viditi SS; the final hunt CH 9 last part UPDATED

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Riya95

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Daydreamer123
Fab Riya
Read all the chapters together 👏
And you write really awesome

thank u very much aise he saath deti raho 😳

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Miss_Shree

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Nice yrr...too interesting...😊

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siya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Read both parts together..

Aditi to puri taiyayari ke sath ayi hai..😆

Also the plot is very interesting!

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Riya95

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

ch-4

The first sign POWER was encarved in every wall of ruins aditi touched the sign and could see the illusion of those signs in orphanage ,the burning of orphanage , the photo she found there and at last two yellow eyes And she opened her eyes. Meanwhile vikrant found a cemented floor whichis raised high admist those fallen walls and that sign was also made

aditi! he called

she ran to that spot and vik and adu decided to break that and they found the first piece of weapon.they kept it inside a bag and deceided to take shelter for night

(somewhere in dark)

A man with hoodie was moving to and fro and felt a sudden pain and fall on the ground. he raised his head and two eyes glowed.

"maayavi" he called.

And a man whose eyes are also glowing appeared."kya hua vaanraj!"

"Mere taqat kamjor ho rahin hain, wo dono nikaal gayen hain uss hatiyar ke tukro ko judne."lekin mere kaal ka main aisa kaarne he nahin doonga"and he laughed

"tum jao aur unse wo haatiyar ka tukra le lo "

"lekin wo abhi hain kahan "

And Vaanraj showed him the vision and insisted him to follow this good power (i.e. her locket which is a sign of good)

In morning

they woke up and continued their journey. it was almost , afternoon and it seems that they are lost and moving to same place again&again . the locket is showing the wrong path . and now they are frustated.

aab baas hum ek he jagah ke chaakar kaat rahen hain aditi (while throwing his bag)

lekin vikrant...

kekin kya haan? mere baataye raaste par chalne kokeh rahan hu toh nahin tumhe toh karni apne maan ki he hain

aditi(now angry with his attitude0 to thik hain apna raasta khud dhund lo

vikrant overreacted at this put his bag on shoulder and moved leaving aditi behind after sometime he realised this mistake and he returned to that spot But was surprised

those insani jaanwar are holding aditi hand and a man so called maayavi was graabing her hair vikrant tried to save her but maayavi threatened to kill aditi and he surrendered and insani janwar hold vikrant MAAYAVI hold adu locket and pulling it asked her

baata kahan hain wo haatiyar

but she didnot tell and they went to a mansion like place and put vikrant in cell and started torturing adu. He took a knife and by placing it on her shoulder questioned again but she didnot tell and he pierced it slowly and blood started oozing and repeted it she was screaming at every torture and vik could hear her cry but he is helpless . suddenly the locket in adu neck showed power and the shackel loosened and vik reached there

he saw aditi lying half senseless by all the torture and maayavi is standing there grabbing her hair and she is brething heavy . vik suddenly got strength and he cut the rope of chandelier to distract maayavi and took adu and moved away as fast as he could.

SO GUYS HOPE U LIKE IT N SORRY FOR MISTAKES😊