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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

Hey Hina! Thanks for tagging me!

Kya dil ki muraadein puri ki hai is story me! 😳Vanar, Kauva, baa kisi ko bhi nahi baksha karma ne! 👏And then Anuj being AK the business tycoon and Devika being herself was the cherry on top! TV interview bhi de raha hai banda! smiley42

Anu getting affected when she got to know that AK is not single. 😳Maza hi aa gaya! ❤️Keep writing! Looking forward to the next update.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: hinz

Part 1:


"Anu! kahan thi yaar, kab se tera wait kar rahi hoon " yelled Devika slyly stepping away from Anuj.


"sorry woh Baa ki appointment thi aur phone silent par tha aur traffic bhi bohot tha" reasoned Anu and though she tried she couldn't ignore the strange attraction she felt for the guy next to Devika.


"chal koi baat nahi, inhone mujhe bore nahi hone diya, kya naam bataya tha? "


"Anuj" he whispered


"haan Anuj, thanks for keeping me company... it was great meeting you!"


"likewise" he said and smiled courteously while Anu shot daggers at Devika for being her usual over friendly self.


"Anu tu mili hai inse? ye tere naye padosi hai...aaj hi move in kiya hai " announced Devika while Anu gestured a quick hello and dragged her crazy friend into the house.


"bye Anuj, tumhe kuch bhi chahiye hoga toh ye meri friend hai na usse maang lena"


"Devika ho gaya? “ yelled Anu and shut the door behind them.


"uff Anu ...kitna hot hai yaar!” exclaimed Devika while Anu tried to pretend she wasn't bothered when she was.


"but sadly single nahi hai" pouted Devika leaving Anu a little perturbed.


"tune itni der mein ye bhi pooch liya?" asked Anu while putting the grocery away.


"haan toh tera naya padosi hai, information toh rakhni chahiye na" quipped Devika making Anu wonder what else she could find about the intimidating stranger next door and she asked "acha kyu?"


"arey kya pata mai usse acchi lag jaati aur hamara koi scene ban jaata aagey jaakar?"


"matlab duniya ke saare singles par tu try karegi?"


"nahi, saare nahi, bas hot waale..."


"paagal chokri"


"accha chal wo sab chod, mere liye acchi si chai bana de na please"


"accha na, pehle kapde badal ke aati hoon phir chai ke sath gappe lagayenge”


"yes!!! accha sun Anuj ko bhi bula lein chai peene?"


"Devika!!!!" yelled Anu and slapped her on the head for saying what she was hoping she would say...


"arey aaj hi shift kiya hai, uske paas samaan bhi nahi hoga isliye keh rahi thi, kya Anu tu bhi"


"tune hi toh kaha tha uski wife hai, wo bana degi tu chinta mat kar"


"iska matlab tujhe bhi bura laga ki wo single nahi hai? oh my God, aaj ka din toh sunehre aksharo mein likha jayega ki kaise meri sant jaisi dost Anu ko Anuj ke single na hone ka dukh hua"


"by the way woh married nahi hai, par single bhi nahi hai"


"matlab?"


"arey itna interest aa raha hai hottie neighbour ke relationship status mein khud hi pooch le, main kyu batao?


********



Serving some freshly made dhokla with tea Anu sat opposite Devika who looked rather solemn at that point, Anu wondered what could have changed her mood in a short while.


“Kya hua? tu thik hai?” she asked


“haan yaar... bohot khush hoon”


“khush hai toh aise dukhi shakal kyu bana rahi hai”


“dukhi nahi yaar bas bohot proud feel kar rahi hoon tere liye”


“oh, matlab tu bhi in reporters ki baaton mein agayi, arey inka toh kaam hi hai sab badha chadha ke likhna, tuitna dhyan mat de” said Anu snatching the magazine from Devika that featured her on the entrepreneur of the year page.


“nahi Anu aisi baat nahi hai, maine tujhe dekha hai, tootke sambhalte hue, kaise tune tere divorce ke baad apni zindagi ko bikharne nahi diya aur kaise tune apne bal boothe par apna business shuru kiya aur aaj tu un saari single aurton ke liye inspiration hai... Arey tune toh Vanraj ke jail jaane ke baad uske maa baap ko bhi sambhala, kaise kar leti hai Anu?” in awe of Anu’s strength Devika felt emotionally moved by her friend who took every battle head on.


“bas kar Devika, woh mera bhi parivar hai aur unke liye kuch karna koi badi baat nahi hai” Anu was at her modest best.


“phir bhi yaar, ye wahi Baa hai jinhone tujhe taane maarne ka koi mauka nahi choda, par ab toh mujhe bhi bura lagta hai unke liye” said Devika thinking of how Baa had turned into a depressed soul since Vanraj was convicted of accidentally murdering his wife Kavya and was currently serving his sentence.


“accha chod na kya leke baith gayi hai tu, kuch aur baat karein?” said Anu trying to break the unplanned melancholy.



Devika thought of the perfect mood uplifter and said “toh phir tere hot padosi ki baat karein? and they burst into laughter thinking of how hung up they were on the new neighbour.





**********



After Devika left, Anu made herself another cup of tea and curled up on the couch to finish knitting the mittens for Kinjal’s baby that was due any day now.


She switched on the TV for background noise and there he was...

Mr. Anuj Kapadia, the big NRI business tycoon being interviewed about his life.


Interviewer: “Mr.Kapadia itne saal US mein rehne ke baad ab aapka India aane ka koi khaas maksad?”


Anu quickly grabbed her glasses to see clearly and listen to what the man had to say for her to her to join the dots.


Anuj: “special maksad hai woh special insaan jisne liye mai lauta hoon”


Interviewer: “kya aap share karna chahenge uss special someone ka naam, kya wo aapki?


Anuj: “abhi nahi, jis din woh meri ho jayegi, us din aapko sabse pehle bataunga”


Anu couldn't help think if this was a sign from the universe.





**************


ye lo ji part 1, bolna kaisa laga♥️


Oh my god, how did I miss this. What's happening here!? Does devika not know him? I'm so intrigued!

Posted: 3 years ago
#53

Part 2:


'Ding Dong' went the doorbell again and Anu wondered who it could be this time, though it wasn't late. Putting the yarn aside, she muted the TV and rushed to get the door.


"Hi" it was him again, the one she was just watching on the telly.


"Hello" she replied awkwardly as though she had been prying.


"sorry aapko itni late disturb kar raha hoon" he apologised making her curious of what he might ask next.


"nahi koi baat nahi, kahiye"


"woh actually mai yaha naya hoon, I mean Ahmedabad mein naya hoon"


and she mumbled under her breath "haan pata hai US se aaye hai"


"toh mujhe yaha ke baare mein zyada kuch pata nahi, aap toh sab jaanti hogi naa?" what did he mean by sab, she wondered



"sab matlab, grocers, doodh wala, newspaper etc, please inke contact details mujhe de sakti hai aap, if its not too much trouble?"



She looked so cute in the glasses he thought, and though sarees might be her thing, she looked quite nice in casual salwar suits too, like the one she was wearing right now, reminded him of the pink suit he had first seen her in.



She went in to fetch her phone while he was lost in self talk. He had obviously been keeping tabs on her to know what she looked best in.



"Jignesh Patel" she said scrolling through her phone and he replied "nahi mera naam Anuj hai, Anuj Kapadia" and it made her chuckle.



"Oh, I see...you meant the grocers?" she could only manage a nod between her laugh...



and that's how they broke the ice...




***************



It was late afternoon and Samar had come to visit Anu after his dance practice for a show he was meant to be performing in Delhi on the day after Anu's birthday. Anu was very excited for her son's first big break in the corporate world and hoped it would bring him more such offers to help him follow his passion like she did.



"mummy ye men's deo, shaving gel, ye sab aapne kyu mangaya hai?" asked Samar unpacking the bag of groceries that the delivery boy had just dropped off at the door.



"kya bol raha hai bakuda, dikha" said Anu going through the bag filled with mens toiletries and straightaway knew who they were for.



"woh saamne wale naye padosi hai Anuj, ye samaan unka hai, jaa de aa" she ordered and wished it was her delivering the bag.



She peeped through the crevice of the door discreetly and watched Samar talk to the neighbour and was intrigued by the length of their conversation, 'did they know each other?' she wondered but dismissed the thought knowing he had just moved to India.



Finally when Samar returned, she pretended not to seem overexcited and before Samar could say anything she asked " itni der kya baat kar raha tha?"



"arey mummy aapke naye neignour Mr. Kapadia hai" cheered Samar



"haan woh mujhe pata hai...toh?" asked Anu curiosly



"mummy yeh wohi Mr. Kapadia hai jiske event mein mai perform karne wala hoon, aur inhone hi mujhe aur Nandu ko uss din accident se bachaya tha,...he's a very nice man, very humble and down to earth isiliye shayad itne bade businessman hote hue, ek choti si society mein reh rahe hai...US return hotey hue bhi itni simple lifestyle, he's truly an inspiration." said Samar.



Listening to her son speak so highly of him, it made sense why he had that effect on her..his charming personality was what was pulling her towards him and the suave demeanour was an added bonus to the captivating looks.

He was a complete package but also off-limits, she thought reminding herself of his committed status, sighing she made a mental note to thank him for saving her son's life.



**********



"chal bata kya baat hui usse kal?" asked Devika excitedly



Smiling to himself thinking of how adorable she looked last night he said "uska phone number mil gaya mujhe" as if it was big achievement.



Devika looked at his lovestruck friend and tapped on his head to say "arey wo toh tu mujhse bhi le sakta tha, isme kaunsi badi baat hai? ye bata tujhe usne apni birthday party mein invite kiya ki nahi? bas tu usey propose karde birthday wale din, phir ye Anu ki life ka best birthday hoga!"



"Devika yaar, kya bakwaas kar rahi hai...muskhil se toh uska padosi bana hoon, tu pati banne ki baat rahi hai... pehle dost toh ban jaane de, pyaar toh ho jaane de..."




************



here's part 2, batao kaisa laga? sorry it's not as long as the first😳

Edited by hinz - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#54

Good this Anuj has a plan and actuly working to woo Anu.

Nice to imagine Anu in something other than saree and having her own desires and affections.😳


Thank you for updating so quickly and two updates today . 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Damn nice and Devika is our little cupid..❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: hinz

Part 2:


'Ding Dong' went the doorbell again and Anu wondered who it could be this time, though it wasn't late. Putting to yarn aside, she muted the TV and rushed to get the door.


"Hi" it was him again, the one she was just watching on the telly.


"Hello" she replied awkwardly as though she had been prying.


"sorry aapko itni late disturb kar raha hoon" he apologised making her curious of what he might ask next.


"nahi koi baat nahi, kahiye"


"woh actually mai yaha naya hoon, I mean Ahmedabad mein naya hoon"


and she mumbled under her breath "haan pata hai US se aaye hai"


"toh mujhe yaha ke baare mein zyada kuch pata nahi, aap toh sab jaanti hogi naa?" what did he mean by sab, she wondered



"sab matlab, grocers, doodh wala, newspaper etc, please inke contact details mujhe de sakti hai aap, if its not too much trouble?"



She looked so cute in the glasses he thought, and though sarees might be her thing, she looked quite nice in casual salwar suits too, like the one she was wearing right now, reminded him of the pink suit he had first seen her in.



She went in to fetch her phone while he was lost in self talk. He had obviously been keeping tabs on her to know what she looked best in.



"Jignesh Patel" she said scrolling through her phone and he replied "nahi mera naam Anuj hai, Anuj Kapadia" and it made her chuckle.



"Oh, I see...you meant the grocers?" and she could only manage a nod between her laugh...



and that's how they broke the ice...




***************



It was late afternoon and Samar had come to visit Anu after his dance practice for a show he was meant to be performing in Delhi on the day after Anu's birthday. Anu was very excited for her son's first big break in the corporate world and hope it would bring him more such offers to help him follow his passion like she did.



"mummy ye men's deo, shaving gel, ye sab aapne kyu mangaya hai?" asked Samar unpacking the bag of groceries that the delivery boy had just dropped off at the door.



"kya bol raha hai bakuda, dikha" said Anu going through the bad filled with mens toiletries and straightaway knew who they were for.



"woh saamne wale naye padosi hai Anuj, ye samaan unka hai, jaa de aa" she ordered and wished it was her delivering the bag.



She peeped through the crevice of the door discreetly and watched Samar talk to neighbour and intrigued by the length of their conversation, 'did they know each other?' she wondered and dismissed the thought knowing he had just moved to India.



Finally when Samar returned, she pretended not to seem overexcited and before Samar could say anything she asked " itni der kya baat kar raha tha?"



" arey mummy aapke naye neignour Mr. Kapadia hai" cheered Samar



"haan woh mujhe pata hai...toh?" asked Anu curiosly



"mummy yeh wohi Mr. Kapadia hai jiske event mein mai perform karne wala hoon, aur inhone hi mujhe aur Nandu ko uss din accident se bachaya tha,...he's a very nice man, very humble and down to earth isiliye shayad itne bade businessman hote hue, ek choti si society mein reh rahe hai...US return hotey hue bhi itni simple lifestyle, he's truly an inspiration."



Listening to her son speak so highly of him, it made sense why he had that effect on her..his charming personality was what was pulling her towards him and the suave demeanour was an added bonus to the captivating looks.He was a complete package but also off-limits. Reminding herself of his committed status, she sighed and made a mental note to thank him for saving her son's life.



**********



"chal bata kya baat hui usse kal?" asked Devika excitedly



Smiling to himself thinking of how adorable she looked last night he said "uska phone number mil gaya mujhe"



"arey wo toh tu mujhse bhi le sakta tha, isme kaunsi badi baat hai? ye bata tujhe usne apni birthday party mein invite kiya ki nahi? bas tu usey propose karde birthday wale din, phir ye Anu ki life ka best birthday hoga!"



"Devika yaar, kya bakwaas kar rahi hai...muskhil se toh uska padosi bana hoon, tu pati banne ki baat rahi hai... pehle dost toh ban jaane de, pyaar toh ho jaane de..."




************



here's part 2, batao kaisa laga? sorry it's not as long as the first😳


Wow! Devika and Anuj in a conspiracy!

Such fun! Aage kya hoga!?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Anu toh already adhi pat chuki hai.... 🤭🤪🤭🤭

Waiting for next !!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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anuj ka intezaar nahi horaha...

or mujhese bhi.. waiting for the next part

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely update Hinu 🥰🥰🥰


Loving this Anu who is more confident and having desires. Also the Anuj who is wanting to woo her ❤️❤️❤️ Devika is such a sweetheart playing Cupid 💘


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: hinz

Part 2:


'Ding Dong' went the doorbell again and Anu wondered who it could be this time, though it wasn't late. Putting to yarn aside, she muted the TV and rushed to get the door.


"Hi" it was him again, the one she was just watching on the telly.


"Hello" she replied awkwardly as though she had been prying.


"sorry aapko itni late disturb kar raha hoon" he apologised making her curious of what he might ask next.


"nahi koi baat nahi, kahiye"


"woh actually mai yaha naya hoon, I mean Ahmedabad mein naya hoon"


and she mumbled under her breath "haan pata hai US se aaye hai"


"toh mujhe yaha ke baare mein zyada kuch pata nahi, aap toh sab jaanti hogi naa?" what did he mean by sab, she wondered



"sab matlab, grocers, doodh wala, newspaper etc, please inke contact details mujhe de sakti hai aap, if its not too much trouble?"



She looked so cute in the glasses he thought, and though sarees might be her thing, she looked quite nice in casual salwar suits too, like the one she was wearing right now, reminded him of the pink suit he had first seen her in.



She went in to fetch her phone while he was lost in self talk. He had obviously been keeping tabs on her to know what she looked best in.



"Jignesh Patel" she said scrolling through her phone and he replied "nahi mera naam Anuj hai, Anuj Kapadia" and it made her chuckle.



"Oh, I see...you meant the grocers?" and she could only manage a nod between her laugh...



and that's how they broke the ice...




***************



It was late afternoon and Samar had come to visit Anu after his dance practice for a show he was meant to be performing in Delhi on the day after Anu's birthday. Anu was very excited for her son's first big break in the corporate world and hope it would bring him more such offers to help him follow his passion like she did.



"mummy ye men's deo, shaving gel, ye sab aapne kyu mangaya hai?" asked Samar unpacking the bag of groceries that the delivery boy had just dropped off at the door.



"kya bol raha hai bakuda, dikha" said Anu going through the bad filled with mens toiletries and straightaway knew who they were for.



"woh saamne wale naye padosi hai Anuj, ye samaan unka hai, jaa de aa" she ordered and wished it was her delivering the bag.



She peeped through the crevice of the door discreetly and watched Samar talk to neighbour and intrigued by the length of their conversation, 'did they know each other?' she wondered and dismissed the thought knowing he had just moved to India.



Finally when Samar returned, she pretended not to seem overexcited and before Samar could say anything she asked " itni der kya baat kar raha tha?"



" arey mummy aapke naye neignour Mr. Kapadia hai" cheered Samar



"haan woh mujhe pata hai...toh?" asked Anu curiosly



"mummy yeh wohi Mr. Kapadia hai jiske event mein mai perform karne wala hoon, aur inhone hi mujhe aur Nandu ko uss din accident se bachaya tha,...he's a very nice man, very humble and down to earth isiliye shayad itne bade businessman hote hue, ek choti si society mein reh rahe hai...US return hotey hue bhi itni simple lifestyle, he's truly an inspiration."



Listening to her son speak so highly of him, it made sense why he had that effect on her..his charming personality was what was pulling her towards him and the suave demeanour was an added bonus to the captivating looks.He was a complete package but also off-limits. Reminding herself of his committed status, she sighed and made a mental note to thank him for saving her son's life.



**********



"chal bata kya baat hui usse kal?" asked Devika excitedly



Smiling to himself thinking of how adorable she looked last night he said "uska phone number mil gaya mujhe"



"arey wo toh tu mujhse bhi le sakta tha, isme kaunsi badi baat hai? ye bata tujhe usne apni birthday party mein invite kiya ki nahi? bas tu usey propose karde birthday wale din, phir ye Anu ki life ka best birthday hoga!"



"Devika yaar, kya bakwaas kar rahi hai...muskhil se toh uska padosi bana hoon, tu pati banne ki baat rahi hai... pehle dost toh ban jaane de, pyaar toh ho jaane de..."




************



here's part 2, batao kaisa laga? sorry it's not as long as the first😳

I love this approach of Anuj. So much fun. I'm excited for her to fall in love with this loverboy neighbor. U r so creative with your stories Hina. Kaise soch leti ho?

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