To dear CVs of ATBA,
There was a time when I wanted to watch the show. Throughout the day I used to be curious that "Apna Time Bhi Aayega" would telecast in the evening but now I have to tolerate the show.
Earlier there were many episodes that I wanted to watch again but now even a single episode is not seen without skipping. Sometimes, I don't even feel like watching it.
• If you focus more on showing positive characters than highlighting negative characters, then the audience will be more attracted towards the show. Like, it would have been better if Ranvijay was shown as a positive character. Both the parents of Veer turned out to be villains which audiences didn't like. The character of Veer is very positive and kind but both his parents are not good people, this thing was not liked by the audiences because we felt that it is unfair to that character.
• You guys left the track incomplete all the time. Like the episode of Veer's birthday. I still don't understand why that episode was made. There was neither any special story in it nor special moments of Veer and Rani. The episode when Veer and Rani ate samosas together at the roadside for the first time, was more better than this. And when Rani fell down from the three story building but Veer didn't know about it till now. I don't know if you will show it now or not.
• You people have ideas different from the makers of the other shows, very different and innovative but you guys have never done justice with them whereas the makers of the other shows make the simple and repetitive tracks look different again and again. Just like you guys had decorated very well on the day of Teej festival, the "aankhon ki gustakhiyaan" scene between Veer and Rani was also well depicted but if at last there was a hug between them or a forward kiss so, the dullness which was felt even after doing so much that wouldn't have been there. And the other thing is, it could have been shown that on the morning of Rakhi, Nandini would come to her maternal home to tie Rakhi to her brothers and then Veer could have taken Rani to Baliya so that Rani and Pinku could also celebrate Rakshabandhan together. But you guys didn't use it properly. And when the truth of Ranvijay and the truth of Veer's root came out, Veer was emotionally very vulnerable in that entire track. You guys could have shown Rani taking care of him all the time, giving him the comfort he needed, it would have made a very good impression but you guys didn't do anything like that.
• Your show claims to be women centric, supports their education, gives equal rights to women in the society, it also started with this concept but now it is not a women centric show anymore. Now it is included in the count of normal Saas Bahu shows. Earlier, at least Rani was seen discussing about her studies and when Rani was careless in her studies, Veer used to reprimand her but now neither she is worried about her studies nor Veer.
• Veer is a doctor in the show but how will someone knows if you don't show it? If a new person thinks of watching this show but thought to watch from between and not from the beginning then he or she will never know that Veer is a doctor. While a show should be such that it should be watched from anywhere, its entire story should be understood. What is the role of each character, whether it is negative or positive, everything should be understood. But in your show it is like who is the wife of a husband, if the mother in law likes her daughter-in-law or just pretends to like her etc. It's not understandable in first watch. To understand all the relationship correctly, we have to watch all the episodes atleast for two or three times.
• The profession of everyone should also be shown in the show, especially of the main leads. The things that have been shown from the beginning should be continued. Veer is a doctor, Vikram is a lawyer, Rani is a college going girl and Ramadheer has a grocery store but nothing like this is being shown. Veer, Rani and Vikram are struggling with their domestic matters in such a way that there is no existence of their personal and professional lives. You have to do so much work on this.
• This show looks male dominant more. Whenever any male wants to marry someone, he can and with whomever he wants he can, whenever he wants to leave her, he is also free to do so. It looks like as it's the birthright of the men on this show. Ranvijay left Rajeshwari and got married again, Veer did fake marriage with Kiara only to take revenge from his own wife and to make her jealous, then he left her also and Kiara was okay with this all, nor Rani asked any questions to Veer about this later because Veer was answerable at that time but Rani didn't consider it necessary to ask him.
•And the most surprising thing is that this show is a women empowerment show still no woman is seen protesting against this wrong behaviour by a man, neither Rani nor Ranisa and Nandini. Ranvijay left Rajeshwari, what she did? Nothing. Jay slapped Nandini not only once but twice, what she did? Nothing. Veer first left Rani in Baliya then character assassinated her and then did fake marriage with Kiara, what Rani did? Nothing. And you call it a women centric show. As when Veer had left Rani in Baliya, then at that time Rani had every right to show her displeasure but without thinking about herself, she tried to understand Veer. This is also fine but if there is an involvement of two people in a relationship, then the rights of both should be equally fulfilled. It is not necessary that the wife has to understands her husband every time, she should compromise for everything, if a husband understands his wife, takes a stand for her, supports her, considers his happiness in her happiness, then it looks better because everyone expects all these things from a woman like it's her duty but no one except the same from a man.
•And you guys have a very bad habit of repeating tracks and that too in excess. By showing the same thing in different ways, shooting at different places will not change what is being shown, that is, the same content would be there all the time. If there is a sepration track then there will be sepration whether it is in Baliya or in Jaipur or in Goa. You people have to understand that audiences can see one thing once, can see it twice, can bear the third time under compulsion but cannot see it again and again. And you guys are showing the same track again every other month.
• Your stories have no logics. When Ranvijay left Rajeshwari after that she could take revenge from him, take action against him because what Ranvijay did with her is considered wrong in our law. After marriage, a husband has to take full responsibility of his wife and his children, and if the husband and wife are unable to adjust together, then the option of divorce has been kept for this. Rajeshwari used to belong from a royal family, so it is obvious that she must have had some powers in her hands even before she got married in the Rajawats but she didn't make any use of it. So, it didn't make any sense to me.
•On the other hand, Jay is beating Nandini everyday but Nandini isn't doing anything. Though the decision to marry Jay was her own, no pressure was put on her but it doesn't mean that Jay has got the right to do domestic violence on her or that Nandini will suffer this torture for the rest of her life. It's a clear domestic violence which Nandini is tolerating. Being a women centric show, you should have shown Nandini raising voice against this.
Jay all the time pressurises Nandini to ask for money from her family and Nandini says nothing. On the one hand you are showing that Nandini is also not liking Jay's nature and on the other hand she is not even denying him clearly. If we look in this matter carefully, then it is encouraging the dowry system somewhere.
"While showing something, you should also be aware of the fact that no wrong message should be delivered to the people from the content shown by you."
There are a few shows where all these things are being shown but they all are not women centric shows, so it is not having any wrong effect because those shows do not claim to show things in the favour of the women. But if your show claims this, then you will have to show your story accordingly.
"Think before showing anything on a national television."
• The introduction of your show is given by the struggle of the story of a girl Rani and her dreams but when we watch the show, leave her dreams, I don't even understand that what is the role of Rani? Who is she actually? A college going student, who wants to become an engineer or the daughter in law of Rajawats or Veer's wife? Because you aren't showing all these things together which is very important to make this show what it actually is. There is no struggle in her life because blood and bandages don't show someone's struggles in life. You guys showed a lollypop to us and when the time comes to give it, you flipped. It's so bad.
• Veer and Rani also need to focus on their own relationship. You might think that their relationship is perfect, but in reality it is not. Because the kind of relationship which Veer and Rani have, both have to trust each other to the fullest which Rani does also but I think, Veer probably doesn't. Otherwise he should have trusted her instead of reprimanding Rani when Rani told him about Ranvijay for the first time.
Suffering comes in every family, but it does not mean that couples who are in the family should always be engaged in solving family matters all the time, leaving their married life behind. If they do not give time to their relationship, then their relationship will never be strong because life is never without difficulties and if they keep solving problems of their families, keeping their relationship aside then they won't be able to adjust with eachother.
• Stop humiliating Rani all the time. It looks as if everyone has got the license to disrespect her, shout on her, scold her and what not. Now, they have accepted her as daughter in law so atleast now please stop humiliating her. You have overused it.
• If you want to white wash Rajeshwari then it's fine. But don't make Veer her puppy again. We had asked to show the whole Rajawat family working as a team together against Vijaya and to make it happen, it's not necessary to make Veer her puppy. Problem is that you people can't balance things together properly.
• Veer says that Rani is his everything but it doesn't seem after seeing his actions. "Everything" means that even if the whole world turns against them, we will still be with them because they are everything to us and without the person who is our everything, we would be nothing, right? We will have no existence. But Veer does not even know how to take a stand for Rani properly, for that too he thinks a hundred of times because may be he does not want to hurt his Ranisa. That's why Veer needs to think once again whether his "everything" is Rani or ranisa.
• Romance is major missing in Apna Time Bhi Aayega. The thing which completes the relationship of a husband and wife you cannot show that nor we are asking for that. But you guys can try to show some glimpse of that in some other way, right? Physical attraction is very common between the people of two opposite sexes and a husband and wife have rights over eachother. Leave the romance, you guys don't even show light hearted moments of Veer and Rani nowadays. When both of them were unmarried and when they hadn't realised that they love each other, at that time we used to get a few RanVeer's moments but now we don't even get them too.
You people probably feel that you give a lot of lead romance but as much as couple romance and the kind of couple romance other shows give, what you give is nothing in front of that. We don't even complain about that thing, we only ask for some RanVeer's scenes but you guys always ignore us and take us for granted.
• Every track that you guys show has some moral hidden in it but you are not even able to show what we have learnt from it in the end, properly.
• Now the thing you are working and you will be working, needs a lot of focus because now the time slot has changed and the serials which telecast in this time slot have a good storyline and they also give lots of romance of the leads. So every step has to be taken keeping in mind that who is your competitors now and you are in between high compitition.
• Whether you accept this or not but the truth is that without romance, your TRP cannot increase. As you may have also noticed that even after bringing so many changes, TRP was not increasing but the week when only few scenes of RanVeer were shown, the TRP got increased. Look, here applies a very simple formula "RanVeer's moments are directly proportional to increase in the TRP."
~ Don't take me wrong and I am sorry if I hurt you all by my words but I am saying all these things for you only and not for myself because it will not give me anything, neither name nor fame and I do not want anything too. I am saying all this for your own good. Whether the TRP increases or decreases, the show goes on for the next ten years or it gets closed tomorrow, I will not have any loss or profit. If there is a loss then it will be for you and if there is profit then it will also happen to you. If there is profit then it is a good thing, but if there is a loss then your hardwork will get wasted. Actors are working hard and those who work behind the camera working harder. When you people have invested your money, then do something so that it doesn't get wasted.
• There is some actor in the cast of every show who doesn't give the real vibes but there is not even a single actor in your cast, from leads to those who are in the role of servants who doesn't give real feel. And the main leads who have the most impact on audiences, their acting is unmatched. Because of them, we are still connected with the show otherwise there is nothing special left in this show to watch. The job of actors is just to make their character alive and connect with audiences and everything else depends on you, how you are depicting anything and whether people are able to connect with it or not, is in your hands. So, please work on it.
*Everything is fine just if you pay a little more attention and if you guys correct the minor shortcomings, then everything will be perfect.*
The beginning of the show was also a bang and after a long journey, the ending should also be a bang.
Being a constant viewer of this show, I fulfilled my duty. I hope, now you will fulfill your duties too.
Best of luck.
May god bless you all.
Edited by LoveYourself_20 - 3 years ago