FF: Fire and Water (Ch. 26-A Updated on Pg.145!) - Page 54

Nice part waiting for the next one

Interesting update. Can't wait to read more!

wow...nice FF...impressive...cant wait for the next part

wow...liked most when riya tell Arjun it's quit personal...good reply Riya...
liked Rathore past...and Arjun also concern for Rathore...a beautiful bond between them...
waiting for the next part...

hm. so seems the brother is somewhere involved or perhaps framed. continue soon!

hey its a great ff..although i havent seen the show bt i am loving your story

Awesome update yr

Gr8 uodate

Loved it

Originally posted by: sups2222

Finally I am commenting after ages...Kya kare *exams* *submission* * i will be dead before exams i am telling you* 😆...Okay before i rant i wanna tell you even if I am not commenting i always read your ff and like it and ALWAYS it is awseum update...>>>You have carried AriYa story beautifully...Riya's past tied with arjun's past...riya's unstable future...arjun's confused as well as complexed feeling...rathore's past...present ...as well his daughter aww that is sweet part...I loced shree and riya's friendhsip..he is very sweet and gives her much needed support...OKAY back for the update...loved it as usual just one thing isnt arjun supposed to think over riya's confession and and sort his feelings...Now arjun s acting like nothing happened as if he hasnt heard anything...i would love to hear arjun;s turmoil and he trying to figure out his feelings...Aww the starting part with rathore and avantika was uperb...would love to see papa rathore...Arjun's confused expression with riya getting that much respect was a treat to watch and riya shutting him down when he enquired about anurag was delight...he got taste of his own medicine...Everybody has their secrets arjun have secret of roshni from riya and riya has secret of her family and anurag from arjun...rathore has his family secret...Love to read next chapter how these secrets unfold...
Love,
Piya😳

Thanks a lot for your wonderful comments...!
Hmm... you raised an interesting point... Arjun's turmoil.. It's been ten days since he had heard Riya's confession, but that wasn't a direct one. Also he seems to have accepted his feelings but it is very difficult fro him to take the next step because it is all so complicated. So he wants things to remain how they are for a while. Because he still has some unfinished business..Sikender. I think I did say this in my FF in one of the updates, I think in the chapter with the 'Raabta' song sequence. Also, Riya and Roshni are not strangers. Even he doesn't know what would happen if Riya comes to know about Roshni. How will that truth impact her?
You'll definitely get to see all of that in my future updates... I'm actually glad you pointed that out!
Thanx...😊