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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008


u can narrate the story in English but please dialog has to be Hindi...


i love it...

ok...if u say..i will write the dialogs in hindi only!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

ok...here is the first part...enjoy and don't forget to leave comments..!

Part-1

A sudden light fell on pari's face as arjun removed the curtains. She pulled her blanket over her face. Her room was luxurious. She had everything in her room which she wanted. Arjun went to her bed and sat next to her. he removed the blanket from her face)

Arjun- beta….get up now! Its time to school.

Pari- uhmmm…plzz mama….just 5 more minutes..

Arjun(with a teasing smile)- I know how long those 5 minutes actually mean pari.

Pari- (sitting up and hugging arjun)- ok mama…! Good morning by the way!

Arjun(kissing her on her forehead)- good morning my dear..! now get ready as fast as possible.!go!

Pari went to the bathroom and arjun called the maids to do the preparations to get pari dressed up for school.

Then he went out to the large living room where shree was busy with a small appliance. He had opened it completely and was trying to do something with the parts.

Arjun- kya karr rahe ho shree? Phir se kuch tod diya?

Shree(with a smile)- no bhai….mai toh bass ek new type of gadget bana raha tha…mai aapko bataoon isse kya hota hai!

Arjun- rehne do!

Arjun sat on the sofa and started reading the newspaper.

Shree- kya hua bhai..aap itne chup kyu hai?

Arjun kept the newspaper down and looked at shree.

Arjun- riya mukharjee….! Jaante ho tum use?

A sweet smile crept on shree's face. He kept his gadget on the table, took a pillow on his lap and placed his elbows on it and hands on his cheeks as if he was going to start a long gossip.

Shree- aap bhi jaante hain use?? Seriously?!!

Arjun rolled his eyes.

Arjun- haan shaayad maine uska naam suna hai.

Shree- tabhi toh!!! Agar aap usse mile hote toh kabhi use bhool nahi paate. She is sooo beautiful and charming!

Arjun- tum kaise mile usse?

Shree- kal vo saamne vaale park me aayi thi.vo abhi-abhi Mumbai aayi hai….just few days back.!

Arjun- oh! Kya jaante ho tum uske baare me!?

Shree- yahi ki she is very beautiful and cute!

Arjun- toh kya tum…….i mean….tum aur vo….

Shree- no! no! humaare beech vaisa kuch nahi hai…filhaal we are just friends.

Arjun- and what about the future?

Shree- I hope ki future me vo mere saath date pe jaaye!

Arjun- oh god! Tum bhi na shree…

Shree - aap abhi unse mile nahi hai na…..ek baar usse mil ke toh dekhiye

Arjun- theek hai. tum use kal dinner pe bula sakte ho.

Shree- sach me???? You have no problem with that?

Arjun- nope! I think mai usse milna chahta hoon.!

Shree- wow! Greate!..mai aaj usse phone pe bol doonga..!

Arjun- oh….toh usne tumhe apna number bhi de diya?

Shree- haan.

Arjun thought how cheap that woman is who gave her number to a boy whom she had met just few minutes before. Then he thought may be her intention was to trap shree and then use all his money to fulfill her own needs. Arjun had heard bad about her. in his view she was a bad girl, a selfish girl who used to think only about herself and nothing else.

Arjun- mai bahar jaa raha hoon 'sultan' ke saath! I think he need some refreshment!

Shree- cool bhai.

Sultan was arjun's horse. Arjun had many horses but sultan was his favorite. Arjun opened the door and saw that sultan was already having a rider. Arjun had a large garden with all kinds of flowers. His bungalow looked more like a mansion. Arjun walked out and went to sultan. The rider was a sweet girl who had worn a long top with tights, her hairs open and she was smiling at arjun.

Arjun went to her. she jumped down from the horse, kissed him and said-"bye dear", then she went to arjun and almost hung on him to hug him. Arjun kept few steps back due to the forceful and tight hug. But he was used to it.

Arjun(breaking the hug)- samara…. Tum bhi na!!!!(with a soft smile)

Samara(with a blush face)- arjun sir…!!!!! I love you!!!!! You are sooo sweet!!!!

Arjun- ok! Abb kya kiye maine?

Samara- kal aapne mere liye vo mera favorite vaala teddy bheja….!! ohhh thankyou sooo much..!!!

she went ahead to hug him again but arjun held her hands softly and kept her away.

Samara- theek hai! theek hai! mai aapko aur tang nahi karoongi, but really sir….you are a sweetheart!

Arjun- jaake shree ko thanks bolo. Usne hi kaha tha ki tumhe market me ek teddy pasand aaya hai. and shree wanted ki rathore se pehle mai tumhe vo teddy gift karoon.

Samara- awww shree….! Vo kaha hai?...andar hi hoga…I am going….bye!

Arjun- bye (smiled)

Arjun rode on sultan to the nearby park area. On reaching the park he landed down on the soft grass and took sultaan throughout the garden as if arjun was walking with his friend and chatting with him. Nobody was there in the garden at that time. He reached a nearby pond. He was shocked to see a girl sitting on the grass with her legs inside the water. The girl was wearing a long kurta and her jeans was folded up. She had long hairs and her face was so cute that it melted arjun's heart a little. she is indeed gorgeous., thought Arjun. But he knew who she was and the image which he had formed of her was way different from how she looked and he always tried to fix her bad image to the good face which she had.

Arjun- Miss Mukharjee?

The girl was startled and she looked at arjun. She fixed her gaze on the handsome personality standing in front of her. his strong body was clearly visible through his white shirt and the few opened upper buttons were revealing his muscular figure very well. She was amazed at his look.

Riya- yes? Do I know you?

Arjun- no you don't! but mai tumhe jaanta hoon.!

PRECAP: riya at arjun's mansion for dinner.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
intresting
poor shree...ek to bechara gadget bana rha tha,,,aur arjun ne use chuo kara diaaa..lol
shree d riya!!??!!!...hmm
precap sounds very intrestinng...pllz update soonn
already addicted
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: sweetdoc

intresting

poor shree...ek to bechara gadget bana rha tha,,,aur arjun ne use chuo kara diaaa..lol
shree d riya!!??!!!...hmm
precap sounds very intrestinng...pllz update soonn
already addicted

thnks...😊 u really liked it? wow! i am so happy!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: rimss19

thnks...😊 u really liked it? wow! i am so happy!😳

not only liked but loved it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
aww this was such a cute update😛.. loved the bond Rawte shares with his niece.. so lovable!😳
and shree is always adorable.. my gadget geek😉
ooh la la😆.. arjun meeting riya at the park.. hope to see a beautiful conversation among them😃
n the precap sounds awesome hun.. do update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: _mahi_

aww this was such a cute update😛.. loved the bond Rawte shares with his niece.. so lovable!😳

and shree is always adorable.. my gadget geek😉
ooh la la😆.. arjun meeting riya at the park.. hope to see a beautiful conversation among them😃
n the precap sounds awesome hun.. do update soon😃

😊 thanks for liking my update...i am glad u liked it. there is much more coming in the next part. i will try and update as soon as possible.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
gud update
next part update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Wat's wid riya's past tht arjun has such ill feelings for her...
Plz update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
awsome part plz continuee 👏👏🤗

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