Teaser to a new FF : Shahi Talwaar...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi,
My name is Ananya and I am new to this forum... But not new to this awesome show.. I have noticed that this forum do not contain much OS and other fan arts so just thinking to pen down my thoughts as an OS...
Here is a short teaser to OS:

Somewhere in ruins present on the outskirts of Baghdad...
Alladin and yasmine found themselves tied with ropes...
Alladin - Nachidii, utho!!! Ankhe kholo nachidi...
But yasmine was still unconscious...
Alladin - yaah Allah!! Kya ghode bech kar so rahi hai...yaha maut ki talwaar gale par latak rahi hai...aur yeh shezaadi ki tarah so rahi hai..
Alladin was mesmerized seeing her face in the moonlight coming from small roshandaan...
Soon Alladin noticed few hair strands on her face. He came near to her face and gently tried to blow away those strands...
Suddenly Yasmine opened her eyes and saw Alladin so close to her..Their eyes met... Yasmine could feel Alladin 's warm breath.

So that's it... Please give your ideas, suggestions and tell me whether I should Write it or not... 😊😊
Edited by 1973deepak - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Welcome here Ananya 🤗
I am moni . I also love this Awesome show, SidNeet and our AlaSmine ❤️

Beautiful teaser . Plz continue with it. Would love to read it
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk

Welcome here Ananya 🤗

I am moni . I also love this Awesome show, SidNeet and our AlaSmine ❤️

Beautiful teaser . Plz continue with it. Would love to read it

Hi moni Thanks for the compliment .. Our AlaSmine are so adorable that no one can stay away from them .. Will continue soon 😊😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Teaser is very beautiful. While reading it I can imagine our alasmin. Do continue
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanchita1410

Teaser is very beautiful. While reading it I can imagine our alasmin. Do continue

Thanks sanchita for the compliment.. I am glad that you like the teaser... Will continue soon 😊😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice teaser Ananya !! Do continue with your work.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anonymous8

Nice teaser Ananya !! Do continue with your work.

Thanks dear for the appreciation... Will continue soon ..
Btw Can you tell me your name? 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks dear for the appreciation... Will continue soon ..
Btw Can you tell me your name? 😳


Yeah sure :) ,my name is Anamika.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anonymous8


Yeah sure :) ,my name is Anamika.

Nice name Anamika... I have updated the first part of the OS Do read it and tell me whether you like it or not... 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Hi,

My name is Ananya and I am new to this forum... But not new to this awesome show.. I have noticed that this forum do not contain much OS and other fan arts so just thinking to pen down my thoughts as an OS...
Here is a short teaser to OS:

Somewhere in ruins present on the outskirts of Baghdad...
Alladin and yasmine found themselves tied with ropes...
Alladin - Nachidii, utho!!! Ankhe kholo nachidi...
But yasmine was still unconscious...
Alladin - yaah Allah!! Kya ghode bech kar so rahi hai...yaha maut ki talwaar gale par latak rahi hai...aur yeh shezaadi ki tarah so rahi hai..
Alladin was mesmerized seeing her face in the moonlight coming from small roshandaan...
Soon Alladin noticed few hair strands on her face. He came near to her face and gently tried to blow away those strands...
Suddenly Yasmine opened her eyes and saw Alladin so close to her..Their eyes met... Yasmine could feel Alladin 's warm breath.

So that's it... Please give your ideas, suggestions and tell me whether I should Write it or not... 😊😊

👏
Edited by Avneet_is_love - 6 years ago

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