The Hockey Stick tale

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Panic stricken seeing her in pain

He blurted the havoc his hockey stick had caused

She the reason then a n d now

To unleash the beast reigned in and how

Two decades and more later

She still remains the diva in his realm

His displayed rage Affirming the Love

Her significance to him and more

The near fatal attack, the wound he bore

Shook her from slumber and now she knows

What it is to love and be loved

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Uff so lovely!

I have deep respect for poets 🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aren't we all in love with our poet.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Poignantly written realisation ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful poem dear as usual

I m missing your write ups and you here

But thanks a lot for this beautiful piece of art

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I'm missing the discussion too but making the most of my holidays.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome really !!! 🥰🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Missed your posts moon! Loved the poem❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonwearer

Panic stricken seeing her in pain

He blurted the havoc his hockey stick had caused

She the reason then a n d now

To unleash the beast reigned in and how

Two decades and more later

She still remains the diva in his realm

His displayed rage Affirming the Love

Her significance to him and more

The near fatal attack, the wound he bore

Shook her from slumber and now she knows

What it is to love and be loved


Wow.. so beautiful ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Do I have to say more for what you have written in small yet, deep meaning post?

This convey deep meaning of what they felt, of what they did and what all happened.

The layer of emotions are yet to unfold. Will wait for it to enjoy.


P.S. where have you been?

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