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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys.Well Most of u guys don't know my real name,so i am reintroducing myself...This is Preyota and this is my First OS. I wanna delicate this OS to one of my sweetest friend in this Forum - Nikhad (#Yudigirl )...Hope all of u will like it 😊 [Plse forgive me for all my grammatical and other mistakes]
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[my story starts after Akash returned Delhi recovering from the attack]
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Akash returned Delhi & without taking any medical leave rejoined Indie immediately. Next day was 31st december & was his first flight after his attack.It was a flight to Goa again & again with the same co-pilot First officer Ananya Rawat.

[Next day in the cockpit]

Akash entered the cockpit, Ananya was already there checking everything .. prepairing the check list.
Akash with a soft smile " Good Morning 1st officer"Ananya smiled back slightly " Ohh.. Goodmoring Captain Saluja.Welcome back. How r u now?" akash : " Fine and u ?'' ananya : " Fine"
Akash took his sit & they were preparing for take off when the cockpit door opened.It was none other than Rohit Mafatlal.Seeing Rohit Ananya smiled automatically (as he helped her during her bad days)
Smiling Ananya asked "r u also flying with us today" ..." Yes my most beautiful pilot "..." Ohh! that's great " Akash was not liking their chit-chat at all esp Ananya smiling & talking to Rohit in such a friendly way.So he interfered in between..."Mr.Mafatlal sorry to say it's time for take off. U better go back to ur seat , for ur own safety." ...Rohit : " Sure captain. Btw i came in to invite two of my best pilots for 31st night party , I am hosting in Goa for few of my friends who live there. I will be honourned if u two joined" .. before akash could even decide Ananya immediately answerd " Sure
sir we will be there" Rohit : " Great. The party starts at 8:30" sayinng this he left.

[It was a silent flight not the usual Akya flight. Both of them were ignoring each other .. Akash because of his restrictions & ananya because she was hurt by the hospital incidence & so she decided to pay him not caring abt him and ignoring him. They landed flight smoothly as usual.]

They reached the hotel & their rooms were next to each other. Akash was still irritated with Ananya & Rohit's behaviour towards each other. He feels that Rohit is soon going to take his place in Ananya's life.Out of irritation before entering he asked Ananya " So, miss.Rawat r we going to the party togetheror u would enjoy to go with Rohit? ... Ananya was already upset with his silent treatment and now sensing the irritation in his voice she answered " Well captain since Rohit is hosting the party, he will be pretty much busy. So, i think we can go together" saying this she went to her room leaving akash shocked with the ans.Akash went to his room and soon both of them went into deep sleep.

[At 7:30]
[Akash's room]

Akash wore a blue suit with a light blue T-shirt inside.He was hurt with Ananya's words as she said Since rohit is busy that's why she can go with him. He said to himself " So my rulebook doesn't care abt me anymore. Kash mai usey sach bata pata ki mai kitna pyar karta hu usse.It's the toughest thing for me to see her with anybody, even a simple handshake effects me a lot." he closed his eyes in depression " Come on leave it Akash. U deserve it. ok lets go and check if she is ready"
He went to Ananya's room and knock and when she opened the door ... he stood there open mouthed staring at her ... he was just mermerised by her beauty. She was wearing a blue gown with blue diamond necklace and earrings. She was looking heavenly. He couldn't move his eyes from her. Unknowingly he murmured "BEAUTIFUL".. ananya looked at him and asked " ap ne kuch kaha?" Akash came out of his dream world " yes .. r u ready?" ananya :"Just give me 5 min & plse don't stand there come in and sit" ananya was abt to tie her hair into a bun seeing this Akash said " Aise hi rehne do , khule baalo mein tum bohot acchi lagti ho" Ananya was surprised by this sudden comment but let her hair open as Akash's wish.

In the car Akash thought to himself of not ignoring her atleast in this day and broke the silence " Ananya, u r looking very beautiful today " Ananya again surprised with this sudden compliment and was very happy as well " Captain ap bhi bohot handsome lag rahi ho aj" at this Akash made a face and asked " Aj matlab?? ap kehna kya chahti hai , har roj kya mai bandar jaisa dikhta hu?" at this ananya burst out laughing " Captain ap bhi na .. maine aisa kab kaha?" and in the mean time they reached the venue.

They were welcomed nicely my Rohit, who praised Ananya making Akash angry again.After abt 1 hr Rohit annoced it was dancing time.Before Akash could decide abt asking Ananya for dancing Rohit asked her.Though she wanted to dance with Akash but she can't even deny Rohit.So she went with him.
Now Akash was burning in jealousy and could burst out in anger any moment when another girl asked her for dance and he went dancing with her.Akya dancing with different people but was staring at each other. It was the time for partner change. before she could land on any other man's arm Akash pulled her by her hand and she landed on his arms hitting her head on his shoulder. Akash slid his hand on Ananya's waist & pulled her closer.They could hear eachother's heartbeats, feel eachother's breath. Akash totally lost himself to Ananya forgetting all his restrictions.Ananya too melted. She put both of her hands around his neck & he pulled her more closer.They were so much lost in eachother that they didn't even noticed that the Dj asked for changing partners.

After the dancing was over Rohit annonced for paper dancing game where paper was folded into half in each mistake. Rohit wanted to dance with Ananya and was approaching towards her. This time Aakash didn't let him take chance. He took Ananya's hand & pulled her towards the dance floor.
Every time they made mistake the paper was folded...Now there was very little space & they were dancinng too close to eachother ... then unable to control they hugged eachother & was lost in eachother's embrace.
The game was over & Akya declared as the winner. Everyone was having fun when Akash's head wound started paining.So Ananya somehow convinced Rohit and they left the party.

They reached their rooms & when akask tried opening the door the key got stuck in the hole and broke.So,Ananya asked him to call the receiption from her room. But the receiptionist informed that the service can be provided only after 12 as it's 31st night. Ananya knew that Akash was not well so she said "Akash u can stay in my room until the problem is solved.First take this painkiller, U will feel better" Akash : " thanks ananya" Ananya : " I will go and freshen up "

She went towards the dressing table for opening her jewelleries. But she was facing problem in opening her necklace.Akash saw this & came near her without even asking her perrmission said " Relax mai kar deti hu" saying this he came more closer , moved her hair to one side. She closed her eyes feeling his Touch. He was also totally lost in her. He removed her jewelleries, then her more closer. This time her back was touching his chest.She could feel his breath on her neck. He wrapped his hand around her And kissed her neck. As his lips touched her skin, her heart started racing more faster. She could feel butterflies in her stomach. She felt her blood was boiling.Heavily breathing she muttered " Akash!!"
At this Akash turned her around & put his finger on her lips"Ssshh!! Let me live this moment ananya" ... Ananya looked at him she had tears in her eyes" Yeh thik nehi hai Akash" Akash shocked: " Kya thik nehi hai?" Ananya: " Natasha ki sath galat kar rahi ho tum.Tum don ek dusre se pyar karte ho. u can't loose urself like this. I don't want her to blame u as cheater just because of me" Akash was hell shocked & shouted angrily holding her by shoulder " What??!! Mai aur Natasha??That's what u think ... Have u lost it Ananya??" Ananya: "Toh phir usdin hospital me jo huya vo kya tha?"
Akash came back to reality ... remembering all his restriction and his mission.But it was too late. He caan't back off ignoring her again.
"Ananya i can't tell u the truth ... mei majboor hu" Ananya : " DIB Akash Saluja mujhe Mahima ki diary se apke identity ka pata chal juka hai... Main dusre sach ki baath kar rahi hu. Sach kya hai Akash?"Akash giving a sharp look at her " The truth is I LOVE U ANANYA ... I AM ONLY YOURS...Yehi sach hai do u understand Mai srif tumse pyar karta hu" ... saying this he went near her and put his lips on hers... she responded equally ... They kissed eachother passionately ..At this moment the clock strike 12 ... There were fireworks all over the sky cheering for Happy New Year 2015!!
They broke their kiss & Ananya said " Happy New year Akash. I Love You " Akash : " Happy new year my rule ki devi . I Love you too".They hugged eachother and got lost in their embrace.
It was a new starting of their life ... They lived happily ever after.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..
I really loved this.
Akya romantic moments was uber romantic,especially,bedroom ka scene.
Akya dance was awesome and lovely.
I loved it a lot.
Do write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely OS the Akya scenes were amazing.
My fav scene was the bedroom scene loved it beautifully written 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...anika...

Wow..
I really loved this.
Akya romantic moments was uber romantic,especially,bedroom ka scene.
Akya dance was awesome and lovely.
I loved it a lot.
Do write more.


Thanks a lot Anika ... really happy that u liked it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laadifan12

Lovely OS the Akya scenes were amazing.

My fav scene was the bedroom scene loved it beautifully written😊


Thanks a lot dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awwwh preyota my sweeetuuu! u dedicated this OS to meee? yeiii XD so so so happy!

and the OS, you told me you can't write then what it was? :O -_- this was just sooo goood! this was your first one, na? amazing XD keep writing my sweety love! ar eitake dui part e diti tui? eto choto ta? alshi kothakar >_<

I LOVE YOU shooo musssh!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I don't believe it that this is ur first Os! It was too good my dear! 😛
I really liked d whole concept & d little twists inbetween! 😳
Aww! Akya dancing scene & that necklace scene was so romantic! Wow! Well done! 👏
Eagerly waiting to read more from u! ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: yudigirl

Awwwh preyota my sweeetuuu! u dedicated this OS to meee? yeiii XD so so so happy!

and the OS, you told me you can't write then what it was? :O -_- this was just sooo goood! this was your first one, na? amazing XD keep writing my sweety love! ar eitake dui part e diti tui? eto choto ta? alshi kothakar >_<

I LOVE YOU shooo musssh!


Thank u sweet heart for liking it. I was so nervous before posting it. Eta aro boro chilo tai bolsilam 2 parts e dibo .. type korte korte choto korsi :p
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow preyota that is amazing 😊
tooo awesome
enjoyed reading it.loved it so much
really cute & sweet
U r a wonderful writer
U shud write much moe dear
All the best
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: akanksha1319

I don't believe it that this is ur first Os! It was too good my dear! 😛
I really liked d whole concept & d little twists inbetween! 😳
Aww! Akya dancing scene & that necklace scene was so romantic! Wow! Well done! 👏
Eagerly waiting to read more from u! ⭐️


Thank u so much dear ... I am really happy that u liked it. Really inspired by ur comments for writing more :)

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