kis kaam ka officer hu mai...jo riya ko waha bacha nahi paya...muje waha khade hoke bilkul waisa mehsus ho rha tha jaise tab hua tha jab sikander roshni ko maar rha tha...ekdum bebas lachar...kuch ni kr paya...na tab..na ab"

He said with pain nd anger noticable on his face
Rathore-raute...suno...

Their talk was interupted by doctor
"Suniye"
Arjun-doctor..riya kaise h..vo thik to ho jaegi na..

Doctor-dekhiye...abhi kuch examinations baaki h...uske baad hi mai kuch keh skta hu
Nd he went away
Arjun was about to stop him when rathore put his hand on his shoulder to stop him

Just then shree nd chotu walked in
Shree-sir..kya hua...riya kaise h
Chotu-kya hua...kuuch bolie...arjun sir rathore sir

Rathore-abhi kuch keh ni skte

Arjun-riya ko kuch nahi hoga..mai use kuch ni hone dunga...
He walked away

Shree-arjun sir ko kya hua?
Chotu-pata nahi... :-/

After some tym
Doctor-mr.arjun mr.rathore
He called out both of them
Rathore-yes doctor..bataiye..kya hua

Doctor-ek achi news h..aur ek buri bhi

Rathore-achi news kya h?
Doctor-jo bacteria riya ji ne khaya h...vo attenuated form.mei tha...matlab ki weakened form mei..to atleast unki jaan ko
koi khatra nahi h!

They were but a bit relieved but then arjun spoke up
Arjun-aur buri khabar?

Doctor-us bacteria ne unki jaan to nahi li par unki voluntary muscles ke actin myosin proteins ko degenerate kr dia h...aam bhasha mei bole to..muscle weakness to shayad ab vo apna field job na kr.paye

Arjun was taken aback..her last works before fainting echoed in his mind

"Sir..maine apna last case solve kr dia h"
He just went away fron there...

"Riya...riya...tumne ye kya kia..."

"Sir'"!!
Arjun turned around to see shree nd chotu standing there

Arjun-tum dono?
Shree(speakin hesitatingly)-sir..plzz jo b hua aap apne aaap ko doshi mat samjhiye...aapne apne duty nibhai

Arjun-aur riya ka kya?
Chotu-usne b wahi kia...jiski usne oath.li thi..desh ki suraksha..
Arjun-mai use hamesha kehta rha...research desk wapis.chali jao..huh..par vo nahi maani...aur ab...jab etf ko us jaise officer ki sakht jarurat h...vo...ab

Shree-sir...uski condition pe maine dhunda h...iska ilaaz h sir...ye sirf ek temporary condition h...shayd mahine...ya saal!!

Arjun-saal!!
Shree-sir...bacteria ne jo damage kia h..use regenrate hone mei tym to lagega..but ye jrur thik ho jaega sir...vishwas rakhiye
Chotu-yes sir...aur use therapy ke sath sath moral support ki bhi zarurat h..jo hamare elava use.koi.ni de skta

Shree-yes sir...chotu is right...usne is desh ke liye itna bada kadam uthaya...to hamara farz banta h..ek dst ke naate...ek deshwasi hone ke naate ki uski madad kare

Just then rathore enters
Rathore-shree bilkul sahi keh rha h..hum riya ko theek krke rhenge
Kyu raute?

Arjun(with his victorious smirk)-statiscally speakin...isme hum 100%sucesful honge

With that all foure of them walk away
Etf tune playin in bg

Precap-ria gains consiousness


Ok...just to lighten up d mood...nd i was so busy...so cudnt rply to all my fav ff/os/ss
Will do it by tomm for sure


Plz tell how u find it..
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DivineDarkness thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great yar... hope dis happen in serial too... with Sana plyn Riya... otherwise i dnt care...continue dis one soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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padhke bht bht bht happy hue yar wish esa h hooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i loved rawte's pagalpan

apno ko baccha nhi skta..aww..my arjun 😭


lol..tere ye medical terms me to samajh jaugi..m too a med graduate..bt baakiyo k liye ise itna complicate kyu kiya ;)


m waitng eagerly 4 ur nxt update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dear please someone post this to cv or groky so they can copy this and go through this...

gosh
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was really nice yr...really needed such stuff to read to cheer up...i just hope something of this sort happens in the show too😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc I lreally like it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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finger crossed hope this may happen in show
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very Nyc Sweety...
really Arjun is d best...
plz continue & plz PM me whn u update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is a really good way to keep riya and sana both in the show and i hope the cvs do something similar to this. well written :)

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