PART 3

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Rajveer give coffee to maan , he denied ..

Rajveer : don't behave like kid .u had not anything last whole day, atleast drink this coffee.

Maan : dad.. plz..

sharmila : plz maan, atleast drink coffee .. maan nod his head .

Dadi (mind): beta ,my whole family waiting for u , u want also same right. Now u have everyone around u ..and waiting for give you more love ..

Doctor come out from ICU ward and signed Rajveer & dev come to her cabin..

Rajveer & dev followed doctor in her cabin.

Doctor cabin

Doctor : plz be seat mr.khurana .both seat opposite to doctor .

Doc: I am Dr.Preet.. I am specialist in neurologist . she have some improvement in her body.. may be chance, she can alive ..

Dev : doc, plz save her.. we don't mind about money , u can bring any specialist doctor to save her..

Preet : Mr.khurana we trying save her only..its not matter of money ..her body not response our treatment. May be she don't want alive .. because of her bad past life.  We could give  medicine cure her wound but we cannot cure her heart wound , Mr.khurana.. I think u understand ..with taunting tone.

Rajveer : yes , Doc..

Preet : don't worry , nothing happen to her , I already my consult my chief dr.rose.

Dev: thanks doctor .

Maan hearing everything in outside doctor cabin., not only maan , sanju & priya also stand with maan..

Rajveer & dev come out from cabin and maan hugged his dad .three of them move out that place.

Sanju & Priya banged to doctor room and preet weird look at them .

Preet : this way u enter in doctor room with taunting tone.

Priya : this way u talk with Khurana family , Preet sorry Dr, Preet ..

Preet ; then what I would do.. Maan hurt our geet, Priya .. I cannot see geet in hospital bed .. I lost my control.

Sanju : I accept preet, he hurt geet but he did unintentionally , he don't know geet love him .

Preet : sorry.. I got angry ..

Sanju : its ok ..

Priya : how u know about geet love matter ..

Preet : I met her , that day she broken down , I never saw that geet in my life time.

Flashback start

Hotel, Parking area..

Girl crying vigorously and preet come to parking area..seeing some one crying heavily ..

Preet touch girl shoulder and girl head raise look at preet .

Preet : geet..with fear face.

Geet hugged tightly : Preet.. with heavily sobbing voice.

Preet : what happened , geet, why u crying..

Geet : maan not love me..he love sam .. I am not deserve him..yes sam only deserve him,  I am unlucky person, first I killed my mom in my birth time, my dad ran out from family because of me , my chotimaa & raji said right. I am cursed person ..if they with me, they life also become curse one. I thought I get maan love  insake I will get my every happiness from him  but everything my dream , how silly I am .in my dream , I built small house through mirror , if anyone hit stone that mirror house broken right  but  I forgot my curse life , my dream never fulfil . why  god not give me die ..i want die ,preet..geet blabbering about her fate .

Preet eyes moist and tears flicked in her eyes : Geet.. why u talk like stupid.. Preet take geet to her home and gave injection make her sleep ..

Flashback end

Preet: morning she not in her room, I called her , she said she went to her house. After hearing her voice, I got calm , she talk normally..

Priya : preet , u don't know before & after in hotel incidents .. maan mistake ka main reason this sanju devil only.

Sanju : Pd, don't blame me , everything happened because of me.. I am not , maan thought he love with sam but true he love with geet ..

Priya : yes  but u only said he love with sam .

Sanju : when I said that he love with sam, I just said he in love but he mistook my word .

Preet :say clearly what happened in geet life..

Flashback start

Sanju, priya , geet & kalpi were good friends in short times , everyone went outing , sometimes maan also company with girls . sanju & priya devil start their mission maaneet together .. of course they joined sweet kalpi in their team also .

Sanju : Priya , what u think maan realize his love or not ..

Priya : I confused .. u r maan friend .. ask him directly .. if he love with anyone..

Sanju : ok , I  will try ..

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Resturant

Maan : sanju , I confused, u help me ..

Sanju (mind): he confuse about geet , sanju don't miss the chance .. say to maan, purpose her soon ..

Sanju : yes, u r my friend, I try to help u , clear ur confusion.

Maan : I met her girl few days back , she more beautiful , I thinking if she stand with me, we were prefect couple.. what u think , I will ask date with her .but I don't know anything about her character . its attraction or love ..with confused face.

Sanju (mind): why maan confusing me , he talk about geet or someone.. if he met other girl, he definietly said me , so he talk about geet .. but why he saying he don't anything about geet.

Maan : sanju... with shout voice.

Sanju : yes , maan..u r in love .. but u r .. maan side hug to sanju ..

Maan : thanks sanju .. bye left the place without hearing sanju incomplete sentence..

Sanju : maan, u r in love with geet with shook her head ..whatever u going purpose her only .

Maan called geet and said come near mall ..

Mall

Maan  waiting for geet and geet come to mall , tapped maan shoulder as maan turn look at geet with smiling face.

Geet : something wrong , ur face glowing like thousand watts bulb.. what going on..

Maan : I tell u later , geet..come help me...maan dragged her to shop..

First both went dressing shop .. geet select dress for maan.

Maan : u r best, u only know my taste ..

Geet give some suit : try these ..

Maan nod his head and try some suit and come to show geet and her eyes strucked  him.. her heart beating fastly ..

Geet (mind): geet control urself , yes u love him crazily but he is not

Maan give saree to geet  : This is for u, .u like it ..

Geet : I don't want ..

Maan : this is my first gift.. u accept my little gift  with stubborn face , plz..come select some gift ..

Geet nod her head and maaneet went to gift shop

Sales man : yes sir, what I can do for u..

Maan: show some gift resemble of love ..

Geet : love .. with slow voice.

Sales Man: see..this gift.. it latest love gift., one piece  only here , it names Crystal flames ..

Maaneet: yes, Crystal flames.. u see this demo..u understand..

A heart shape crystal , inside two heart separated , suddenly two heart burning in fire , after sec two heart mingled to one heart .. with some Bg melody song playing in crystal .

Maan: its cool .. pack this Gift ..

Geet : maan, running madhubala123 film in mall.. with excited voice.

Maan : you want watch , I buy ticket for us ..

Geet : no ..its already late .. I am going home ,some other time..bye 

Maan held her wrist and geet turn look at maan.. both eyes locked , geet come out from starring ..

Geet : Maan..

Maan: yes , geet.

Geet : why u held my wrist .. maan still held her wrist .. he removed his hand from geet .

Maan : u come to XYZ hotel on  .. with eager voice.

Geet : ok but why..

Maan: surprise ..

Geet nod her head : u r crazy maan.. maaneet left the place.

Office

Maan : geet , u come sure na..

Geet : yes maan.. I will ..how many times..u told me .. with fake angry face.

Sasha : u both don't have any work  with taunting tone.

Geet : No sasha mam. He is not mistake .. I am only talk with him..

Sasha : Ms.handa , KC gave money for ur work not for ur chatting ..with angry tone

Maan grinned his teeth : Ms.sasha , who give u right talk with us like this way .

Sasha: Mr. Maan, I am senior for u . don't forgot .

Geet  held maan hand : sorry Mam ..

Sasha left the place..

Maan : geet ,why u stopped me.. today I am not leave her..everytime she taunting u..

Geet : I like it ..with smiling face.

Maan : what sasha taunting.

Geet : No ,I like the way , u support me , protect me .. thanks ..

Maan: u never get angry ..

Geet smiled ..

Maan: u r unbelievable ...with shook his head ..

Rajveer called Maaneet to their cabin and maaneet enter unison in MD cabin.

Rajveer : Geet , what happen with sasha..with serious tone.

Maan ; sir, its not geet mistake .. that sasha..Rajveer show his hand signed stop it.

Rajveer : I asked to geet not u maan..

Geet : Nothing sir, sasha mam not saying anything ..

Rajveer : are u sure ..

Geet : yes sir...

Rajveer : u go to ur cabin .. geet move out cabin but her eyes in maan.. her head bumped to door ..

Geet : ouch.. maan run to her , rub her forehead ..

Maan: are u ok ..with concern voice.. geet nod her head .

Rajveer clear his throat.. geet run out from cabin and maan embrassed in front of dad.

Rajveer : Mr. maan , sit down

Maan : sir, plz warn sasha., stay away from geet .

Rajveer  raised eye brow : why she taunting geet every time  and give more work to her .

Maan: yes sir.

Rajveer: ok no problem, I will transfer geet to Mumbai branch .. I  want efficient staff in Mumbai branch also..

Maan shout : No dad.. don't do it .. I don't want my geet to Mumbai branch .

Rajveer murmur : my geet.. not bad , Maan singh khurana..

Maan: dad, plz with puppy face.

Rajveer: I am just kidding maan, after Annie marriage , u will take over our company and then u will deal with sasha and take care ur geet with teasing tone..

Maan smiled & not notice ur geet word from rajveer : I am going ..

Rajveer : Maan, when u going say geet to u r my son ..

Maan sad face: I am scaring ..dad..but I will say soon..

Rajveer nod his head : ok my boy .. this weekend Annie sausral come to our home.. so before finish ur every work

Maan: yes dad.

Priya , sanju & kalpi come to Geet room..

Kalpi : why geet call us immediately ..with confused face.

Priya : I don't know..u know SD

Sanju : I know.. but we hear from geet mouth..with smirking face.

Step mother : Girls, what r u doing here.. with angry tone.

Kalpi : hello Aunty, how are u .. with fake smile face..

Step mother : I am fine .. nothing happen to me ..

Priya , sanju & kalpi murmur unison : nothing happening to you & ur devil daughter ,we dont know why god not punish you & devil her daughter ..

Step mother : girls , go out my house soon..she went outside.

Priya : yes Aunty ..with irritate face.

Kalpi (mind): we go out ur house soon but when u will go out from earth..with eager voice.plz god , fulfil my wish soon.

Geet : guys , u came..

Four of them enter geet room and girls shocked seeing geet room..

Sanju : geet, why ur room seems like  garbage .

Priya : garbage better than ur room.

Kalpi : why ur dress shattered in every place..

Geet : girls, plz select dress for me.. evening maan said come to XYZ  hotel with blushing face.

Girl shout : omg ...with excited face.

Priya : he is going to purpose u ..

Geet sad face:I don't know..

Sanju : surely he planning for purpose ..

Kalpi : why u wasting time, let make ready her first date..with naughty tone.

Sanju : yes, which dress u going to wear ...

Geet : confused .

Priya : this saree.. geet take saree from priya ..her hand touching that saree smoothly ..

Geet : maan brought for me ..i wear this saree..

Kalpi : I select perfect ornament for saree ..

Sanju : I know, u don't need any make up ,but I do little make up to glowing ur skin to more glow

Few minutes , geet ready for first date ..

Sanju , Priya & kalpi : Maan  going faint to see ur beauty.. geet cheeks red insake of shyness.

Geet : don't imagine more, may be called me for some other reason.

Sanju : hey ladki mujhe pagal kargi..

Priya : its impossible sanju ..

Kalpi : why .. with confused face.

Priya : she already mad .. with laughed loudly ..

Geet :  both stop ur fighting.. first drop me to hotel .. my scooty in workshop ..

Priya: ok sure..

Hotel

Maan walking one side to other side with tensed face..

A lonely dark place, neatly arranged date for couple.. with some lighting ..

Girls stopped in infront of hotel ..and geet step down to ground .

Girls : all the best , geet.. she smiled , her legs step up to her soul side ..

Kalpi : anyone want see maan ka romantic purposal .. with evil smirk .

Sanju & Priya : eveasdropping ..

Kalpi : its not eavesdropping.. u both not come right.. both stay here. I am going bye...she left behind geet ..

Maan eyes strucked  angel way, his eyes not blink  totally freeze in his place.

Sanju : devils,I already said na, maan going freeze after seeing geet .

Kalpi:oyie, when u both come here.. with shocked face.

Sanju & priya : KD , let watch their romance..then we will discuss everything later..

Kalpi: oh yeah.. chupke chupke chori chori..with giggling face.

Sanju : shhh.. kalpi nod her head with pout face.

Maan : she so beautiful.. his heart beat rapidly , his body shivering like same cold wind breeze hit his body .same way geet also afftected by him, she have more butterflies files inside of her stomach . her eyes lash down, she cannot manage his glaze for her.

Geet : Maan..with slow voice.

Maan: I never  notice before  she have sweet voice more than honey ...with mind voice.

Geet blushed heavily : Maan..

Maan : ji ..geet..with stammering tone..

A girl come between maan & geet .

Girl : hi maan.. maan mind come  back from trance

Maan : sam, when u arrived .. with little disappoint face.

Sam : just now..noticed geet ..who is she ..

Geet confused look at sam : ji I am his..

Maan : my friend.. with slow voice..he did not why he saying slow and hesitate voice.

Geet hurt so much (mind): he introduce me to his friend even hesitate voice.. he thought I am not deserve for his friendship  also but  iam thinking  he going to propose me ..

Sam: hi sam, Maan girlfriend .. wow maan, he arranged everything for our date.. its awesome .. with excited face..

Geet moist eyes and she turn her face while wiped her tears and control herself ..and turn back to maan

Geet : congrats maan & sam ..with energetic smile ..

Maan smiled lightly and sam gave broad smile to geet ..

Geet : ok u carry on.. I am leaving..

Maan : geet .. with emotional voice.

Geet hearing his voice and she cannot control anymore, without turn back , she left the place..

Three innocent souls shocked  in their place.

Kalpi : what the hell , who is that girl, why she come between maaneet with fuming voice.

Priya : how dare he.. he broken my geet heart ..

Sanju : me too hell angry with maan..

Both marched to maan place with fuming face..kalpi said wait guys I am also coming ...

Priya & sanju shout : what the hell ongoing maan singh Khurana ..with fuming face

Maan surprised face: sanju , Priya & kalpi.. what r u doing here..

Sanju : what is this ..i never except from u with angry face.

Maan  what I did it sanju ..with confused face.

Sam : hi guys ..

Priya : u shut ur mouth.. if u talk anything .. I don't know what I will do for u..

Maan: priya, why u get angry with sam..

Sanju: then whom we get angry Maan..with same tone

Maan : guys , I already confused  why everyone angry with me..

Sam : maan, u called for me our first date right..but u called more girls not only me..

Maan : shut up sam..with angry face.

Kalpi : sam baby, u go to ur home .. they seriously discussing with maan right..why u poke ur nose ..

Sam : but I am come for date .

Kalpi : ur date over, u never date with MSK in ur life time.. don't worry I book ur cab..go back ur home safely ..

Sam : I don't need ur help .. with fuming face ..left the place.

Kalpi ; thanks..bye.. don't come back ..

Sanju : what the hell..i thought u going purpose to geet.. when sam come between u and geet..

Maan : geet..

Priya: yes, geet..

Maan: geet is my friend ..

Sanju : PD.. I am going kill him sure.. u stupid MSK ..who said , u love with sam.

Maan: u..

Priya & kalpi angry glare to sanju.. and sanju nods her head negatively ..

Sanju : when I said, u love with sam with warning tone.

Maan: when restaurant , u only said right.. I am in love ..

Sanju : oh god, I tried to say u love with geet before u hearing my fully.. u left the place.

Maan : kya..

Priya : Sanju leave him..think about geet..i don't know where is she now ?

Maan fear face: where is geet? What happened to her..

Kalpi : go to check ur girlfriend , sam.. we will go check to our geet ..with taunting tone.

Maan : first tell me what happened to geet ..

Sanju : why u worried about her...are u love with geet  ? no right.. why u bothering about her?

Maan: sanju, she is my friend..

Priya : God sake maan, she is ur love not just only friend .. how many times ,we saw ur eyes love about her ..

Maan : when this happened..

Kalpi :  maan ..with angry tone ..

Maan : why I did not realize ..

Priya : still, u did not ..if any man starring geet what u will do..

Maan: I will beat him sure with possessive voice.

Sanju smirked face: if  she got wound ..

Maan : tears flicked in my eyes .

Sanju : daily u talk about sam Or geet with me..each lines u took geet name ..why ... Maan become numb..

Priya smirked face: last month , why u beated boy , he just flirt with geet but u broke his mouth.

Maan : I don't like anyone flirt with my geet with angry tone.

Kalpi: if anyone kill her heart, her feeling..

Maan : I will kill him..

Sanju : u killed her feeling , killed her heart.. she love u , maan..crazily love with u..

Maan shocked  : she said u.. she love with me..

Sanju : No.. but we know her love  but her soul mate not  recognize her love..

Priya : u don't know anything about her , maan.. she never wish for anything , she scared if wish for anything,she lost her permanately ..same thing happening since from her childhood..first her mother died, her father such crowd person , he ran out from his family in her younger age ,everyone blamed geet, her step mother & sister taunting her everyday, but she supported them .she bare everything alone.first time she wished u , ur love ..but ur broke her heart ..i hate u ..

Sanju : priya , kalpi..lets go ..its waste talk with him..

Flashback end

Kalpi  enter doctor cabin : Preet, she hard take to breathe.. plz come soon with fear face..

Preet : what..she take stethoscope from table..she run to ICU..

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