MaAn OS : YE RISHTA SHIDDAT HAIN HUMARA || part 2 Updated

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Part 1

Scene Will Be shown After Qawali Sequence

All couples will Be Presenting Age Dance Phase Of Baa BapuJi & In Their Only Anupama is left So She Will Performe representing Baa on A single dance Number...

So Everyone goes dressed Up again according to their Song

Kavya Slowly Comes being ready properly Outside

Kavya : V Dekho nh main kaisi lag rahi hoon?

Vanraj :{without looking at her& Concentrating on his doings)'Acchi Lag rahi hoo

Kavya gets upset as he didn't even looked at her fr once 'Kya V TUMNE meri taraf dekha Tak nhi''Aur

Vanraj cuts her talks in middle ''please yrr kavya Kaam kar raha hoon karne do nh sabke Performance thodi der main Shuru hojayenge Abhi..

Other Side :

Anuj is impaitently once look at his watch Then at the doorway on the room In which Anupama has Gone To Change

Devika is noticing his every action "Oyee Hoyee Kon Tha Woh insaan Joh mujhe Sabar ko leke lecture deta tha ki mujhme bohoth Sabar Aur aj Wohi insaan kisiki ek jhalak pane k liya itna besabar Horaha hain

Anuj Seemlessly lies out ''Dekh tu jaisa soch rahi hain waisa kuch nhi'' hain main toh Sirf time Kya hua hain woh check kar Raha tha woh sabke Performance Shuru hone wale hain nh 😳

Devika placed her hand on his shoulder & winking at him ''Haan Woh Teri wali ka bhi

By this Anuj slightly blushed, splits out ''Haan meri wali ka bhi

Devika Chukels by this which made anuj realize what He said''Woh nhi'' I mean Anu... Anupama ka bhi Performance hain toh Wo...


Dekho chhodke kis raste vo jaate hain

Saare raste vaapas mere dil ko aate hain

Preyasee….

Nahin saamne

Nahin saamne ye alag baat hai

Nahin saamne ye alag baat hai

Mere paas hai

Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai

Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai

Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Preyasee….


(just Then Anu Comes out of the room

Wearing dark pink chifon Saree with full sleeve blouse...Anuj gets totally mesmerized by her outcome of the saree looks)

Other Side

"AUR" : Vanraj to gets outstuck by How Beautiful Anupama is looking in this saree

Kavya gets flums seeing V's reaction as he didn't complemented her Welly bt his eyes doesn't taking off from Anupama now

Anupama smilingly goes to Anuj & Devika & She totally senses Anuj's gaze didn't takes a sec break of Her

Devika exclaimed out of happiness''Anu Anu Anu (holds her from shoulder) "Yrr Anu Tu Na Sach main 24 ki Maal Ladki lag rahi hain yrrr

Anuj still awestruckly smiles : Anu gets emmbrassed by her words as Anuj is also present there

"Devika Kya Tu Bhi Chup Kar Neh😳...

Devika smiles at this & about to say something to anuj suddenly Kinjal Called her & She leaves frm there

Anupama turns her face towards Anuj who is still intansly gaze over Her & seeing it she chuckles "Anuj"

FINALLY hearing her calling him out made him back in his sense

Anuj ''Soo...Sorry woh mera Dhayan Kahin Aur tha 🙂


Tera naam maine liya hain yahaan

Mujhe yaad tune kiya hai vahaan

Tera naam maine liya hain yahaan

Mujhe yaad tune kiya hai vahaan


Now Anupama gazes to him ''Itni Sundar Lag rahi hoon Kya ki Apki Nazre Mujhse Hattt hii nehi rahi(she just blur out her mind words)

Anuj Surprisingly looks at her how She asked him this out

Anupama ''Wo...woh...Surry mera woh matlab nhi''.surry...(Hurriedly turned out to go from there)


Bade zor ki aaj barsaat

Bade zor ki aaj barsaat

Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai

Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai

Mere saath hai mere saath hai


"ANU'' (this stops her making forward steps : Anuj Slowly walked up to her side :

Anu sees him : slowly he leans a little towards her :which makes anu to look down

"Tum Itni Sundar Lag rahi hoo ANU Ki main meri sari zindegi ek Jagah beith K Tumhe dekh k kat Sakta Hoon"


Preyasee….


Hearing his words her heart started beating Soo fast that she was listening to her ears

She looked up to him and observe how much love just his eyes is reflecting to her

Both shares an short eyelock


Bichhad ki bhi mujhse juda to nahin

Khafa hai magar bewafa to nahin

Bichhad ki bhi mujhse juda to nahin

Khafa hai magar bewafa to nahin

Mere haath mein hi tera haath hai

Mere haath mein hi tera haath hai


Slowly Anuj proceeds his hands towards her face and touches her face making Anu little shivers & taking an little koel from the corner of her eyes, taking his finger behind her ear

"Anuj Aap ye" & applies on it (Slowly leans on her ears ) "Ye issiliya kyuki main nhi'' cahta ki Tumhe kisiki Nazar lage

Both looks at each other sharing an passionate eye lock

Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai

Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai

Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Mere paas hai mere paas hai

Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Mere paas hai mere paas hai

Preyasee….


Anuj "Aur Meri Toh bilkul bhi nhi'' (chuckles out & Turns to Leave)

"Sacche Pyaar Karna Walon Ki Nazar kabhi nhi'' lagti (he slowly turns to her finding her meaningfully smiling at him which Makes him smile too )

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To Be continued.........












So here's my first OS on MaAn...Hope You all like it.....

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woo hoo !!! pyaar oozing out. Not sure how it will play in reality, but this was excellent
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Wow, very beautiful ❤️. Audacious Anu and Anuj, nazar na lage.

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Maar dala❤️

Too good yaar, ye seedhi seedhi flirting is total love.

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This is so beautiful.... Hope we get this nazar utaro scene at least it was so cute 🥰

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This is so beautiful.... ❤️

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Areee maza aa gaya 😳

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this was lovely...maza aa gaya❤️

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Changd The story Name from Tere Mere to Yeh SIDDAT Hain Humara

Part 2

Scene shifts After sometime
to Kavya who's corners glaring at Vanraj as He is still staring at anupama as she was laughing with baa
(Clutching her fist she moves to other side )

"Bohoth Haas Rahi Ho nah Anupama... isiliya kyuki Ghar ki Khusi wapas agayi,Ghar k sare log Sath agaye... Aur bhi Mere V k samne phirse Agayi...(Remembers how V Anupama was laughing hard during marriage celebration discussion)

"SaHi hain Ek Taraf Anuj Ko latka k rakha hain aur Dusri Taraf Phirse V ko Apni taraf kheech Rahi hoo family ko ek karne k bahane se''(angrily looks at anupama)

" You know what Main Mere V ko Tumhe kabhi cheene nhi'' dungi aur Nahi ish ghar main Tumhe wapas ane dungi(smirks out evily) "Aj main tumhari ye khushi,ish ghar Tumhari Joh izzat hain woh tabah kar dungi,aur Yese tabah karungi ki Kisiko Muh Dikhane k layak nhi'' rahogi tum''

"Phir Nah woh Anuj Kapadia tumhare sath Hoga nh Nahi V kuch kar payega 😈😈😈

& She smirkingly remembers What She did about One Hour Ago

Flashback :

Nandini & anupama are inside the room

Anupama "Nandu mei Ye kaise pehen sakti hoon ye mere type k nehi hain..maine kabhi Yese sarees nhi'' pehni hain..Tu samajh nah aur kuch Dede tu mujhe

Nandini " Ap samjho nah aunty Isme burai Kya hain aur itne saalon main nhi'' pehena Toh phir toh Aj pehenna Banta hain...(pulls her cheeks)

Anupama "Accha thik hain meri maa main pehungi...

Only then She gets a call from Pakhi " Accha thik hain sweetu ree Abhi arahi hoon main..
(To Nandini) "Madam ko Baal banane main dikkat horahi hain chal jake pehle usee dekhte hain phir main taiyaar hojaungi (both Leaves from the room)

Seeking into it Kavya Enters & holds the saree unpleasantly "Khubshurat Dikhna Cahti Hoo Na,Aj tumhari woh bezzati karungi
Ki kisise Nazre Milane k layak nhi'' rahogi Tum'' (goes nears dressing table and bring out an scissors...goes near bed side & takes the sarees blouse in her hand and easily cuts down the back zip of it

"So Miss Anupama Abh tumhari Izzat nilaam hota dekh bohoth maza ayega(smirkingly comes out of the room

Flashback ends

Scene changes to all dance performance
All family members does turn by turn

Pakhi "After this amezing Performance Abh arhahi hain Hum sabki Khusi,Meri Pyaari Mummy " ANUPAMA"

ALL claps for her & stealing glance with Anuj anupama happyly goes on the stage

Dance Started :

Raghukul reet sadaa chali aayi
Praan jaaye par vachan na jayi

Raghuvar teri raah nihaarein
Raghuvar teri raah nihaarein
Saaton janam se Siya

(Anuj intansly gaze over her all SMILING)

Ghar more pardesiya
Aao padhaaro piya
Ghar more pardesiya
Aao padhaaro piya

Ta di ya na ta de re na dum
Ta di ya na ta de re na dheem

Na to maiya ki lori
Na hi phaagun ki hori
Mohe kuch doosra na bhaaye re

(Slowly coming down & hugged Baa-bapuji reciting the song lyrics)

Jabse naina yeh jaake
Ik dhanurdhar se laage
Tabse birha mohey sataye re

Duvidha meri sab jag jaane
Duvidha meri sab jag jaane
Jaane naa nirmohiya

(Twrling around everyone her eyes fallen on Anuj who is still intansly Looking at her Slowly going behind him she looks at him Dancing & Both share an small eyelock)

Ghar more pardesiya
Aao padhaaro piya
Ghar more pardesiya
Aao padhaaro piya

(Breaking the eyelock the goes on stag & again started dancing )

Kavya evily staring at her ''Abhi thodi hii der hain tumhari ye muskurahat phir sab cheen jayga

As Anuj didn't take away his eyes away from her suddenly he notices something fishy to her dressed

Gayi panghat par bharan
Bharan paniyan deewani
Gayi panghat par bharan
Bharan paniyan

&Shocked to see her blouse zip is tearing down "" Oh Damn it (fear raises in his eyes 😫)

As Devika was standing beside him ,she notices him fear & look at the direction he was looking which makes her more shock
"Anu"s Blouse ZIP is tearing up 😖

Ho naino ke, naino ke tere baan se
Murchhit huyi re hiraniya
Jhoom jha na na na na
Jhana na na na na

Devika "ANUJ : he looks at her " We Need To Do something Devika

Both meaningfully nodes & runs behind the stage

Bani re bani main teri joganiya
Ghar more pardesiya
Aao padhaaro piya
Ghar more pardesiya
Aao padhaaro piya

Dancing & twriling Very Fastly causes it darted more frequently

Dance about to finish ,Anuj reach's at her behind stage,sees the zip about to open the whole of her Back Suddenly lights turns off placing the whole hall back

Tujhko Bana Doon Main Apna Khuda
Aur Sajde Tere Kar Sakun
Mangu Dua Sath Hone Ki Tere
Kandhe Pe Sar Rakh Sakun

Anuj Runs to her and pulled her closer by placing his left hand over her back

Anupama tried to scream bt Anuj covers her mouth with his right hand

Everyone ''Areee ye acchanak light ko Kya hogaya 😫...

Anuj wishpers in her ears ''Anu Main Hoon Anuj.. please Chillana Maat

Meting her eyes with his as little light flashes over them , This makes her little clam

Vanraj : Samar jake dekh jaraha Kya hua

Dhaga Ek Bandhun Tujhko Mannat Bana Loon
Kaagaz Pe Dil Ke Teri Surat Bana Loon
Chhoote Kabhi Na Woh Aadat Bana Loon
Aa Shiddat Bana Loon Tujhe

...Anuj Slowly leaving her mouth..by this tries to go back but anuj pulled her more closer..Not leaving her eyes for a min & Anuj Quickly carries her in his arms still placing his hand over her back tightly (Rushes out of the hall from behind)

At that time Samar turns on the main switch lightening upp the hall

Kavya looks at the stage finding anupama is not there" Damnnnnn It Ish Light ko bhi Abhi Jana tha...Sara Plan chopat hogaya (clutches her fist angrily)

Scene changes to the room Where Anuj Takes Anupama

Kismat Bana Loon Meri Chaahat Bana Loon
Dil Se Main Mangu Ibaadat Bana Loon
Chhoote Kabhi Na Woh Aadat Bana Loon
Aa Shiddat Bana Loon Tujhe

Anupama "Anuj Kya kar rahe hain aap..mujhe niche utariyan please niche utariyan (upestly looka at him and tried to push him away bt his grip gets more tighten

Anupama"Chodiya mujhe anuj please

Anuj tries to say something bt anupama didn't let him to

Kismat Bana Loon Meri Chaahat Bana Loon
Dil Se Main Mangu Ibaadat Bana Loon
Chhoote Kabhi Na Woh Aadat Bana Loon
Aa Shiddat Bana Loon Tujhe

Anupama "Kya hain yesab aap Mujhe Yese wahan...Sare gharwale tha wahan..Aur Aap mujhe Yese..

"maine apko apna Mana aur aap Yese mere sath jabardasti kar rahe hain (A lone tear escaps her eyes & Anuj closes his eyes hearing this)

This Is Enough for Him & he slowly backwarding her at wall bt still holds her back

Anupama lowers her eyes down "Anuj Please (sobs out a little)

"ANU PLEASE MERI BAAT TOH SUNLO...(she looked at him)

"Tumhe Bachene ke liya Mujhe Tumhare Karib ana padha...(this shocks her)

ANU "Kya Matlab ?

ANUJ slowly one by one taking her hand & placed it over her blouse & looking away from her gestures her to look into the mirror on her behind

Anupama slowly takes her eyes to that direction and mirror shows her the fully ripped zip of her Blouse which already opened her back full

Seeing the scenario she instantly hitted herself back on the wall...

Fear raises in her eyes along with tears "Ye, ye ka..kai...kaise hu..hua..mu.. muj..mujhe
Pa..pa...pata kaise nh...nhii..Chala (mumbled panicking)

Anuj Slowly walked up to her "Anu...Anu... please shant hojao kuch nhi'' hua kuch Galat Nhi hua...

Kyun Yeh Hadein Hain
Yeh Kyun Sarhadein Hain
Itne Hai Kyun Faaslein

She looks at him tearfully''Agr aap waha nhi'' atee...Toh..toh ky....Kya Ho...hota An..Anuj..mai..Main Sabke samne...(brust into tears 😭😭 placing her head over his chest by this he is about to hug her bt instead that he placed his one hand over her Blouse which tears up & another one to her back head claming her down )

After sometime she takes away her head and looks down sobbingly

Anuj Slowly cups her face ''Anu...Anu look at me(she didn't by which anuj makes her look at him)''maine Kahan nah look at me.. Dekho meri taraf (She looks at him)

Manzil Teri Meri Jab Ek Hai Toh
Kyun Hai Alag Raaste

"Tumhare SATH kuch bhi Galat Nehi Hua Hain..Maine kahan tha Mere Rehte hue main kabhi tumhare SATH kuch Galat Nhi hone dunga,Tumhe kabhi hurt nhi'' hone dunga..Sab kuch thik hain...(Assuring her through his eyes)

Anuj think off to lighten up her mood "Abh Bohoth Hogaya Tumhara Rona..tum janti hoo nh main tumhare ankhon main Anshu nhi'' dekh Sakta...So please stop crying (This makes her sob more)

Anuj "Aree tum toh Phirse Rone lagi Yarrr...
MaAn Jao'' Nah(gets an idea) "Aree MaAn Jao Na Apne ish neye Jamane ki KanhaJi ki Baat

Hearing This Anupama intensly looks at him and remembers BapuJi words "Mere Liye Tu Radha Hain Aur Woh Krishna...Anuj Ko Apne Dil main Ane de beta..Ish Yug main Radha Krishna ko bhi milne de" (a lone tear escaps her eyes)

Anuj Slowly wipes out her Tears

Ishq Ki Aisi Kahawat Bana Loon
Paani Pe Likh Doon Likhawat Bana Loon
Goonje Sada Woh Aahat Bana Loon
Aa Shiddat Bana Loon Tujhe

Anupama "Apse Kuch Bolna hain 🥺(Emotionally says)

Anuj "Kya Bolna Hain ANU bolo(confusedly looks on as he sense something in her Eyes as well as in her voice)

Slowly decreasing the gap between them..Anu firstly takes his one hand and pulling him closer placed over her back
: Anuj Being again confused what She is trying to do "Anupama Tum Kya''

Dil Ki Main Tujhko Sajawat Bana Loon
Kuchh Bhi Na Bolun Muskurahat Bana Loon
Barse Khuda Ki Woh Barkat Bana Loon
Aa Shiddat Bana Loon Tujhe

& leave her rest hand from her back again taking anuj's other hand & placed it over her back firmly...

Anuj surprisedly looks at Her

ANUPAMA "APKE LIYA AJ SE MAIN SIRF ANU HOON....() APKI ANU....(ANUJ looks at her with disbelief yet pleasingly)

Anupama Emotionally stares at him and In a moment placing her hands around his neck hugged him tightly and for a moment Anuj just being numb

Kismat Bana Loon Meri Chaahat Bana Loon
Dil Se Main Mangu Ibaadat Bana Loon
Chhoote Kabhi Na Woh Aadat Bana Loon
Aa Shiddat Bana Loon Tujhe

Anupama "Apko Mujhse Thank You sunna nhi'' Pasand nah...Bt Aj main Apke Jariye Humare KanhaJi ko Thank You Bolna Chanugi...Thank You KanhaJi Ji Apne Anuj Ko Meri Zindegi main bheja Jiski Sukar Guzar Main Sari Zindegi Rahungi...

"MUJHE APKA PYAAR,APKI YE SIDDAT QABOOL HAIN ANUJ...MUJHE AAP QABOOL HAIN ANUJ... QUBOOL HAIN...

Hearing this tears rolls Down from Anuj's eyes & he hugged her properly yet tightly as much as he can

Both finds The Blissful solace in each other's arms
















Here's it comes to an end

Hope you all will enjoy this part ....

& Finally kl MaAn k dream sequence and wala hain 😍❤️🙈...























Edited by Iruuu - 3 years ago
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haayyeeeee💓💓💓💓 loved it keep on writing

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