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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: RagvirFan123

Please update soon waiting for the first chapter

Updating the first chapter in a bit 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was thinking that it's about time I update this SS, so here's the first chapter, I hope I don't bore you all 😳

Chapter 1: Someday

New York City, not a land far, far away, but still one of the most magical cities in the world, its streets buzzing with people and buildings that go on forever, its a kind of where fairy tales seem to be possible no matter who you are. This isn't one of your typical Cinderella Stories there are no pumpkins, no mice, no Cinderella, or at least not the one that you're used to.

Meet Pinto, he was young when he lost his Mum, leaving with him Tuntun, his step father, and then there's also Pinto's step brothers Mithilesh & Yash. They are just a little, how do I say this, Annoying!

Outside near the park, Pinto calls everyone out in the streets, Pinto's friend Madhan is using pots and sticks as drums, people join in and start dancing to the beat and Pinto starts singing.

Babloo walks up to the music and to Pinto, He listens to Pinto and says (Babloo Narrating) "this is a fairytale with a twist, I'm no fairy god mother but Pinto has a dream and all he needs is someone to hear him, and open a door."

Everyone is singing and dancing along with Pinto, suddenly a cab goes past and water splashes on everyone, they start to leave and Pinto tries to stop them says "It's just water, come on people" but they all leave, Babloo walks up to him and puts some money in his hat which was on the floor and says to Pinto "Keep it up man, next time I see you, you better be on an Album Cover" Pinto picks up the hat and says "Well Thank you" and starts walking off, Babloo then turns around and stops Pinto and says "Who knows, maybe someday you will be as famous as her" and points to a bus going past, Pinto turns around to see a bus with Krishna's Picture on it goes past them. Pinto sees it and starts to think about it. He heads off for home and jumps on to his motorbike and rides off, on the way he sees Krishna's pictures on posters everywhere.

Babloo (Narration): and that the beauty of this City, you never know what's gonna happen next, just around the corner there could be something amazing, or someone.

Pinto was on his way home and stops in front of the Mansion and goes in, Chaubay is making a dish and his wife comes in, Pinto goes and sits in front of them, Chaubay says "Hey" to Pinto and Pinto smiles and Chaubay's wife gives him a sandwich, Pinto thanks her and says "You are the best Swetha, if it wasn't for Chaubay, I would have proposed to you right now" and winks at her, Chaubay says "Great, maybe she'd stop bugging me for a bigger ring" Swetha says "This guy, he brings me stuff from the streets everyday, why don't you find me a ring in the streets huh?" and Pinto adds in "Or maybe some customers" Chaubay exclaims "Customers? That's what we need, and your mum only knew how Tuntun turned this into a ghost town, I should do something about it" and with that he cuts the top bit of a carrot off like he is cutting someone's head off, Pinto says "Chaubay doesn't have to do anything because things are not gonna be like this for much longer" Chaubay and Swetha look at him, Swetha says "Really? Well Pinto, you got a little plan brewing?" and Pinto sits up on the counter where he is sitting, he readies himself to tell the plan with a sly smile on his face, he looks at them both and looks down and takes a deep breath and says "Nope I got nothing" and his shoulders drop and so does his smile.

Over at the studio, Krishna is performing for a music video. While performing there is music malfunction, everyone on stage is confused and the director shouts "Cut" and turns around and asks "What's wrong with Playback?" and he turns to Babloo who is the Studio Technician, who replies "I'm working on it boss, I don't know, I think the system had a panic attack or something" and fiddles with the equipment. Then the director speaks in the microphone and says "Alright, everyone take 10". Krishna walks off stage and her dog Tommy runs up to her and she holds him, Sheetal comes pushing her way through and shouts "Get that dog away from my dress! Why can't you have a purse sized dog like all of the other stars? This horse dog doesn't fit your image" Krishna replies "Tommy doesn't care about my image, he loves the real me and I love him. Isn't that right boy?" and she plays with Tommy. "Should I rub your belly? (To Tommy)" she looks up to Sheetal and says "should I rub Sheetal's belly?" to which Sheetal replies "No one touches my belly" in a stern way and Krishna laughs.

In the Singh Mansion, Pinto is stuck cleaning the place his mum once owned, he is cleaning up the living room which was more of a lounge Tuntun turned into, anyone would come in and pay to come and chill there and eat, Tuntun comes in and hands him the broom, Pinto takes it and starts to broom the place, he dusts the tables as well and starts singing to himself again.

Back at the studio Chanchal who is Krishna's friend and also a performer on stage, is on her phone typing away and Krishna is sitting next to her and says "I can barely move in this outfit" Chanchal looks up and says "Well you look amazing" Krishna thanks her and Sheetal from behind says "It's the latest trend" Krishna asks "Well I don't like this new trend and am way too uncomfortable" just then Vidyapati enters and calls out "Krishna" and gives her a welcoming hug, Krishna runs up to him and hugs him back and says "Papa, I didn't think you would make it" and Sheetal shouts "Oh no, no hugging she'll wrinkle..." and before she can complete what she has to say, Vidyapati replies "I think she will survive a wrinkle or two " and Sheetal stammers "Th, th, that's what I was going to say, go for it" and Vidyapati turns around to the reporters and says "The biggest star of Majesty Records, here she is, I remember her singing from when she was three" then he asks her "How the shoot going?" Krishna smiles and replies "Yes it's going great, can I talk to you in private please?" Vidyapati agrees and sends the reporters away.

Precap: Krishna takes Tommy out for a walk and refuses to take the car, Tommy runs away to Pinto who is on his way to Majesty Records, Pinto plays with Tommy and then notices Krishna, he runs up to her to help her gather her papers which had fallen because of Tommy...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Finally u updated your SS. I am so glad about it. Wow it's looking really very interesting. TTS, mythlesh and Yash are annoying keep it up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yay you updated this SS, I loved the first chapter do continue soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Wow Fizu FINALLY!! U updated Rags.I loved it . First chap was quite interesting . Precap too looked interesting .Update Soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very very interesting chapter just loved it and cnt wait for u to continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Great Fiza...enjoyed it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Fizu It's looking very intersting N Loved it 😃 Even precap was too intresting. Do continue soon...Just waiting for it 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prishna_DBPS

Finally u updated your SS. I am so glad about it. Wow it's looking really very interesting. TTS, mythlesh and Yash are annoying keep it up.

Thanks Rachna and yep they are but one of them will turn good towards the end 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ragvir_Prishna

Yay you updated this SS, I loved the first chapter do continue soon =)

Thanks Azifa, I'm not really sure when I will update this but will try soon 😳

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