KrisHika story - Your Life in Mine!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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*starts with the daayan strangling Radhika and Krish is seen sitting in a closed, dark room with just one centre light on*
*a 2 part story on how i wanted the track to go about. Just to increase forum activity. U may throw tomatoes and shoes for this but pls read and comment atleast for forum rank!*

PART 1
Preeti laughed out loud, because she was on her way to get what she wanted - Radhika's life. She pulled Radhika onto the tree with her long braid and strangled her. Radhika suffered in pain and Preeti and Karan laughed, Tulsi was surrounded by black magic and felt helpless, but there was one person who actually felt the pain and that was Krish, who was tied to a chair with ropes in a dark room. As Radhika screamed in pain, Krish too screamed in pain. All he could think about was - if he was kept tied this way then his Radhika would have been tortured to death. He felt helpless, even though he was a man, he couldnt help his wife, his better half in her bad times. He prayed to god to keep his wife safe.
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On the other hand, Preeti is successful in strangling Radhika who breathes her last and falls off dead. Preeti and Karan bury her in a dug area and cover the whole with a cement wall. Preeti tells Tulsi that her 'di' sacrificed her life for her and that now she could live peacefully. She takes back her black magic, and gets into the house with Karan.
Tulsi breaks down near the burial area. She cries loud for her di, and regrets of not having performed her duty properly.
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On the other hand, a miracle happened. As Radhika was buried, the rope with which Krish was tied broke from an area because of the immense force Krish applied. He untangled the rope and freed himself.
He joined his hands and prayed for a moment, then got up and tried to escape.
Tulsi tried hard to lift the wall and free her di, but she failed. At last she decided to use her powers. The wall broke into two halves. Then with the power of her eyes, she moved the two halves of the wall and opened Radhika's doors. She got in and tried to wake Radhika up. She checked her heartbeat, it was working but Radhika showed no response.
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Krish searched for the exit, but he saw two guards standing there. He searched for another way and suddenly found himself in a sand pit with a small hole that guided light into the room. He dug the sand with his hands and then found a way to get out of the place.
He was out of that room. He tried to hide from the guards, then realised that the guards weren't just humans - they were immortals. They spoke about Preeti and Karan, which also gave him a clue about Preeti being a daayan. He realised what a big mistake he had done by telling her everything and trusting her like an elder sister.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow loved it continue soon cant wait to see krish finding radhika and tht to in a bad state wanna know how krish is gonna react plus the title your life is in mine truly reflects the love of them and it just reminded me the way he said take care of my most precious thing which is u ❤️
Edited by dreamyrose - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow lovellyy part waitingg for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dhink chika 🥳
Ohh.. Finally something to read apart from show 😆
Sona plzz continue ..loved it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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kya baat hai sonika plz continnue soon
ps- check my post
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good story line Sonika 😊
Plz continue that will be the light through the darkness of the season 2
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Because everything is going out of track!
PART 2
Tulsi does some magic with her eyes and sprinkles water on Radhika. Radhika gains her breath back and says - Krish!
"Di aap chinta mat karo, hum Krish jiju ko bhi bacha lenge. Aap bas uth jao!"
Krish on the other hand searches for a way to escape from that place! He sees 3 jeeps parked near the house. He ran to the corner most jeep, and found its key inside the jeep. He started the jeep but in vain. He kept trying, finally it started and he rushed from the back road. The guards heard the sound, they rushed into the room and found Krish missing. They ran to the backyard and found that one jeep was missing. They sat in another jeep and began searching for Krish.
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Radhika tried hard to get up. She had become very weak because of staying in an isolated place for almost an hour with no source of light or air. She finally gained consciousness and with Tulsi, escaped from the burial area far into the jungle.
Krish rode the jeep very fast among tall trees, deep in the jungle and Radhika just entered the same jungle. Radhika was unable to run properly. She felt exhausted at every moment. She stopped to catch her breath.
"Didi, mujhe lagta hai usne Krish jiju ko Mumbai mein chupaya hai taki woh aapse door reh sake!"
"Nahi Tulsi, Krish yahin par hain. Main unhe mehsoos kar sakti hoon. Aur vese bhi Preeti shayad hi koi jagah jaanti hogi Mumbai mein jahan woh Krish ko chupa sake. Krish yahin hai, issi sheher mein."
"Par didi woh yahan nahi ho sakte. Hum aapna samay yahan kyun barbaad kare? Chalo yahan se chalte hain aur Krish jiju ko dhoondte hain!"
Tulsi held Radhika's hand, but Radhika was determined. She made sure that she went into the jungle to search for Krish.
Preeti who was spending time with Karan was informed that Krish had escaped. She smirked because she had killed Radhika and now Krish had no meaning to live and planned of killing him too. She went to the burial area to speak to Radhika's spirit but found the broken wall there along with Radhika missing. Her plan had been backfired and she had misunderstood Tulsi. She became furious and set to the jungle with Karan on a jeep.
They walked slowly in the jungle. Radhika tried hard, but got exhausted at every step. When they reached deep inside, she almost gave up and was about to fall when suddenly a man, riding a jeep in fast speed stopped the jeep and held her hand to prevent her from falling. It was Krish.
He exclaimed "Radhika" in joy. He clasped her face, and hugged her tightly.
"Radhika aankhen kholo Radhika! Ab main aa gaya hoon, tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga!"
She opened her eyes to some extent. She felt the warmth of his arms and could feel a connect with his palms that touched her back, and understood it was her own husband Krish.
"Krish!" She gave up and fainted in his arms with a smile of satisfaction on her face. He picked her up, put her on the seat near him and drove away. (Tulsi sat behind).
The next dilemma in his mind was "Ab main kahan jaon?" He wanted to stay away from the mansion area and also did not want to get back to the same place where he had been kept.
"Ab hum kya karenge jiju?" Tulsi asked.
"Jab tak khatra nahi tal jata, hume isi jungle mein ghumna hoga." He pointed out to another way "Hum yahan se chalte hain."
"Par jiju woh ghana jungle hai aur uske aage aapko khatra ho sakta hai."
"Main kisi bhi khatre se khelne ko tayaar hoon, jab tak meri amanat, meri Radhika ka saath hai! Aaj agar maut bhi mujhe gale laga le, main khushi khushi apni jaan de dunga kyunki Radhika ki jaan se badhkar mere liye aur kuch nahi. Krish mein hi Radhika basti hai aur Radhika mein hi, Krish!" Krish exclaimed. Tulsi was happily teared.
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Karan and Preeti tried to look for them. Preeti got the picture of the whole jungle and traced Krish's jeep. She finally spotted his jeep and ordered Karan to reach to them.
Krish drove constantly without stopping and thinking about the directions, where he was supposed to go. He carried on as long as he stayed deep in the jungle, away from everyone. He suddenly took a steep turn to avoid collision with a tree, and unconscious Radhika fell on him. He took his hand off the gear, held her by the shoulder and smiled. He wanted nothing, except her and finally she was with him. He did not want this ride to ever end.
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Karan couldn't cope with his directions. They were left far behind. But with the help of Preeti's powers, they reached, just behind Krish's jeep.
Karan began to honk, and Krish looked into the rear mirror. He was taken aback to see Karan and Preeti because few minutes ago, there wasn't anything behind.
"Jiju sambhal ke!" Tulsi screamed.
Preeti reached for Radhika through her braid but Tulsi avoided it. Preeti's powers were opposed by Tulsi's while Karan chased Krish.
Suddenly Radhika, regained consciousness. The first word she uttered was Krish. Krish and Tulsi comforted her.
"Didi aap chinta mat karo, jiju aur main dono aapke saath hain." she said.
"Krish aap theek toh ho na? Un logo ne aapko zyada tang toh nahi kiya na?" Radhika got hyper.
"Jab tak tum mere saath ho Radhika, main bilkul theek hoon. Aur dekho, aaj hum jahan hain, saath hain, khush hain." Krish assured her. She smiled.
Tulsi was distracted by the conversation and had stopped shielding them from Preeti's powers, which she took advantage of. With her powers, she damaged the breaks of Krish's jeep.
Krish tried hard to apply the breaks. He wondered what had happened to the jeep suddenly. Radhika got tensed but Krish was not afraid. Instead he made arrangements of Radhika getting down from the jeep. He unlocked her door and tried opening it.
"Krish yeh aap kya kar rahe hain?" Radhika was shocked.
"Main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga. Iss jeep se kood (jump out) jao Radhika aur meri amanat ko bacha lo!"
"Aap pagal ho gaye ho Krish. Mujhe iss adhuri kahani ke pure hone se koi matlab nahi, mujhe bas aapka saath chahiye Krish aur kuch nahi. Please mujhe khud se alag nahi karo!"
Preeti used her powers and brought the jeep to a hault. Then Karan banged his jeep into theirs.
Krish and Radhika jerked, and Radhika's head hit on the glass. She was hurt and fell unconscious immediately. Krish lost hope.
"Kyu kiya tumne aisa Radhika? Maine kaha tha tumse ki tum chali jao mujhse door, kyu kiya tumne aise?" he thought to himself.
It was the end of the jungle they'd reached. Krish's jeep moved slowly towards the edge.
Krish recalled Radhika's words "Mujhe khud se alag nahi karo" n was now left with only one option. Krish pulled Radhika towards himself. He held her waist tightly and jumped out of the jeep.
Tulsi too jumped off, got into her snake form and hid behind a tree.
His head hit a rock, he held Radhika's waist even . Krish n Radhika kept rolling, Krish stopped just at the edge. He too was slowly losing consciousness. Karan drove the jeep with a speed and stopped it just before Krish's head. They got down from the jeep.
"Teri biwi ke liye toh mera ek jhatka kafi tha, ab tu kya karega?" Karan asked Krish.
"Krish, main tumhari bhabhi hoon na? Meri baat manoge? Main kehti hoon tum iss khai main kood jao, Radhika toh vaise bhi mar chuki hai, tum zinda rehkar kya karoge? Ya agar tum kaho toh main madad kar doon?" Preeti asked/told Krish.
Krish was almost unconscious. Radhika held him tightly. He too, pressed his fingers into her waist and held it tight.
Preeti kicked Krish, and he fell off the cliff, into the deep jungle down there. Yet Krish did not leave Radhika, neither did she leave him.
Karan and Preeti smirked.
"Ek tha raja, ek thi rani, dono mar gaye, aur adhuri reh gayi kahani." Preeti said.
They sat into the jeep and went home to tell this good news to the family members.
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Tulsi, who hid behind a tree, was sad that she had lost her didi and jiju but was happy that they were together.
"Yeh kahani adhuri na kabhi thi, na kabhi hogi. Aaj bhi Krish aur Radhika jahan bhi hai, saath hain. Woh humare beech mein nahi hain, par saath hain, jo unki kismat mein pichle janam se hi likha hua hai!"
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Edited by Sonikaaaax - 9 years ago

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