Benaam Rishtey me kya huya ye-OS

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Posted: 3 years ago
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His confession looking right in her eyes made her realise the purity of love that even she can't achieve. This is an unnamed relationship but still there is something very deep inside her which seeded when he said that he will love her till his last breath.

She invited him for breakfast that diwali morning only so that no one will be alone on festival day. He was silent all the way which made her little uncomfortable not around him but with herself. For the first time she tried to look into the mirror to check if she was looking okay for him. She knows that she is free with him.

They reached her home. New home. She looked at her name which he wrote when house deal was done, she has a slight smile on her face. She felt a little warm near her neck, then the husky and deep voice she heard.

"Anupama I m hungry, kuch bana do please, mai bina khaye ghar se nikla tha".

She rushed to kitchen were Anuj was already standing to help her. But she refused and asked him to sit. He was about to deny but she made him remember that he said that he will agree on whatever she says. So he could not refuse more.

Anu from dinning table was taking quick glance of her lady love breathing air which is not making him suffocate. He is relieved today as if his life burden is released. Now he is living his life.

Anu came with breakfast to break his chain of thoughts.

Anuj: u remember what I said that day that I will agree on your every word

Anu: yes I don't forget anything related to you. You know u r precious to me.

Anuj was again awestruck. She as if confessed to love him back. But he thought of concentrating on breakfast. There comfort zone was broken when his phone rang and he looked into his watch. This is the first time that he forgot his meet. He ensured to join in 2 minutes by his phone only.

They were Aarti and Benny his partner on his project on the other side. They were about to finish the meeting when Anu heard something weird, which made her think more of Anuj.

Aarti: love you buddy. Benny you should thank Anuj for rejecting my marriage proposal else how would you find me.

Benny: thank you buddy for rejecting my wife

All three laughed on a lighter notes but Anu looked at Anuj in disbelief that yes she is the reason he is single without any partner from last 26 years.

Anuj: Alright, congratulations on your 10th wedding anniversary. Well let me introduce you to my business partner in India, here she is Anu

Anu has to forcefully came out of the thoughts.

Anu: Jai Shri Krishna

Aarti: you look beautiful Anu

Anu: thank you Aarti. Congratulations on your wedding anniversary. I just got to know.

Aarti laughed and told her the whole story about her and Anuj and how she proposed him after their one night stand and how he refused and asked her to be friends as he will never be able to love anyone.



Alright, I m stopping here. Bas gaaliya mat dena baaki sab thik h. But do tell how was it. I thought of sleeping but I m in lala land today after watching episode. Hehe.

If you want me to add another party do tell me.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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very beautifully written. The finer details of Anupama lookng into the mirror to see if she looked fine. The warmth near her neck, the husky voice.

Him lost in thought by her words you are precious, the missed meeting, the one night stand and rejection of proposal.

Tintin go on...must be evening now

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Plzzz continue dear..too goodđŸ€©đŸ€©đŸ€©đŸ€©

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: tintin0602

His confession looking right in her eyes made her realise the purity of love that even she can't achieve. This is an unnamed relationship but still there is something very deep inside her which seeded when he said that he will love her till his last breath.

She invited him for breakfast that diwali morning only so that no one will be alone on festival day. He was silent all the way which made her little uncomfortable not around him but with herself. For the first time she tried to look into the mirror to check if she was looking okay for him. She knows that she is free with him.

They reached her home. New home. She looked at her name which he wrote when house deal was done, she has a slight smile on her face. She felt a little warm near her neck, then the husky and deep voice she heard.

"Anupama I m hungry, kuch bana do please, mai bina khaye ghar se nikla tha".

She rushed to kitchen were Anuj was already standing to help her. But she refused and asked him to sit. He was about to deny but she made him remember that he said that he will agree on whatever she says. So he could not refuse more.

Anu from dinning table was taking quick glance of her lady love breathing air which is not making him suffocate. He is relieved today as if his life burden is released. Now he is living his life.

Anu came with breakfast to break his chain of thoughts.

Anuj: u remember what I said that day that I will agree on your every word

Anu: yes I don't forget anything related to you. You know u r precious to me.

Anuj was again awestruck. She as if confessed to love him back. But he thought of concentrating on breakfast. There comfort zone was broken when his phone rang and he looked into his watch. This is the first time that he forgot his meet. He ensured to join in 2 minutes by his phone only.

They were Aarti and Benny his partner on his project on the other side. They were about to finish the meeting when Anu heard something weird, which made her think more of Anuj.

Aarti: love you buddy. Benny you should thank Anuj for rejecting my marriage proposal else how would you find me.

Benny: thank you buddy for rejecting my wife

All three laughed on a lighter notes but Anu looked at Anuj in disbelief that yes she is the reason he is single without any partner from last 26 years.

Anuj: Alright, congratulations on your 10th wedding anniversary. Well let me introduce you to my business partner in India, here she is Anu

Anu has to forcefully came out of the thoughts.

Anu: Jai Shri Krishna

Aarti: you look beautiful Anu

Anu: thank you Aarti. Congratulations on your wedding anniversary. I just got to know.

Aarti laughed and told her the whole story about her and Anuj and how she proposed him after their one night stand and how he refused and asked her to be friends as he will never be able to love anyone.



Alright, I m stopping here. Bas gaaliya mat dena baaki sab thik h. But do tell how was it. I thought of sleeping but I m in lala land today after watching episode. Hehe.

If you want me to add another party do tell me.


I am emotional and overwhelmed by reading this itself yaar!!!! ❀❀❀ hugssssssss

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Amazing os yaar. 👏 anu checking on d mirror to see if she's okay. Etc all these fine detailsâ€đŸ‘đŸ‘ pls continue đŸ€—

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Very good one.. how Anu slowly starts to fall for him and also feels guilty somewhere deep down.

Plz continue 😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sorry for the delay. This is prt 2




After Aarti told everything to Anu about how she asked him for marriage and got rejected, Anuj has his focus on Anu, if she should not take that otherwise.

Anuj wanted to end the meet but here Aarti asked Benny for a glass of water. And crossed her line.

Aarti: Anuj, I wanted to live that night once again with you. I wanted to come to your place and have some funn. You know what I mean. You were so good in bed that day, I can't forget that.

Without any second Anu stood up and left the dinning table. It was completely evident that she is uncomfortable with these. Here Anuj knew her every move that what she might be feeling even though he told her every thing about him that how he survived without her. Anuj for the first time has Anu by her side knowing his love and accepting it. He don't want to mess it up just bz of someone he don't care about.

Anuj: Aarti, I think there willl be no next meet between us. It will be Anu or my secretary that will get in touch with you. I will ask someone from the team to give you all the details. If you don't want this then you very well knew that I have other team members as well who can handle your project. Thank you for the meet. Bye.

He didn't allowed any crap from the other side. Without wasting any further time, he rushed to Anu to check if she was okay. But then to his disbelief she was not. She was in tears. Anuj didn't know what is the main cause now.

May be Aarti and his conversion about one night stand, yes this is the only thing but then why she can't feel betrayal bz she don't love him. So why is she like this.

Anuj: I am sorry Anupama, I never knew that Aarti will say such a crap thing. Please believe me it 10 years back. I have told you every thing in the temple. I never loved her.

Anuj was trying to convince her that he never betrayed her and will never do. Only Shae is in his heart.

Anu: wo baat nahi hai.

Anuj: phir, please tell me Anupama meri jaan nikal jati hai when I see you like this. Please tell me.

She was unable to say properly as she was unable to breath. He rushe to the dinning area to search his phone which he throw after finding that Anu was crying. He was about to dial doctors number but was stopped by Anu.

Anu: Main, ....main thik hmm...

She was trying to breath and at the same time try to utter words.

Anu: Suri, Suri, meri ..... Meri wajah se aap..... Itne saalo tak shaadi nahi ki.... Suri...

Anuj: please don't say all this abhi, please tum pahle chair pe baitho. I am hear, I am totally fine.

He offered her water so that she could relax but he all the efforts or words are not calming her.

Anuj: please look at me, I just can't marry anyone when u everything. Can you marry anyone? I am sorry I should not have asked this.

Anu ( trying to speak, her eyes were teary): mai itni badnaseeb hmm ki mujhe pata bhi nahi tha ki koi mujhe itna pyar karta hai or isse bhi badi baat ye hai ki ab mai use wo pyar lauta bhi nahi sakti. Pata nahi kaunsi kismat leke aayi hmm mai.

Anuj now couldn't see her in this condition.

Anuj: mai khush hmm tumahari dosti se, bas ek cheeze I want that u should be happy now. Chahe uske liye mujhe kuch bhi karna ho, I will do it.

His one hand was one table and with other he tried to wipe her tears but he stopped himself with just one inch. He don't want to cross the limit. This was very well noticed by Anu. He gave her the last tissue on the table to wipe her tears. She took that looking at him that he too was crying and they are not stopping from his eyes. He took off his specs to wipe his but in the middle was stopped by Anu. She clucthed her saree pallu and wipped his tears.

Anu: itna to hak denge na mujhe ki mai aansu poch saku?

She landed her head on his hand which was resting on table.

Anuj: Anu please, ab bas, see I am so happy today that I got your friendship on Diwali, my burden is now removed. Sorry not Anu , Anupama....

She looked at him right in his eyes and consoled him, "Aap Anu bol saktey hai, mere paas aapko dene ke liye jo kuch bhi hoga mai dungi, bas mujhe chhod ke mat jana, ". Anuj couldn't believe his ears and yes there is God some where looking at him. She continued, " aapko pata hai aapke rup me Kanhaji ne mujhe 26 saal ka aashirwad diya hai".

Anuj blushed this time but he was okay to show her all his shades.

Anu: waise agli baar Aarti se mai deal karungi, aap nahi. Agar aapki Haan hai to.

He nodded in approval.

Anu: Waisa mujhe pata nahi tha kalse pahle ki aapka gussa itna jyada hai. Aapne to sabki class laga di.

Anuj: Anu yaar, sorry bola maine uski liye.

Anu: na na, nahi to mujhe sab pata kaise chalta and aap kaise milte



Bas guys. This may be thoda cheeze but ye meri expections hai, kuch nahi kar sakti.

Bas galiya na dena. Please do highlight my mistakes.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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tagging more...

Koi rah gaya ho to galiya de sakta hai😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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"You were so good in bed that day, I can't forget that."😆😆thanks for adding this line dear...now my tharki brain will work overtime...anu ki to nikal pari ,iykykđŸ€Ș

Haaye itne acche episode k baad itna mast os...maar hi daal tu seedha

And thanks for tagging otherwise I would have missed thisđŸ€—

Edited by shrizz - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Gaaliyan ya criticism kyun bhai!! Itna sahi likha hai wo bhi itne jaldi đŸ„°đŸ„°


Anu gradually getting possesive. I hope show me bhi aisehi bataye 😂

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