Suggestions Thread for ATBA writers. - Page 3

Originally posted by: Shimmer_sault

Montage needs rework

Why is Rani’s face so swollen n distorted

Even veer something missing

His left hand on right

Here too NO PDA

Someone hates VeeRani as a couple for sure ,

Prefer a better montage .... they should have kept the earlier daal chawal date montage it was better

https://www.instagram.com/p/CQv4pP8BeVU/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link

Originally posted by: caller123

I snd Rish discussed the same. We both are not satisfied with the montage .

True, it looked like they were forced in to a chair they don't fit into. 🤣

There was a BTS with Rani and a crew member. It was much better. What the hell. 🤣

Dear writers/creatives of Apna Time Bhi Aayega,

I don't know if you will ever get to know about what I am writing here but it's the only way I can show you all that how much frustrated I am just because of your useless brain.

Have you all lost your minds or what? Have you all gone crazy? You want TRP right? But what about us? Your show is not for our generation it is for my grandmother's grandmother generation where a husband can't touch wife's hand in front of his family. Because I have seen some movie scenes of my grandmother's generation and that too had some intense and romantic moments between a husband and wife. But you all are from Pluto I think because you don't know about that if a husband kisses his wife on forehead or on cheek so she would not get burnt. You have completed 200 episodes right? But still we haven't gotten any proper romantic scene not a single scene. And now please don't make excuse of your milan night. If that was really a milan night so every other serial couples are having this night everyday. And what about our RanVeer? First of all they experienced that night after 8 months of their marriage and how was that? Wait!! I will tell you. I was waiting for that night to feel. RanVeer's love moments and I was dreaming about that but suddenly all ended. But it was okay for me as I thought they would be doing it when their relationship would become more stronger. And I decided to wait for that night. But after two or three weeks later I got to know that the night was their first night and they became one that night.

I know if you can write very emotional scenes in between Rani and her baujee , Rani and Veer , Veer and Rani saa which literally made me cry so you can also write some very emotional scenes in between Rani and Veer where any of them would be consoling the other one when they are emotionally weak and so many things would be done and who knows it better than you all because it's your profession. Right? So why don't you all sit together for a minute and think about it?

Now, I have started feeling that you don't want Fahmaan and Megha together in intense scenes. And if it is true , I know it is but still , so if you don't like their closeness so why do you paired them up? Didn't you know that which kind of scenes or which kind of chemistry is required in between a couple and specially when they are married? Do you know , Megha and Fahmaan look like a real couple in real life more than in your my grandmother's grandmother generation serial. Why did you bring them together as couple that too in lead when you were not going to make them look like a couple? It was in your hand so you would have choosen some other co-star either for Megha or for Fahmaan. What are you not using their sizzling chemistry to increase the TRP? Just go and check the views on the promos which have their love scenes. How can you all be idiots at the same time because nobody's mind is working? I mean, not a single person has brain. Oh god!!! I mean, what a good serial it could have been and what you all have made it. Seriously shocked that how can this much professional people do this to a very interesting show and made it loose the slot leadership.

Your cast is amazing. Each and every single person. Whether be it Megha, Fahmaan, Pulkit, Vivana, Gargi, Prateesh, Akshita, Seema, Samaksh, Preyal, Yajuvendra etc. Everyone made us feel what they had to. But your creatives are lacking somewhere and that somewhere is RanVeer's some light hearted and some intense moments because now stroy is back on the track. You should focus more on RanVeer's life together and individually too along with the ongoing track as it's also important ( Nandini and Jai's marriage ) and give some really good Veer and Rani love moments atleast on alternative days. It will surely increase the TRP. If you don't believe so just try it for once and you will definitely see the positive response that is increased TRP.

Not only me but every viewer and fan of Apna Time Bhi Aayega want this. I did my part. Now, it's your turn to play yours.

And one more thing, I really want to beat the shit out of creatives who are not giving us RanVeer's love moments and you all too for not giving them some brain to do it.😡

Originally posted by: LoveYourself_20

Dear writers/creatives of Apna Time Bhi Aayega,

I don't know if you will ever get to know about what I am writing here but it's the only way I can show you all that how much frustrated I am just because of your useless brain.

Have you all lost your minds or what? Have you all gone crazy? You want TRP right? But what about us? Your show is not for our generation it is for my grandmother's grandmother generation where a husband can't touch wife's hand in front of his family. Because I have seen some movie scenes of my grandmother's generation and that too had some intense and romantic moments between a husband and wife. But you all are from Pluto I think because you don't know about that if a husband kisses his wife on forehead or on cheek so she would not get burnt. You have completed 200 episodes right? But still we haven't gotten any proper romantic scene not a single scene. And now please don't make excuse of your milan night. If that was really a milan night so every other serial couples are having this night everyday. And what about our RanVeer? First of all they experienced that night after 8 months of their marriage and how was that? Wait!! I will tell you. I was waiting for that night to feel. RanVeer's love moments and I was dreaming about that but suddenly all ended. But it was okay for me as I thought they would be doing it when their relationship would become more stronger. And I decided to wait for that night. But after two or three weeks later I got to know that the night was their first night and they became one that night.

I know if you can write very emotional scenes in between Rani and her baujee , Rani and Veer , Veer and Rani saa which literally made me cry so you can also write some very emotional scenes in between Rani and Veer where any of them would be consoling the other one when they are emotionally weak and so many things would be done and who knows it better than you all because it's your profession. Right? So why don't you all sit together for a minute and think about it?

Now, I have started feeling that you don't want Fahmaan and Megha together in intense scenes. And if it is true , I know it is but still , so if you don't like their closeness so why do you paired them up? Didn't you know that which kind of scenes or which kind of chemistry is required in between a couple and specially when they are married? Do you know , Megha and Fahmaan look like a real couple in real life more than in your my grandmother's grandmother generation serial. Why did you bring them together as couple that too in lead when you were not going to make them look like a couple? It was in your hand so you would have choosen some other co-star either for Megha or for Fahmaan. What are you not using their sizzling chemistry to increase the TRP? Just go and check the views on the promos which have their love scenes. How can you all be idiots at the same time because nobody's mind is working? I mean, not a single person has brain. Oh god!!! I mean, what a good serial it could have been and what you all have made it. Seriously shocked that how can this much professional people do this to a very interesting show and made it loose the slot leadership.

Your cast is amazing. Each and every single person. Whether be it Megha, Fahmaan, Pulkit, Vivana, Gargi, Prateesh, Akshita, Seema, Samaksh, Preyal, Yajuvendra etc. Everyone made us feel what they had to. But your creatives are lacking somewhere and that somewhere is RanVeer's some light hearted and some intense moments because now stroy is back on the track. You should focus more on RanVeer's life together and individually too along with the ongoing track as it's also important ( Nandini and Jai's marriage ) and give some really good Veer and Rani love moments atleast on alternative days. It will surely increase the TRP. If you don't believe so just try it for once and you will definitely see the positive response that is increased TRP.

Not only me but every viewer and fan of Apna Time Bhi Aayega want this. I did my part. Now, it's your turn to play yours.

And one more thing, I really want to beat the shit out of creatives who are not giving us RanVeer's love moments and you all too for not giving them some brain to do it.😡

Really Really appreciated ur post from the bottom of my heart ❤❤ hope CVS should learn how to write a romantic love story between the married couples.

This is called Prakriti ka kahar (nature’s fury)

They need to weed out the thorn in the crew n back office if they want to veer their serial to a Megha TRP slot leader

All ATBA admirers are part of the TRP rating ..... normal couple talk of nokh-jokh is also NIL now

By the way check Fahmaan IGS, his home got flooded with Prakriti ka kahar (nature’s fury), nature too cried so much that his home got flooded

Originally posted by: LoveYourself_20

Dear writers/creatives of Apna Time Bhi Aayega,

I don't know if you will ever get to know about what I am writing here but it's the only way I can show you all that how much frustrated I am just because of your useless brain.

Have you all lost your minds or what? Have you all gone crazy? You want TRP right? But what about us? Your show is not for our generation it is for my grandmother's grandmother generation where a husband can't touch wife's hand in front of his family. Because I have seen some movie scenes of my grandmother's generation and that too had some intense and romantic moments between a husband and wife. But you all are from Pluto I think because you don't know about that if a husband kisses his wife on forehead or on cheek so she would not get burnt. You have completed 200 episodes right? But still we haven't gotten any proper romantic scene not a single scene. And now please don't make excuse of your milan night. If that was really a milan night so every other serial couples are having this night everyday. And what about our RanVeer? First of all they experienced that night after 8 months of their marriage and how was that? Wait!! I will tell you. I was waiting for that night to feel. RanVeer's love moments and I was dreaming about that but suddenly all ended. But it was okay for me as I thought they would be doing it when their relationship would become more stronger. And I decided to wait for that night. But after two or three weeks later I got to know that the night was their first night and they became one that night.

I know if you can write very emotional scenes in between Rani and her baujee , Rani and Veer , Veer and Rani saa which literally made me cry so you can also write some very emotional scenes in between Rani and Veer where any of them would be consoling the other one when they are emotionally weak and so many things would be done and who knows it better than you all because it's your profession. Right? So why don't you all sit together for a minute and think about it?

Now, I have started feeling that you don't want Fahmaan and Megha together in intense scenes. And if it is true , I know it is but still , so if you don't like their closeness so why do you paired them up? Didn't you know that which kind of scenes or which kind of chemistry is required in between a couple and specially when they are married? Do you know , Megha and Fahmaan look like a real couple in real life more than in your my grandmother's grandmother generation serial. Why did you bring them together as couple that too in lead when you were not going to make them look like a couple? It was in your hand so you would have choosen some other co-star either for Megha or for Fahmaan. What are you not using their sizzling chemistry to increase the TRP? Just go and check the views on the promos which have their love scenes. How can you all be idiots at the same time because nobody's mind is working? I mean, not a single person has brain. Oh god!!! I mean, what a good serial it could have been and what you all have made it. Seriously shocked that how can this much professional people do this to a very interesting show and made it loose the slot leadership.

Your cast is amazing. Each and every single person. Whether be it Megha, Fahmaan, Pulkit, Vivana, Gargi, Prateesh, Akshita, Seema, Samaksh, Preyal, Yajuvendra etc. Everyone made us feel what they had to. But your creatives are lacking somewhere and that somewhere is RanVeer's some light hearted and some intense moments because now stroy is back on the track. You should focus more on RanVeer's life together and individually too along with the ongoing track as it's also important ( Nandini and Jai's marriage ) and give some really good Veer and Rani love moments atleast on alternative days. It will surely increase the TRP. If you don't believe so just try it for once and you will definitely see the positive response that is increased TRP.

Not only me but every viewer and fan of Apna Time Bhi Aayega want this. I did my part. Now, it's your turn to play yours.

And one more thing, I really want to beat the shit out of creatives who are not giving us RanVeer's love moments and you all too for not giving them some brain to do it.😡

Originally posted by: Shimmer_sault

This is called Prakriti ka kahar (nature’s fury)

They need to weed out the thorn in the crew n back office if they want to veer their serial to a Megha TRP slot leader

All ATBA admirers are part of the TRP rating ..... normal couple talk of nokh-jokh is also NIL now

By the way check Fahmaan IGS, his home got flooded with Prakriti ka kahar (nature’s fury), nature too cried so much that his home got flooded

Really, now I am also feeling Prakriti ka kahar after reading this.🤣

But I am not on Instagram so I can't see Fahmaan's

IGS and sometimes posts don't open as I have to login for that and sometimes I can see them.☹️

Originally posted by: 1PariGupta

can't agree more dear 👏👏 hats off to you 👏👏👏 ur each n every word is up to marks. whatever we all want to say ATBA'S CVS n PH dear u said n cover up all the things.

Really Really appreciated ur post from the bottom of my heart ❤❤ hope CVS should learn how to write a romantic love story between the married couples.

Thankyou so much dear Pari.❤️

I had been trying to make myself understand since a long time that they are professionals they know that what to do and how to do but today I gave up. When I saw today's episode then I felt they are really working hard to make the show intresting again and to get viewers back but they still haven't understand that TRP won't increase until they don't give RanVeer's love moments. I watched the Holi mahaepisode promo on YouTube there too comments were like now TRP will increase if they give this kind of love scenes of RanVeer. We (fans of ATBA on India forums) are not the only one who want their love scenes, everyone wants it and everyone has got the point of TRP decrease except the creatives.🙁

But does it really reaches to them? Because I don't think that they would read this kind of things here. I wrote everything because I read the topic suggestion thread for ATBA writers. But I am feeling good now as I literally had to went it out.🙂

And thankyou again because your words literally touched my heart.❤️

MF are lambi race ka ghoda

Megha second serial as lead after 2 years in the main industry

Fahmaan first serial as lead after 9 years

His 9 years n Her just 2 years With amazing face profile ..... n both amazing voice modulation...... can learn a lot from each other which will up their quotient by leap n bounds

Just imagine 200 episodes with repetitive emotions, their variations solo or as duo were “out of box”

They know acting, dance, singing n writing poetry or voice modulation in different language dialects

This full resistance by cast or crew or external factors will spoil the careers of all mostly MF

Many may feel that they are a NO NO zone, n may not approach them for short films or main lead for their next

The scenes requested are for any leads, so all know they are part n parcel of lead characterisations. Here They are at ground zero never started off... that is baffling

So why are they so touchy on this really it is baffling ??

Originally posted by: LoveYourself_20

Thankyou so much dear Pari.❤️

I had been trying to make myself understand since a long time that they are professionals they know that what to do and how to do but today I gave up. When I saw today's episode then I felt they are really working hard to make the show intresting again and to get viewers back but they still haven't understand that TRP won't increase until they don't give RanVeer's love moments. I watched the Holi mahaepisode promo on YouTube there too comments were like now TRP will increase if they give this kind of love scenes of RanVeer. We (fans of ATBA on India forums) are not the only one who want their love scenes, everyone wants it and everyone has got the point of TRP decrease except the creatives.🙁

But does it really reaches to them? Because I don't think that they would read this kind of things here. I wrote everything because I read the topic suggestion thread for ATBA writers. But I am feeling good now as I literally had to went it out.🙂

And thankyou again because your words literally touched my heart.❤️

I want the one in the comma to be veers dad. A positive character who will dethrone ranisa.

In case if it is a negative character I want all the villans minus jai to unite against him. Please don't make it too negative by having too many villans.

We are happy now the tracks don't last more than two weeks.

One more

WE DON'T WANT ANYMORE TRYING TO SEPARATE RANVEER TRACKS OR MU BETWEEN RANVEER . A BIG NO FOR THOSE. YOU HAVE OVER USED THOSE TRACKS.