Akya OS ~Aur Ab Pure hai hum~ ##Last part updated on page 3## - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Rona aagaya bubu...
Feeling bad for Ananya..
Continue sooonish.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
So emotional... Loved it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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apuni gooo...u are one awesome writer :* ummmah! pls update soon! :D tonight maybe pls????
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg! Its so hearttouching! Can't see Akya in Pain! Plz bring them together soon!! 😊
And a big hug to u my talented writer! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please isse jaldi continue karo.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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When will u update? Jaldi karo
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys thank u for liking the 1st part.. Here is the last part... sorry for delay.. This part is dedicated to Anika, for whom i started this os and Nikhad who had specially requested to update as she going out of contact for some days...

I'm not sattisfied this tym with my writing.. Not in a good mood bcz of some problems.. But u people plz read aur parne ke baad plz jute nehi marna... 😛 Do comments...



With a broken heart Ananya was walking alone in an empty road.. Like this road her life is now full of emptiness.. She never wanted anything for herself.. She sacrificed her little little happiness for family.. First time she wanted something for herself.. But she lost that.. She was totally broken.. She knew that Aakash loves her but today she realized she was wrong!!

Background Music::

"Pyar hum ko bhi hai

Pyar tum ko bhi hai

To yeh kya silsile ho gaye

Bewafa hum nehi, bewafa tum nehi

To kiu itne giley ho gaye

Chalte chalet kaise yeh fasle ho gaye..

Kya pata kaha hum chale

Doob Gaya Hai Jaise Dard Mein Dil
Aansu Bhari Hain Ab Aankhein

Tanhaaiyon Ki Jo Rut Aa Gayi
Ujdi Hui Hain Sab Raahein

Socha Tha Paayenge Dono Ek Manzil Ko

Raahein Jo Badli To Tum Hi Bata Do
Chalte Chalte Gum Kahan Kaafle Ho Gaye

Hm Mm Mm Oh, Kho Gaye Kahan Raaste

Pyaar Humko Bhi Hai, Pyaar Tumko Bhi Hai
To Yeh Kya Silsile Ho Gaye"

She got fainted.. She didn't have a single drop of water since last 2days.. She was lying on the road... alone...

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And Finally she got back her sense.. The ray of the sunshine fall on her face.. slowly she opened her eyes. Everything was looking blur at first.. It took few second for her to realize everything.. She found her self lying down in a bed.. This place is unknown to her. She didn't knw whose room is this.. Then she noticed him sleeping beside her in a sitting position on the bed.. "Aakash"!! She was shocked.. what's he doing here with her??! So that means he brought her here?? But last night was his wedding!! Thousands of questions came to her mind!! She tried to get up from bed.. Bcz of her movement Aakash woke up from sleep..

Aakash: Ananya.. (Holding her by her arms)

Ananya: Mai yaha kaise? Tum yaha kya kar rehe ho Aakash?? (Tried to free her self from his grip and to stand up but she was so weak that she couldn't even sit properly.. her head was getting heavy due to weakness.. she was abt to fall)

Aakash: Ananya sambhalo..

Ananya: Choro mujhe. Plz let me go..

Aakash: Tumhari tabiyat bohot kharap hai..

Ananya: It shouldn't matter to u.. Mai yaha kaise aayi Aakash? Kiu laye mujhe yaha? U should be with ur wife right nw!! (In a hurt angry tone)

Aakash: Ananya.. plz meri baat suno.. I'll explain u everything but before plz have some this juice.. u need it.. plzz...

Ananya: I don't need anything. Just stay from me Aakash Saluja..

Aakash: okay tum jaisa kahogi I'll do that but plz pehle meri baat sunlo..

Ananya looked at him...

Aakash started to tell her What happened after she left..

#Flash back#

Aakash was looking at Ananya leaving.. Leaving forever.. Tears came out from his eyes. But he has nothing to do.. Then it was the time when he has to apply sindur.. He took the sindur and just when he about to apply that he was stopped by Natasha!

Natasha: No Aakash!(She got up)

Aakash: Kya hua Natasha??

Everyone was shocked!

Natasha: I love u Aakash.. I love u a lot.. But I knw u don't u only love Ananya.. Mujhse shadi karna tumhare liye sirf ek majburi hai.. nothing else. I know mai jitni bhi try karu tum mujhse kabhi pyar nehi karoge.. U'll never be happy with me.. aur shayad mai bhi ek aise insan k sath khush nehi reh paungi jo kisi aur se pyar karte ho! So... Go Aakash.. Go to Ananya..

Aakash: Natasha... tum...

Ananya: I know tumhe aisa lag raha hoga k mai achanak aise tyag k devi kiu ban gayi!! No aakash.. I hate her.. Yess I hate ur Ananya.. but ur happiness is important.. so go... (saying this she left)

Aakash took his car and started.. He called her but no one answerd.. it was the 16th time he was calling her and then a man took the phone and informed him that she is fainted and lying down beside a road.. He was hell worried.. he rushed to the place.. he took Ananya to his home as his home is nearer than any hospital and while driving he called his doc friend to come...

#Flash back end#

Ananya was shocked hearing all this..

Aakash: I love u Ananya.. only u... (Holding her cheeks with both of his hands).. Natasha se shadi karna sirf ek majburi thi.. And then he explained her why was getting married to nuts..

I can't live without u Ananya.. My life is nothing without u.. Please forgive me (With teary eyes)

Ananya hugged him immediately...

Ananya: I love u too Aakash.. I'm sorry.. maine tumhe galat samjha..

Aakash: (Broke the hug) No Ananya I hurt u badly.. I'm sorry...

Then they hugged again... Aakash kissed on her hair.. Then after sometimes they broke the hug..

Aakash: Tumhari tabiyat bohot kharab hai Ananya.. plz now have the juice..

Ananya finishe the juice..

Aakash: Tum baitho mai soup laata hoon..

In 10 mins Aakash came back with veg soup.. And feed her.. Then he gave her medicine.. and told her to have rest.. He helped her to lay down.. He sat beside her moving his hand on her hair.. It took only few mins for to fall into sleep... Whe she got up it was already evening.. She found Aakash standing beside the window.. Slowly she got up from the bed and went to him... holding him by his arm she called him "Aakash"

Aakash: tum uth gayi?? How r u feeling now??

Ananya: I'm better..

Aakash: Okay... tm fresh ho jao I'll bring some food for u..

Ananya stopped him..

Ananya: Aakash.. wait.. kuch deir ruko na yaha.. mere paas.. (Hold his hand)

Aakash understood that she needs him now.. nothing else.. He took her in his embrace.. And kissed on her forehead...

Ananya: I love u Aakash.. Plz aise hi rehna.. humesha.. I feel safe in ur embrace..

Aakash hugged her more tightly..

Aakash: I love u too Ananya... I promise to be there always...

They were lost in each other's embrace.. The light of full was coming from the window to lighten up their life...

...

Mere haat mein tera haat ho

Sari jannate mere sath ho..

Tu jo paas ho

Phir kya yeh jaha

Tere pyar mein ho jau Fanna..

"Adhure saans thi.. Dhadkan bhi adhure the

Ahure hum..

Magara b chand pura hai falak pe

Aur ab Pure hai hum... "

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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Me first to comment.
Thank God Nats ko akal aa gayi😆Reality mein bhi kaash aa jaati😡

Coming to the update well its was a really nice OS I loved it a lot,chalo geele shikwe maaf huye and they confessed to each other
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
It was very good :)
Everything got cleared up and they confessed to each other :D
Do write another one
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Yay..
Finally,sab misunderstandings khatam hogaye hai and Akya confessed to each other.
Lovely OS,bubu...
Love u so much...

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