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Rumi007 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

What a preview.Can't wait to read it.Please post it ASAP.

At least post the VM early.I love the song very much.

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Posted: 15 years ago
oh wow what a preview, waiting for the full update.
ramas thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Friends
it wil be fine think this way. can abhi loeave her in trouble after he promised her. only reason he wi waiting there to find a way to save Simi. he will not leave her till he finds a way.😊
no need to worry.
Abhi is very strong and more determined in this story because he is 24 and also he can hadnle situation better as he has upper hand. with his family.
also AA are not married lot of factors wil force him to make decision.
wait till tom. I will try to post VM. I am posting other FF today.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: daboo89

OK...You are being unfair....For the preview you put down so much drama and now we have to wait? Why Raksha...Why? You know how much we love your FF's and how much we look forward to reading the chapters every week.......Now from today till when you post I won't be able to sleep.....Please jaldi post karo!!!!!!!!

Thank you for this thrilling preview....But please jaldi post karo.....

It will be posted tom yaar.the episod eis lot more thirlling😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
guys I ain process of posting this story shortly Final check.
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Originally posted by: ramas

guys I ain process of posting this story shortly Final check.

best news i have heard all day....thank you Raksha....🤗..........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Wow Di.Great surprise!One day earlier.🥳

Thank you so much.You are the great.Love you.🤗

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Episode 9 Will Abhi save Simi?

Simi is happy dreaming about Abhi. While Abhi is very sad to find out all About RB and thinks about how is he going to fulfill his promise. He thinks Simi to precious to him and he can not let her ruin her life in hands of RB. He is thinking as he is sleepless. He comes out of his room and walks around. His mom comes and tells him about a party they have to go to tomorrow night Given By RB. Abhi is all happy and charged up. He says" fine mom we will go. Anusha is shocked hearing abhi saying yes. She says to herself: this girl has changed my abhi for good. Matarani please make me meet her fast. Whoever she is I hope Abhi marries her. She is good influence to my Abhi. What I can not do in all these years she did in few weeks. Anusha smiles. And says: thank you beta. I know all these because of that girl. I want to meet her soon. Abhi says: mom you will meet her soon. Yes I have changed because of her. Now I am sleepy. He goes to sleep happily.

Next day Simi is disgusted finding out about the party RB thrown and feels like finding an excuse not to go. But Manju says; she has to go as it is in her honor. Simi dread s going there. But then when she finds out Abhi and his family is going to be there, She is delighted. Though she wonders why did Abhi accepted the invitation? She says to herself: Simi seeing abhi in the party I can go thru anything. But I will not let that dirty man touch me one bit. She gets dressed nicest possible way and comes out with bright smile on her face. Both Manju and RS are happy seeing their Simo happy. They arrive there RB and his mom welcomes them. RB tries to hold her hand. Simi pushes his hand giving him and angry looks and warns him saysing" if you did anything like that again I will call cops. Stay away from me. She sees Abhi coming and she is delighted. She walsk away from RB and welcomes Abhi and his family. Abhi goes to RB and says: let us bury the hatches and start fresh. Bhalla could not believe his ears. He thinks o the threat worked. Now Simbhi won't bother them and he is all happy. He says abhi I am happy and love to your friend. Yaar tu to meri simiji ka yaar hai to mera bhi hua na hitting his back smiling cunningly. Abhi smiles back saying to himself" Bhalla you have no clue what I am going to do with you. Abhi says: I like to take pictures of this function and gift you. RB is even happy. Abhi takes few picture of Rb and Simi. Next he follows RB secretely and takes pictures only to make him look bad. He sees true colors of him in the party. He even follows him to the room where bhalla touches some girl inappropriately and take pictures. Abhi is truly happy when he finds a girl who has come there to threaten RB to expose him if he does not cancel the wedding. Abhi is real happy and decides to help that girl. He follows her after RB slaps her and kicks her out threatening to kill her. Abhi asks gitl to sit in his jeep and tell him the whole story and he will help her get RB and justice. Abhi says: I will hire you a lawyer and you can take him to court. Girl is happy. Abhi takes her to lawyer and then return back to party so RB will not suspect him. He takes few more pictures till they leave.

Next day Abhi meets girl with lawyer and gets all the proofs from the girl. He then goes to RB's house and pretend to take more pictures. He then asks him to celebrate their new friendship with drink. He takes out bottle from his pocket. Both RB and Abhi drinks. Abhi takes more pictures and spills his drink and fill up both glasses. RB is now totally drunk and falls a sleep. Abhi waits a while looking around, Then comes back. RB is still sleeping. He opens his mouth and collect the sample for DNA test. and happily rushes I to girls house to take her to Hospital. and have a DNA test done on the baby she is carrying. Abhi submit RB's sample. And delighted to find out he will have results just in time before the wedding. Abhi is now happy his work is done. As he has lot of preparation to make for Anita's wedding. He goes to Simi;s house taking invitations to show to RB and Manju. They also give simi;s invitation to Abhi. Simi is surprise to see Abhi so happy and relaxed. Abhi gives her her pictures he took at the party and smiles. Simi is puzzled. But she knows what Abhi has promised he will deliver. She gets ready for her mehendi. Every one sings and dances. But simi hates it . When they put RB's name on her hand she wants to wash it off. She says her hand is itching and messes up that part of mehendi deliberately. The girl tries to fix it but it messes up more. Simi is happy. She wants to get over with function/ She is happy when Abhi brings Anita inside. Manju insists on Abhi to have some sweets. Abhi looks at Simi who looks so beautiful nicely dressed. He take few pictures and leave.

Next day they have sangeet where ladies sings. Abhi hears first time simi singing and he is mesmerized. He can not believe how talented Simi is . he even respects her more. He again stays back as every one asks him to take their pictures seeing previous days pictures of Simi. Mehendi. Both Anuj and RS are upset as they are not allowed but Abhi is.. Simi is very happy and blushes when Abhi is taking more pictures of her..

He is also helping Anusha and Anita for the wedding. And buys beautiful dress for simi of his choice fot gift giving saying she is going to be a bride so they should give her something nice . Anita agrees and Anusha is proud of his understanding. Anusha again reminds Abhi he needs to meet that girl Abhi says Mom you will meet her soon.. We will inivite her for Anita's wedding. Abhi has no clue why is he keeping it a secret. He is more worried if RB comes to know about him being Anita's brother he might say something nasty about Simi and him. So he wants to keep it a secret from his mom and Anita. Anusha is happy to learn he will get to meet a girl who changed her son completely. Abhi calls Simi that night and tells her : he is coming tomorrow with all the ammunitions and there will be no wedding. Simi reminds him Abhi if anything messes up it will ruin my life and AA won't be able to get married. Please forget about it all . mujhe mere haal par chhod do. Meri kismat me Rajiv bhalla hi hai. Or maine maan he liya hai. Mujhe usi ke haatho barbaad hona hai. Tum pareshn mat ho.

Abhi says; Simi jab tak mai zinda hoon mai tumhe kabhi barbaad nahi hone dunga. Bhalla tumhare layak nahi hai . Mai jaroor koi Rasta nikalunga. Tum dekhna. Bas aaj ki raat tum chain se solo aur kale ke bade dhamake ka intejar karo. Jo tumhari zindgi me sirf khushi layega.

Abhi kash aisa ho sakta. Don't show me the dreams that are never going to fulfill. I have born with bad luck and it will remain that way. You said it right. I should get a peaceful sleep tonight, From tomorrow I have to burn in hell till I die My life will be that way with Bhalla.. Simi cries. .

Abhi says: simi you have lost trust in me your best friend. Simi says: No abhi I have full trust in you, .but not in my destiny. Even you can not change it.

Simi I told you, You don't look good crying. Please start smiling just for the sake of me.. Let me hear you laugh. Simi says: abhi you are asking a person to laugh who has gotten a life sentence with person like Bhalla. I can not tolerate him being near me and now I have too. She completely breaks down. Abhi asks her to meet him on her terrace in few minutes. Simi is happy, she goes upstairs saying Manju she needs some fresh air and wants to enjoy seating in open as it is her last night in her house. Manju says Ok and hands her shawl. Simi waits for Abhi. Abhi climbs up with camera. Simi starts crying again seeing Abhi. Abhi hugs her and tries to comfort her. Simi cries more covering her mouth sobbing so hard. Abhi says : please Simi stop . I can't see you this way. I feel like killing myself. Simi please have a faith in me. I will not let this marriage happen. Go downstairs take this pills with water and try to sleep. Tomorrow is new day, Have a faith in Matarani. Chalo ab muskurao. He pulls her cheeks. Simi smiles holding his hands and watches Abhi leave. She goes downstairs.The song plays

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And sleeps peacefully dreaming about her marrying Abhi.

Next morning Simi's has a haldi. She misses Abhi. Simi is now ready in dulhan's attire. Anxious to meet Abhi. They reach at wedding venue. Simi waits impatiently for the show down. RB arrive with his gang. Simi is called to put a jaymaal. Simi now looses hope but as she is walking she sees Abhi coming with some girl and police. RB is about to put jaymal in simi;s neck. Abhi says: not so fast bhalla. Inspector please arrest. Him. RB says: abhi what are you talking. What have I done?

Abhi ask the girl to talk. She says: Simiji He promised me to marry me and Now I am carrying his child. I even have proof. She hands Simi DNA report which proves RB is the father. Siimi hands the report to her dad. RS slaps him hard and asks him to leave.

RB says: not so fast uncleji. Pahele aap apni laadli beti ki is ladke se saath harqat to dekhiye. Ye dono ka ye plan tha, Ke mujhko bich me se hataneka. RB hands few pictures of Simbhi together to RS and rest he throws in the air. Accusing Simi and abhi is having love affair and relationship behind his back.

Abhi grabs his collar and hands RS pictures of RB with many other girls and throws some in the air. Abhi then pulls him away from the stage and starts beating him. Bhalla says few more dirty things About Simi and calls her characterless. Manju faints seeing all as ppl start talking. Abhi chokes Bhalla. Inspector asks Abhi to leave him and take him away.

Simi is crying as ppl talk badly about her and Abhi/ Anita and her parents are shocked. Abhi says; please trust me we have no such relation/ Please do not say anything to Siimi. She is pure and so is our relation. Every one laughs at Abhi and makes fun of him.Few of RB's friends make dirty allegations. Abhi fights with them

Abhi says: simi is most wonderful woman but ppl do not realize her worth,. One older man 2 kids agree to marry Simi.. Abhi is shocked as every one says: simi should marry right now it is not a good idea to leave this mandap after haldi and all rasm. As older man comes forward Abhi pushes him away. PPl talk more and RS feels like he is having a heart attack. He holds his chest. Simi can't see RS in this condition. Anuj Rushes to RS.

Simi screams: Abhi you have done enough damage to me and my family reputation. Please Go away right now and leave us alone. I have gotten enough of allegation and taunting for today. It will be best if you stayed away from me and my family. Look at my parents and have a mercy on them. I beg you she folds her hands If you want I will touch your feet please leave. Simi cries. Anuj comes forward and holds his hand.

Abhi says: I can't believe my best friend is thinking this way about me, Simi I never meant to hurt you or your family. I rather die than do that. I wanted to save you from RB. I am sure you will find better person to marry. I will help you.

Some one screams: If you care that much why don't you marry her yourself and end this drama. Abhi holds his collar: Do you think this is a drama?. And why are you laughing.? How can I marry her. I respect her very highly. She is like a mother or older sister or some one you respect so much to me..

Others laugh and says: Do you even think about what you are saying?. In tasveero me to tum laila majnu lagte ho yaar , phir ye sab drama kis liye. Abhi is now really pissed.

Simi holds his hand and says: abhi please leave or I will kill myself. How much more humiliation you want me and my family to go thru?. She bents down to touch his feet. Abhi holds her hands and says: please simi don't do this to me. I never meant to hurt you and you know it. I will leave in few minutes. He sits on the ground holding his head with tears in his eyes. Simi now feels bad seeing Abhi all shatterd.. Anita and mr and Mrs Tarneja are shocked and do not know how to react.

Mr T says: if simi can not get married today then we have to postponed AA's wedding as well. As our guruji said simi has to get married first. Abhi is shocked. He gets up and says: ok dad if you want Simi to get married first she will. Mr T is shocked and says: how and who will marry her now?

Abhi approaches RS and sits on his knees and holds his hand and says: Uncleji I know simi aap ke dil dhadkan hai aur aap apni beti ki bahut ijjat karte hai. Aur mai bhi.I am telling the truth. I have never thought of Simi that way. I respect her like I respect my elders. I am her friend, a friend who saved her from danga and from goons and always felt that I should protect her since Matarani put her hand in my hand. I am the same person that you and auntiji wanted to meet because I saved your daughter, I respect her so much because she is the most wonderful human being I ever met. She has changed me completely from being irresponsible, loafer like running around girls to a responsible person. Uncleji I am her best friend since that night and just want what is best for her. I will never even imagine to ruin hers or your prestige. Since Anita is marrying anuj we will become one family. How can I even think about ruining your's or Simi;s reputation? Please forgive me , If you trust me that I can take care of your daughter and give her same love and respect you have given her. Please Give her hand in mine. I will marry her. Because of me she has suffered so much humiliation and pain today.. I can not take it any more. I will give her all the happiness in the world, I promise. Please uncleji don't say no to me. Abhi begs touching his feet. RS is shocked, Simi is looking at Abhi with tears rolling down her cheeks.

Mr T says: abhi no you can't marry Simi.. How can you even say that? She is older sister of Anuj. Forget it let us go. He holds his hand tring to make him get up. Abhi does not move. Anusha too says; Abhi you can not marry Simi. Your dad is right.

Abhi replies: mom and dad. Why not?. dad is older than you. Does it really matter. Dad do you remember those days when I was only arguing with you and had no intention of helping you ever. Guess who changed me dad and showed me how to become responsible and caring towards our own? Simi changed me with her ways and showed me how to respect you mom and anita and help you since you are my own. Simi taught me how to love and sacrifice for our own. Simi was going to sacrifice her life marrying a scum like RB so that AA can get married. Why can't I make a sacrifice. What am I saying? Simi saved my life. Mom you wanted to meet a girl who changed me right? Simi is that girl and I remember you even wished once that I should marry such girl who can show a right path. Dad do you want me to change again to my old self? Tell me dad what is wrong in marrying Simi?. Look at her. I am not even worthy of her, She is beautiful inside and out. She is lot more educated then your son. She is a professor an independent woman who makes her own living.. I am nothing compare to her working in your business . I was wasting your money. I don't have anything, I can call my own as far as material possessions are concerned. So what do you say mom dad? Don't you think your son is not even worthy of Simi. I will feel lucky if uncleji approves me and give her hand in mine. Mr T and Anusha are speechless.

Manju wakes up and happy to hear all the praises and thought of abhi marrying Simi is a music to her ears, She thanks Matarani folding her hands and waits for Mr and Mrs T's reply.

Abhi and simi waits for both parents' reply. Simi's heart is pounding she does not know how to react. She feels like jumping up and down and screaming thinking finally there is a hope to get her dream, her Abhi, her prince charming. She is also thinking Oh my god! My abhi respects me and thinking so highly of me, Is it good or bad? Anyways It is enough for me to know my Abhi wants to marry me, that is all I wanted from the day I fell in love with him so who cares? She closes her eyes and says: Matarani thank you.

To be continued.

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Edited by ramas - 15 years ago
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I said I'd be back and I am but if you forget me with the translation Ramadi, I'd be sad😭
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WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You cannot end it like this....OMG!!! By the end of next week I will be bald trying to think what has happened........Raksha you are toooooo gooooood....... But yaar how can I wait till next week? This is beyond torture.............Yaar mujhpe nahi toh mere baal pe toh taaras lo!!!! Mujhe takla nahi hona hai!!!!!!!!!!!
Raksha saying all the time you are to good at writing stories is just not enough.........Thank you for giving us these beautiful stories.... I hope next weekend comes around soon...........🤗 Thank you!!!
Translation: sorry for posting this late.....Cynthia....
Friend if not on me then atleast have pity on my hair...I don't want to be bald!!!
Edited by daboo89 - 15 years ago

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