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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan.

wow...


that was amazing !

m so happy with this long update :)

starting of with the first scene, i never expected shamara scene and shree being all romantic types :o

i thought shree liked riya and was impressed by her cuz of the way he said "i thought its a date"

but that was totally opposite, i was so surprised !

and ariya scene , that was just mind blowing n amazing !

riya sleeping in his arms was too cute...just love these little cute scenes between them😳

and riya , awww poor girl had such a horrible past😭

but that guy

it would be real fun to see him like a psycho obsessive kinda lover who at first didn't want to marry her but turned into a completely opposite of this

That would be too thrilling !

would love to see riya still being stalked by that guy

and update soon :)

yes, the first scene might have been surprising and it was the same for samara as well😆. see, shree and samara are childhood friends and they are in love but they don't accept it or they haven't realized it. so shree keeps doing these things to tease samara. and shree was just impressed by riya and he wanted to go on a date with her, he was not falling for her, because riya is 4-5 years elder to him. he was just infatuated by her.
and your idea of psycho lover 😆 is really interesting. i will include this surely😊.
and thnks for such a detailed review, i love when some1 gives me such comments...😳 thnku sooo much😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008


SHMARA ...huva chokra jawan re...hai shree itna romantic kya baat hai...bade bhai ke naksho kadam pe chal raha hai...shamara pehli baar dar gayi jo sab ko darati hai...😆









Ariya... romance...mein to mar gayi...koi doctor ko to bulao...

hey lekin riya ka past so horrible ...poor girls she was in hell...

i feel so bad for riya that arjun still doubting on her why...


god ... precap is so interesting dear...

OMG!!!😃😃😃 thnkuuu sooo muchhh!!!!!🤗
even i feel bad for riya...bechari...but that's how arjun's gonna develop something-something for her..!! and when arjun falls for riya "officially" 😆 then surely he will give her so much love that she will come out of her pain. arjun is still doubting on her becoz he has heard too much about her in these years..too many bad things...bechaari riya, abb vo kaise bataaye arjun ko ki usne vo sab kyu kiya tha😭 but still arjun is soon gonna fall for her...!😳
thnku sooo much again and i love your comments😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnku so much 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
absolutely loved the ff...story line is quite different...soaked in Ariya romance...thats what makes it all the more an interesting read!!!
cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww the last part was so emotional😳.. he went to her house.. ahm ahm ..😉
n he even consoled her when she got scared in the dark😊
true hero he is!😳
and loved their little conversation about her past
angad ka bacha..😡 riya ko maarta tha🤢
cant wait till arjun beats him up 😆 hopefully 😆
do update soon dear.. ooh la la..romantic song 😉 m excited😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey all...here is the next chapter...enjoy and thnks for the comments😃
CHAPTER-5

Arjun made riya sit on the chair and he sat next to her. he served the food for both. Arjun was not thinking about anything related to his tough and reserved guy reputation, he was just flown away in his emotions and he was trying his best to make riya happy. He himself was confused why he was making that person happy whom he hated the most.

Riya- mr rawte….khaana is very nice….

Arjun- thankyou riya…😊

After they had had their food they went to the living room and ate some deserts. Riya was about to go and settle the kitchen but arjun held her hand.

Arjun- ruko riya…

Riya- haan?

Arjun- tumhaare shelf me maine kuch music ki CDs dekhi.tumhe vo pasand hai na?

Riya- haan mr rawte…

Arjun went and played one of the CDs and a romantic music started.they were just looking at each other and the hidden feelings were coming out. They smiled. Arjun took his hand forward to riya and asked her for a dance.

Riya- mr rawte mai dance??

Arjun- plzz….u will feel good.

Riya took his hand and arjun held her by her waist and riya kept the other hand on his shoulders. They were few centimeters away initially but as the time flew they were lost in each other and arjun wrapped around both his arms around riya's waist and pulled her very close to him. Riya wrapped her hands around his neck and their foreheads were touching each other and both were looking into each others eyes and were lost. After few minutes riya slowly rested her head on arjun's chest and arjun hugged her. riya hugged him tightly and they both were just lost…..

They came back to the real world all of a sudden when the landline rang.

Riya quickly moved away and went and picked up the phone.

Riya- hello.

Arjun noticed that after the hello riya's face became pale with fear. She suddenly started shaking. She didn't utter a word.

Arjun-kiska phone hai riya?

Riya didn't answer. She was scared and just stood with the phone receiver on her ears. She slid the receiver slowly with the pale face and cut the call. She gasped and sighed and went to arjun.

Riya-(sweating with fear)- mr rawte I think now you should go to sleep. Mai aapke liye kamra theek karr chuki hoon. Jaake so jaiye!

Arjun- ok but….

Riya- plzzz…mujhe aur koi baat nahi karni…..😕

Arjun- lekin mujhe janna hai….

Riya- mujhe nahi bataana…..meri personal life se aapko kya..?

Arjun- fine. I am going to sleep.

Arjun went off to sleep but riya couldn't sleep that night. The call was from her ex-husband Angad. Although their divorce had been 4 years long but after 1-2 years of their divorce,Angad had realized that he loved riya. and then he was after riya. but riya knew that he had a mental problem. He was obsessive about his things and just because riya had belonged to him once, he was after her now. He had seen riya with arjun and now he had started troubling her.

The next morning arjun got up and went to the living room and saw riya sitting and staring the wall.

Arjun- riya?

Riya- oh….gud morning….😳

Arjun- I think its not so good for u riya? kya hua hai?

Riya- nothing mr rawte!

Arjun- fine. The rain has stopped and I am going back….i will take some other root now, I hope saare raaste abb khul gaye honge.

Riya- theek hai.

Riya had no expression on her face. Arjun was tensed about it. But he moved on and went back home.

That day was Sunday. No ETF,until emergency. and arjun was habitual to roaring and screaming sounds on this day. Samara and shree used to hang out together the whole day and they used to play like small children.

Arjun was in his room. He was tensed because he knew that riya was going to spend the whole day alone. He was tensed about her. does that mean I care about her?he thought.

"Tu chup karr maine cheating nahi ki…..tune ki"

"tu bohot bol rahi hai aaj kal….maine kaha na tu haar gayi….tu cheating karke nahi jeet sakti"

Arjun was getting disturbed by these sounds. He peeped through the window to look at samara and shree playing basket ball.

Arjun- tum log chup rahoge? Mai yaha upar hi hoon aur mera sarr dukh raha hai…

Shree- sorry bhai…

Samara- sir…..sir…ek baat bolni hai….

Arjun- haan bolo.

Samara- you look awesome today!😳

Samra gave him a flying kiss and arjun innocently grabbed it in air and kept it in his pocket and smiled, just as he had kept so many of them. Arjun had been very close to both,shree as well as samara…….and another man rathore….but….after that incident, rathore and arjun were not on talking terms. They used to talk very formally. Arun recalled that there was a time when they were best of buddies. Samara never blamed arjun for roshni's death but rahtore did. Arjun thought to go out and do something valuable rather than sitting at home and listening to childish fights of ShMara.

Arjun went to a lake near a temple. He kept his hands on the railing and thought about whatever was happening to him.

Why do I think she is good at heart? She has done such a bad thing but….no….she can't do those things….he thought.

He turned back and saw a crowd. He ran towards it and went through the crowd and saw that riya was lying there and she had fainted. He got furious. He quickly carried her in his arms to his house. Riya was not totally unconscious. She was speaking few things. Arjun took her to his bedroom and lay her there on his large bed. He sprinkled water on her face and she opened her eyes slowly but she was still not fully In her senses.

Riya held arjun's arm and made him sit on the bed.

Riya- plzzz….plzz muhe bacha leejiye ….plzzz..!!!!

Arjun- yes riya, mai yahi hoon….i will not let anything happen to you. Mai abhi aata hoon.

Riya- nahi….please….aap mere paas hi rahiyega! Varna…..

Arjun- okk..ok.

Arjun was feeling a sense of responsibility and care and …love…he stayed back and called for the maid to bring a glass of glucose water.

Arjun- riya….just close ur eyes….take rest.

Arjun moved his hands on riya's face and riya closed her eyes. ShMara also came to the room.

Shree- omg! Is she alright?😲

Arjun- yes….tum log yaha ise disturb matt karo….

Shree-ok bhai….we are going for a coffee….!

Arjun- ok go.

Arjun held riya's hand and he was very tensed. Riya was shaking. She had fever.arjun called the doctor.

Doctor- maine inhe check karr liya hai, inhe kisi cheez se bohot stress hua hai….ye darr gayi hain…and she is not crying….she needs to cry….abhi maine inhe davaa di hai so she is sleeping. But please try ki ye apni problem aapse share kare and make her cry for what she is afraid of.

Arjun- ok doctor..thanks.

Arjun was feeling very sad and confused. He hated that girl but still he cared for her so much. She was suffering and it felt as if he was also suffering with her. he wanted to give her all the love that she deserved. He wanted to make her happy. But….what about the things which people say about her? people say she traps men for their money!!! Can she really be so mean? Thought arjun.

Arjun was falling for her, he was falling for her simplicity, for her beauty, for her innocence, but he was not allowed to fall in love with that girl. After all, he wanted the girl to leave his life forever, but now he felt as if she was his life.

Arjun's mind was fighting with his heart and the heart was winning everytime. Arjun went out to the garden as riya was asleep and he had no intentions to disturb her. in the garden also he was thinking only about her. his mind was fully occupied by her. she had occupied his life and his mind was not ready to accept it. She was so different from roshni but still he felt that his love for riya, which was on its initial stage, was far more deeper than what love he had for roshni. It was not just infatuation. It was love. NO said his mind. You can't let yourself give up to such a traitor but arjun's heart was saying something different she can't be at fault. There is a mistake. She is so good. She can't be bad kuch toh choot raha hai.

Arjun was taken aback when he heard someone call his name very sweetly. He loved those words 'mr rawte'. He immediately moved to his room and riya was sitting on his bed and looking at him with her big eyes.😳

Riya- mr. rawte…..mai yaha?😕

She was still looking scared. arjun went to her and gently placed his hand on hers.

Arjun- tum faint ho gayi thi riya..mandir ke paas…kya baat hai?

Riya- kuch nahi….maine khaana nahi khaaya tha…..

Arjun- mai abhi khaana mangva deta hoon.

He calls the maid and orders for riya's fav food items.

Riya- thnku sir.

Ajun- ur welcome….lekin tumhe mujhe bataana hoga ki kya problem hai…..

Riya- koi problem nahi hai sir…aaj mai khaana lena bhool gayi thi toh bass….

Arjun didn't tell her what the doc had said. the maid brought the food and arjun fed riya with his hands. Riya's eyes were welling up with tears, but she was stopping them to roll down her cheek.

She was feeling very happy to see some1 take so much care of her but then she was scared of Angad.

The whole day arjun was with her but riya didn't utter a word. At the evening arjun dropped her in her house.arjun went into her house. Riya wanted to make tea for him but he made her sit. He wanted to talk to her.but just then someone knocked on the door. Riya looked scared. she told arjun to go and lock himself in the bathroom. Arjun was confused but he did so and he heard what was happening outised.

Riya opened the door and it was Angad. Riya started shaking.

Angad-mujhe andar aane nahi kahogi riya?😈

Riya- V-vV-ooo...A..A-A-ngad...m-m-main…v-vooo!!!😕

Angad opened the door apart and went inside the room. He looked around the house.

Angad- ghar toh accha sajaaya hai tumne

Arjun was listening to all this.

Angad- mera ghar toh kabhi itne acche sa nahi sajaaya darling.😈

Angad grabbed her hand tightly and riya got hurt. She was stopping herself from shouting, she was very scared.

Angad- tum poore din ghar pe kyu nahi thi haan?

Riya- v-voo—vo-vo…

Angad(holding her hairs tightly and shaking her)- kya vo?? Apne boyfriend se milne gayi thi na?😡

Riya- aa..a….😭

Arjun was getting angry😡. He was getting eager to go out and beat angad.

Angad- tum toh badi acchi banti thi….abb kya hua? Tumne toh pehle mahaan banke apni best friend ka kiya hua kaam apne sar le liya…badi great banne gayi thi. Abb apni mahaanta nahi dikhaaogi? Abb tum boyfriends banaane lagi.

Riya- leave me angad.! Vo mera boy friend nahi hai…he is😭…he is…😭

Riya was compelled to think what he was? Was he a friend? Or was he her………..

PRECAP:- angad misbehave with riya and arjun comes out and fights.

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sorry yaar...ye post long nahi ho paaya...i am a little busy...i will try and upload the next part soon..plzz forgive me😭 and plzzz plzz plzz comment and give me suggestions😭

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _mahi_

awww the last part was so emotional😳.. he went to her house.. ahm ahm ..😉
n he even consoled her when she got scared in the dark😊
true hero he is!😳
and loved their little conversation about her past
angad ka bacha..😡 riya ko maarta tha🤢
cant wait till arjun beats him up 😆 hopefully 😆
do update soon dear.. ooh la la..romantic song 😉 m excited😃

thnku so much🤗 angad ki toh aisi ki taisi karne vaala hai arjun...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey beautiful 😃 i read the last update last night but was too sleepy to make a comment 😆
so here you go😉
awww he served the dinner..😳 i totally adore this gentleman Rawte as I have mentioned before
and the way he understands her face expressions is so adorable😛.. riya does not even need to say anything and arjun would just understand what's going on in her mind by looking at her face.. totally magical..😳
and he picked her up from the mandir. brought her to his bedroom☺️.. hayye.. you nailed it yaar..👏
so sweet😃
and that idiot is here huh😡
i just cant wait till arjun beat him black and blue🤢
great update hunnie🤗 n please continue soon😳

Edited by _mahi_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
gud update
thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...so cute...arjun ki.care krne wali nature...koi ladki kaise na fida ho..mmuuuaaahhh
Angad is so gone now
Awsum update

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