FF: Fire and Water (Ch. 26-A Updated on Pg.145!)

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

nice Ariya moment as well as case..update soon

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

Loved the update, most especially the Ariya treat at end.

Looking forward to more as always.

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Geetika

@geetikadhariwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#693

Dear ValleryWorks,Your work is brilliant & I would like to invite you to a forum that is currently being tested (by the production house)before it goes public.

As your work is really praiseworthy i want this to be at a forum that is monitored by the production house itself and you are able to share your creativity there. Let me know if you are keen and PM me the email id that you would want to use. I will then send you an invite for the same.

As you might know the makers of the show are testing a platform which will be available to public when they feel it's the right time. I thought i might as well clarify, it's a platform where fans of all the shows that the production house has, can interact freely that's all.Once again, really lovely work and you have us all waiting for more. Hoping to get an update soon :)Cheers,Geetika

Edited by geetikadhariwal - 12 years ago

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Mahi

@_mahi_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#694

finally.. yes FINALLY😃
Mahi is free to make a comment at her beloved FF update😉

mmm kahaan se start karoon.. haan haan my handsome hunk arjun se😳
hayye how in the world does he notice every single detail around him🤓
he had read the car's number plate at Bhati's place.. whoa.. that sounds so cool and he seemed to remember👏
mujhko toh apni gaadi ka no. nahi pta hai 🤣
n loved how he analyzed the prints of car's tires at that parking lot.. wow.. this guy is indeed a super-cop😎
and the way they landed at the farm house.. whoa😲.. that was so dramatic
baaki sabb chhodo.. riya kicked the goon in his legs 😲
whoa whoa.. am i dreaming?🤔 i am pretty sure she did coz arjun was there with her nah😳
he is her strength and she couldn't loose it there😛
love how they nodded at each other and marched forwards
their chemistry is unmatchable.. 👏
and what the? 🤣 shree-chotu having fun with the guards? 😆
yeh kabhi nahi sudhrenge.. they are playing like they are faking it with their childhood friends 🤣
love this duo yaar.. they always tend to steal the update from Ariya but ariya is the best, as always😳

awww poor Rathore was hurt😭 .. so sad.. hope he will be fine in his wife's lap ahm ahm..😉
you should put some of their moments in the next update😊
i like his wife.. such a strong character.. hope they will play some cupid in ariya's love story👍🏼
ahm ahm.. arjun falling on top of riya and she on the hay stack☺️
hayyee... hay jyaada teekhi tha ya unke andar ka temperature jyaada high tha? 🤣
just can't get enough of these two.. i am getting goosebumps thinking about that moment when they laid on top of each other..☺️
can we please get some more ariya moments😛.. i know im so demanding but u know we cant help it when it comes to ariya's romance😆
n you know that you are more than excellent in writing ariya's moments😉
thanks for your pm hunnie.. your updates always work as a sunshine to my cloudy life..😕😆
do update like RIGHT NOW..😳
love yah 🤗

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ValleryRose

@ValleryRose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#695

@ _mahi_

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Okay...
Thanks a lot for the detailed comments dear.. sabar ka phal meetha hota hain.,😉

Arjun and Riya chemistry...AMAZING! I just love writing these short and sweet Ariya moments..😊

Shree and Chotu.. they crack me up anytime!!! 😆

Avantika: I like strong women and that is the reason she is so.. A perfect match for our Rowdy Rathore..😉

I'll make sure my next update is as entertaining as all my previous ones. I'm planning to kick the story up a notch now! Get ready for a roller coaster ride!!! 😉

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#696

sorry for the late comment dear, but as usual an awesome update dear...

Avantika is safe, thanks to Arjun😳

N Vikram finally caught, and wow the ending of Arjun and Riya was just so so romantic😳

Please continue soon, as soon as you can, and all the best for your exams😊

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APPY

@IshqDewaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#697

awesome!!!!

haiii😳😳 arjun idioit...finally!!!

loved shree..bina daaare bol diya...😆😆

thanks fr the pm!

Update soon...waiting fr the big twist!

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#698

Awwwiieee...

I loved this one!! 👏👏

So they've finally saved Avantika..

Rathore-Avantika's scenes rocked!! brilliantly drafted!! 👏

And the last Ariya scene, 😉

Ahaa, so Shree-Chottu, have figured it out; Geniuses!! 😉 I pity Riya now!! 😉😛

"Oye! Wahan se utarne ka koi plan hain ya nahin?" , Haaye, Shree, meri jaan!!

that was mindblowing!! 😉😉😛

So, are you going to update this one again before you go away or this is it for now?!

Anyway, thanks for the PM! 😊

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Shru

@funkylicious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#699

yayyy..Read the Chap on the way back home through cell, sorry for the late comment dear😕hmm first of all you nailed the chapter...with Arjun being the hero throughout...😳What is he a super man? haha Loved the way he notice things around him yaar its amazing to read something like this, so similar to the Arjun we watch on screen. Which is definitely good... 😆Omg seriously Purushotam has only 3 cars? haha I thought he was richer anyways his limited parking lot gave briliant ideas to our Arjun...I loved the way you synchronised the number plates👏
Riya our second hero(Heroine) haha loved that she's teaming up with Arjun and actually working upto his standards at times😉

hahaha they fell from the terrace together loved that scene it was soo romantic yaar

Shree and Chotu ki toh baat hi mat karo...🤣🤣

Rathore hope he's fine...
But I love it Avantika's character bold and strong, I like her more the way she talks to Sameer so polite and lovingly😳

I can't wait for the next chapter...and thanks for the Pm dear...🤗

P.S: Congratz on 100+ pages now..😃 yaayyy we can welcome thread 2 soon I guess😉 and all the best for your exams dear...will miss u then but hope u update couple of times more before u take a break from us😛😆

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ValleryRose

@ValleryRose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#700

@ mohabbatgirl, funkylicious, haruhi26, IshqDewaani

Thanks a lot for the comments guys!!!
I absolutely loved writing this chapter! 😃
I'm glad you guys loved it too..😉
I'm going to make my last update on Saturday... (Note: The FF is NOT ending, definitely not. There's still lot more coming up)
I'll try to update in between my exams if possible.. I'll PM everyone if I do.
I'm sorry, if I won't be able to. I'd miss writing this FF..😭

Edited by ValleryRose - 12 years ago