OS: The wretched letter! - Page 2

Originally posted by: lily.lotus.rosy

Too good!! Apke liye kuchh lines to depict my happiness " Mhare hiwra mein naache mor tat thaiya thaiya / Aise bandhe dosti ki dor hui main bawariya / Badla mausam, badle nazare, ya badla hain nazariya?"🤗

Originally posted by: grintson

kya baat hai.. aaj toh mehfil lagg gayi... 😃 pta nahin kavi n sara khan hain..!! forum looks deserted... feels like u n me are two hawks mandraofying over a dessert..😲

Originally posted by: Dwani13

After reading this i feel a great relaxation.Ye anthra-manthra track had made me mad.kab vo dhonom ek ho jayegha?us sundar pal ka inthazar mem hai ab mem.

I wish that this antra unknowingly would help amit to realize his feelings for amita and it will help us to see perfect "PATI AMIT"

thanks a lot for this superb part.i am so much proud of myself having such a buddy who is the owner great realistic,romantic thoughts of life.

🤗this is for you.

Originally posted by: grintson

You nailed it again Kavi...👍🏼 Me and My whole Vocab is feeling helpless... how to express how i am feeling right now... the sad part of the OS stirred my soul and the happy wala part is making me feel like having butterflies in my stomach... 😃

it was jussst beautiful... ❤️

Originally posted by: Momrin

Nice

Originally posted by: lily.lotus.rosy

OMG!! OMG!! Once again another masterpiece emerald!! 👍🏼Like Aman even I'm falling short of my vocabs in commenting to this wonderful write up!! Such beautiful usage of the language has enhanced the beauty, grace & glamor of thislove story & has made it rather extraordinary!! How delightfully & cutely u have expressed the confession part...once again i felt my presence within the story just i have felt in your erstwhile OSs.U know...seriously I feel if the actors ( who r yet to enact the confession part ) goes through a write up like this...it will become very easy for them to understand their part & to emote the scene. Reading this OS really I can't wait any longer 2 watch Amit-Amita's love confession any more!! It was an absolute blissful treat to read your O.S. Thanks 4 bringing 4 us such a masterpiece!! We the AMITIANS r PROUD of U!! Love u dearie!!🤗

Originally posted by: lavender_A2

Wonderful work dearie!!!👍🏼"Varsha :Dekh Ammu, Amitji kafi samajdar aur sulje hue insaan hain. Tumne dekha nahi kis tarah se Kajal ke papa ko unone madat ki aur kissiko kanokan khabar bhi nahi hui. Ussi tarah shayad uss ladki ko bhi koi pareshani hogi, aur woh baat Amit kumar kisiko bhi batana nahi chahthe. Jab Amitji keh rahe hain ki sahi waqt par sab bata denge tho tu etani fikir kyu kar rahi hain !"

I really wish thing turn out to be this way.

Originally posted by: adithyan

fabulous...

Originally posted by: emeraldeye

Thanks lily dearie...super excited that you all are liking it a lot.😳
One e-hug coming your way. 🤗