AKYA OS-- I Love you---Last Part Updated 12/3

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Hi Friends.. Pls find below first part of my next OS -- I Love You...

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" Di.. Why are you tensed.. You will look good in all the dresses... " Said Shefu smilingly

" No Shefu, I am going out with him for the first time..like this.. You know what it means to me.. Its been 6 months and I am waiting for this moment... I have to tell him my feelings today... I really need to look my best..

" hmmm .. wow Di I am so happy for !!"

" Ssshhh Shefu, pls help me yaar... Help me decide what shall I wear" getting worried...

Finally she wore her blue long dress... and she was looking so beautiful

Di, aaj tu captain Akash aapko dekh kar behosh ho jayeingee... You are looking stunning..

Bye Shefu..., she said lovingly and after checking herself in the mirror once again...

She reached Paradise Palace and there was a seat reserved for her...

" That so like Captain" Perfect planner... , she thought !

He had booked a corner table, there were roses on the table and two small candles... perfect ambience... soft music and beautiful place...

She really felt very nice to be there and was eagerly waiting for him to come..Somewhere in her heart she also knew that he too is waiting for this moment..

She waited for 30min.. and he did not come. That was unlike him as he was very punctual and always on time. Infact he was recently awarded the Best Pilot award as well.

She was worried as he was never late.. In their last 6 months of flying together, he was only comfortable with him.. He was too caring and well-mannered with girls. She liked him a lot and always looked upon him as a close friend. Recently she started falling for him as she liked him a lot. He was smart and intelligent as well.

She used to feel her heart beats going up and down, when he was around her, the way he looked at her with his big round eyes... his presence his touch made her go weak every time..

She always wanted to hold him.. and be with him all the time. She was not sure why she started feeling like this.. May be he was way too handsome and good looking! Like a Greek God.

She called his mobile.. but it was not reachable... she was waiting for him for 1 hour...

She really got tensed now and decided to leave with a very heavy sad look..

Why did he embarrass me like this ? Agar dinner ke liye aana hi nahi that u why did he call me here ? and why all this planning?

I will not speak with him now.. for ever.. She thought... I was wrong in thinking he also loves me...
She almost had tears in her eye when she was leaving the place..

Suddenly she got a call...

Hello... Akash..., she said slowly...

Hello Ms... This is Police Inspector Raghav speaking. Akash has met with an accident and he is in critical condition.

Please come immediately to Sanjeevni Hospital.

The entire world came crashing down!! . the moment she heard this... She was shocked to core! Her hands trembling.. body shaking... tears flowing through her eyes... She cursed herself for blaming him for not coming seconds back...

She gathered herself back and reached hospital as soon as possible.. She was hardly breathing!. She did not know whom to call as she knew nothing about him..

She reached the reception.. and ran to operation theatre...

Police and Doctors were outside there.

"Kya hua Akash ko"... She asked in a pained loud voice..and crying her soul out

"Mam, he was buying flowers and then he crossed the road without seeing the truck... he got hit on his head... Since you were calling him.. we called you back!"

She started crying ... loudly... her life was meaningless without him... She realized she loved him a lot..He was his life...

"Woh appke kaun hain ", Police Inspector asked

He is my...( she wanted to say.. who mera sab kuch hai) but somehow words were not escaping her mouth..and she started crying...

"Its ok Mam, we will come back. You first take care of him and yourself. " Please sign these papers.

"Doctor, how is he.. "She asked seeing the doctor coming out of the operation room.

"He is serious! ... He has been hit badly on his head and we hope he does not have much internal bleeding...Please pray to God and have faith. He will be fine! We will be able to confirm only when he gains back consciousness"

She looked at the Doctor with teary eyes... and then asked again

" He will be fine na doctor"

"Yes he will be fine..." he said in a assuring tone and patted her back...

That's what she needed at this point.. She prayed to God and asked for his life... She only wanted her Akash back... and nothing else mattered at this point.

Inde Airlines crew had also come by now.. and her Nanaji also came. She was trying to be brave infront all of them..

Then after some time, Doctor came and said...

-------to be contd
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds really interesting! Plz continue soon... 😊
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scary... plz make him okay soon...
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please continue dying to read what happen next
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He will be fine won't he? 😭
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Wow.. Really interesting and quite scary,as well...
Hope Aakash becomes alright...
Feeling worried.
Continue sooonish..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Mrs Saluja, your husband is stable now.. So we are shifting him to the room..."

She took a relieving sigh and thanked God numerous times.. and she just wanted to see him now.. It was almost early morning now..She completely forgot...how he addressed her.. as his wife... While her Nanaji did hear it properly...

She entered his room.. after sometime.. and saw his pale face... and so many wires tied to his body..

His smile was gone.. as he was in pain.. and she was really shattered seeing him..like this.

She went near him... and held his hand...softly and slowly...

Akash, Please talk to me... " and then she saw Doctor coming in...

Doctor, when will he wake up!

He is under Sedatives, he should be gaining consciousness soon...

After sometime.. he opened his eyes... and then he was surrounded by Nurse and Doctor.. who were trying to check again to make sure he's fine...

Finally after giving police statement... he looked at her.. standing in the corner... in her blue dress.. Sunlight was falling on her face.. and her beautiful face looked heavenly to him...

He knew how much pain she must have undergone.. and it was so foolish for him to run like Teenagers... After buying flowers...

She came closer... and said..

Akash, you really scared me.. How can you be so careless...

He looked at her and gave a faint smile... and said... I am sorry Ananya... and see I am perfectly fine now...

She almost had tears in her eyes.. seeing his condition.. and still that positive attitude...

He held her hand.. and she came in closer to him.. He pressed her hand and assured her that he's fine..

Ananya had been taking care of him as much as possible... as she knew he has no one in this world. She was with him in the hospital most of the time.. They both were in love and both knew about this.

After 2 weeks, once he was completely fine, he was discharged.. They had come really close during these two weeks..

But Akash did have a caretaker.. Keshav who took utmost care of him.

She helped Keshav understand his medicine chart... and his diet plan etc.. He was way too impressed seeing her concern for Akash...

She had been visiting him daily to the hospital and just after 1 day of him being discharged, she was restless... She was missing him and wanted to meet him.. Same was his case... and he too just wanted her to be his side.. He only wanted her to take care ... the way she did in the hospital room.

Seeing her condition... her Nanaji asked her to go and meet him... he had already sensed how deeply they were in love and he had planned to get them married soon..

Then his door bell ranged...

"He is upstairs Beta... and good u came. I need to go out to get some vegtables.. why don't you take this soup for him.." Keshav said

She smiled and took the soup bowl and knocked his door...before entering in.. he was lying on the bed...

He was so happy to see her there... It seemed like he was seeing her after ages

She gave him the soup bowl..

Akash, pls yeh soup pee lo pehle and then we will talk...She said cutely...

He just wanted to hold her... and let her know how much he missed her... and how much he loves her..

He wanted to tease her... and said.." nahi piyonga..." I am bored of drinking all this "

" It's good for you.."

"Ok, Only if you will feed me.". he said like a small baby...

She came near him.. and sat on the bed and took a spoonful of soup and started feeding him slowly...

He was enjoying it fully and she too felt blissful sitting so close to him...

You are so different captain... Akash... unlike the strict stern officer... back at work...she thought!

She was about to leave and go when she felt a tuck on her hand.. and with a strong pull she almost fell on him... her both hands were on his chest...and her lips just inches away from his face

He was looking into her eyes...with all his love...and so was she...

He pulled her even closer with his one hand behind her back... and with other ... lifted her chin...

Her eyes were closed and her face was red as she was blushing...

"I love you Ananya...Sorry for taking so long to admit this... I cannot live without you any more..."She was taken aback...by his sudden confession.. ... surprised.. hearing the magical words she was dying to hear ... She felt her breathing stopped for a minute... and then he expecting a response... shook her slightly..

With tears in her eyes... she said..

I love you too Akash... Very much... And I wanted to confess this during our dinner date... Why did u take so long !

He too had tears in his eyes... and for him she was the only one...

"Why were u waiting for me to say the words Ananya... Couldn't you read my mind.." he asked .and then

embraced her in his arms.. tightly and held her close... She too wrapped her hands around his neck... and hugged him tight...

He moved his hand on her silky hair.. which he was dreaming to touch from so long...

And she too felt him... .. He then moved and nuzzled her hair.. and moving them aside.. kissed her earlobe...

She almost trembled by his touch... and moved in close... he slowly kissed her jawline.. her chin.. her cheeks.. her eyes.. and her nose.. and then looking at her beautiful lips... he drew air on them...

Blowing them apart... he put his lips on her... And started kissing her..

Seeing his lips moving so fast against hers... she too kissed him back intensely... It was very passionate moment...

His hands were moving behind her back...

After some time, she was the first one to break away... as she needed air to breathe... he looked at her flushed face And smiled... and then held her close and kissed her forehead...and said...

I love you a lot...Ananya ... Let's get married...

And then like all happy stories... after 4 weeks, they were married... ... as they could not resist staying away from each other any longer...

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Thanks... I hope you like this.. Though to me it did not turn out real good...
Edited by KBfanNo1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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you liked it... thanks.. i thought it was not what i wanted it to be...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Charu thanks for the beautiful touching romantic OS... It's like a beautiful moment which every women dream for... Akya always super... Anything u write for them will be beautiful only... I like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely :)
Wow wat a passionate kiss😳
Simply perfect according to me :))

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