PART 2

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Maan dropped geet in her house .geet insist come inside but maan denied as its already late and he come pickup her tomorrow.

Geet : thanks  maan, because of u, today I enjoyed so much.

Maan nods his head lightly : me too enjoyed ..ur company not that much  bad with teasing face.. geet twisted her lips .

Maan: bye .. Good night..

Geet: Good night maan...his bike zoomed out but her eyes strucked in his bike way..

U come inside or waving ur boyfriend night time fully with taunting tone ..

Geet turn look at person: oh ..maa..he is my friend..

Young girl: friend or boyfriend with disgusting face.

Geet: raji & maa.. he is my friend ..

Maa:how many times I said  don't call me maa, I have only one daughter, raji ..i am ur step mother .with angry tone .

Geet : ji .. with slow sad voice

Maa : ur father ran out from house , now u will try run out with him right .. geet eyes moist ..

Maa : u go roaming anywhere but don't spoil my name and my daughter name.. come inside and give delivery amount .. geet give whole amount to step mother. She went inside as raji smirked look to geet ..behind to her mother.

Geet take long breathe , its normal for geet , but they talk about maan.. , she did not like anyone badmouth about maan.

Geet sit garden cot  , cot surrounding beautiful flowers .. and her habit talk with flowers .

Geet : today , I enjoyed with maan so much . I don't know why I feel that If he is with me, I am very secured . her mind thinking about maan but her phone ring distracted her ..

Geet pout face attended her call : hello priya

Priya : time god u remember me..how is ur outing today with teasing tone..

Geet : outing ..with confused face.

Priya : outing with ur maan.. geet cheeks turned to light pink hearing my maan..

Geet : no , Priya , he is my friend .. don't imagine more..

Priya : really , say one thing ,u went to drive any boys except maan in ur life time..

Geet : No ..

Priya : u love him. So .u went drive with him..simple ..

Geet : no priya, I trust him..yes I like him also with slow voice ..

Priya smiled : no problem , u trust him soon u love him too.. and any other news u want share with me.

Geet excited face: yes, Next week  groom family come to see raji . I am happy for her ..

Priya hit her forehead :god sake geet, they won't u geet , they never accept ur also their family ,they want only  ur money ..plz shift to my place.. you never heared my word .with angry face.

Geet smiled : they are my responsibilities ..

Priya : u never changed .. god only send angel for ur life..

Geet  giggled : Angel or devil..

Priya: u get only Angel ...good night.. tomorrow I come to pick up u ..

Geet : but maan said, he come to pick  me..with pout face

Priya : Acha ji.. no issues, messaged him.. don't come tomorrow .. I  will come for u.. bye ..cut the phone..

Geet : ok..with sad tone.

Maan slowly enter in his home and slowly his leg move to stairs ..some one tapped his shoulder..maan closed his eyes murmur.. I  finish..

Maan turn his face and look at his both devil waiting for him: hi dadimaa, hi annie with sheepish smile..

Dadimaa: hi Maan singh Khurana

Maan: dadimaa..i am very tried .. I am going sleep ..bye ..annie dragged him to hall before his leg move to stairs steps.

Annie : bhai..we need talk more , u cannot escape from us with warning tone.

Maan : don't think wrong way.she is my friend ..just friend..

Dadimaa: then why u  not introduce to her ..i am ur dadi and Annie is ur sister.

Maan : she don't know I am from khurana family .. she thinking I am his colleuge and from middle class.. otherwise she did not talk with me freely ..

Annie : so she don't know about u , no problem, I will tell her..i already got her number from  Ms Sharma aunty . with excited face.

Maan: don't do that.. with warning tone.. dadimaa, she is my friend .. plz try to understand ..

Dadi blinked her eyes to annie..as annie nod her head..

Maan beta, u came , have ur dinner baby..with loving tone..

Maan : mom..i had dinner outside ..

A middle age woman come from kitchen while wiping his hand from clothes..

Maa : baby, outside food  not good for ur health with concern voice.

Maan : mom, i went with my friend ..sorry next times  its not happen..

Maa : ok baby.. go to sleep.

Annie chuckled face: dadimma.. baby ..

Dadi : yes .. he planning for his marriage but ur mom addressing him to baby.. my daughter in law very innocent person. With murmuring tone.

Maa: maan baby , ur dad said after u come back , meet him to his study room ..and maaji, priya asked come her home once.

Maan horror face: Priya , why she asked u come home , mom.

Sharmi: Priya is our neighbor  why u scared ..

Maan (mind): She is priya Not priyanka .. with relief face., Maan nods his head and left to study room. but then he think she is not bad , geet likes her... 

Dadimaa: sharmila bahu, he is not baby..

Sharmila : maaji.. but he is my child na.. with pout face.

Dadi rolled his eyes with murmuring face: I don't know in these years ,how my son managing four children perfectly..

Annie with confused face: dadi..four children, me, dev bhai and maan bhai ..only three children..

Dadi: ur mother is ur father first  child .. she so nave ..after ur mother enter in my son life , he got more success , she made his life to heaven .same way I want our maan life also settled down , dev already married to our sweet meera, ur life soon settle with Arjun .he is prefect guy for u ..annie blushed hearing arjun name.. now maan turn ..

Annie : dadimaa u like geet I mean geet bhabhi because u see bhabhi character similar to mom character .. then only u fixed geet become my second bhabhi .. I am right..

Dadi: exactly ..geet dido like ur mom..she is prefect to maan.. even I saw their love with each other eyes .

Annie :dadi, our buddhu bhai saying she is his friend only with  sad tone.

Dadi :  he realize his love soon..ur father also realize love later only..

Annie got notification in her phone: really ...omg dadimaa, my friend  Nehaa come to whatsup .. I am going..

Dadimaa :   nehaa.. or Arjun with teasing tone

Annie : dadimaa..with blushing face.

Study room

A middle age man reading his office file sincerely and maan knock door while man head look up from file .. his eyes signed come inside .

Maan: Dad..

Dad: maan, when u take over ur MD post in KC.. with serious tone.

Maan kneel down infront of him and cupped his palm : dad, not now..plz I need more experience after I take over KC..plz with puppy face.

Dad: I think , u enough knowledge take over company , u r brother and meera will be shift to London soon, he will take care London branch , annie marriage also fixed with arjun . now ur turn , I need u too settle down ur life soon ur dadi wish also same .

Maan : dad.. ok after annie marriage I will .. but our staff don't know my real identity .. I am ur son..

Dad: this is ur unquie personality , without using my name,  u get own place in our staffs heart. U have wonderful bonding with them .

Maan : After they know about my identity , they not go away from me, they not hate me right ..his mind thinking geet , he did nt why..

Dad  smiled : if they know about u truly , they never leave u .. maan smiled

Maan : thanks dad..

Dad: tomorrow , come soon office , u need meet Riya.Raj.. and Ms.Suhaira Malik.. both need ur presentation only..u impressed anyone easily..with teasing tone.

Maan : dad.. with little embrass tone

Dad: arhhh.. I am saying truth , my boy ..Rajveer singh khurana never judge people wrongly with proved tone.. ok go to sleep ..

Maan: Ok boss.. wished him left the place.

Rajveer: oh my son thinking about staff or geet .. she so sweet girl .. many times I noticed their closeness but maan not realize his love .my stupid son ,he is sharp in every matter, when come to love matter , he dido like me.. with shook his head lightly.


Some one touched maan shoulder, he come out from past .. and his tears look at back ..


Maan hugged him : dad.. with crying face.

Rajveer: shh.. don't cry ..nothing happened to geet..

Maan : I  am stupid,  I hurt her .. so much..

Rajveer : shhh.. my son very brave person , he never give up , now what happen with u ..

Maan : dad, now I realize , she is my strength.. without her , I cannot alive dad..plz do something.. I want her .. before me everyone know that she is my angel , my life .but I am not ..

Rajveer: its not ur mistake , maan.. she never open her feeling with u not with  anyone .

Maan : No , she never share her pain to anyone , she don't want pity for her , she need everyone happiness .. when I said  I  am in love with Sam , she shattered but she never show her sad face.

Rajveer smiled : u know her pain more than anyone, yes i agreed, u did not recognize her love but whenever she have problem , u stand with her right , now also stand with her , make her feel , she not alone.. u need her.. she come back for u ..

Maan nod his head , rajveer : lets go inside, everyone waiting for u .. I already called special doctor treat for her but she need ur support ..

Maan: thanks dad..

Rajveer: thanks for ur dad with chuckling face. She is not only for ur love, she is my future daughter in law. Don't forgot ..

Maan smiled lightly .. both inside hospital.. dadimaa, annie , dev & meera waiting for maan and rajveer..

Maan: where is Mom ..

Dadi: she is going temple pray for her daughter in law.

Maan : sorry ..

Dadi : maan, nothing happened to her ..

Temple

Sharmila give pooja items to priest and fold her hand infront of god idols .tears flicked in her eyes .

Sharmila : plz god , save her .. I cannot see my children suffer .. with moist eyes .in ur temple only I met her first time.. u only gave rising my wish for her as she is my maan wife. Plz  save her.

Flashback start..

Sharmila smiled seeing girl antics in temple .. she cursing god with cute angry face.

Sharmila touched her shoulder and girl look at sharmila ..

Girl: Namaste aunty, sorry I did not recognize u , u know me already with confused face.

Sharmila nod her head negatively : No beti .. I don't know u before but today onwards I know u ..

Girl  smiled : oh .. I am geet handa ..ur sweet name aunty..

Sharmila : I am sharmila khurana..

Geet : beautiful name like u ..

Sharmila sit in stairs and make geet sit down next with her : why u angry with  God..

Geet : I am not angry with god, he only angry with me.. today groom people come to see my sister  but my fate I cannot attend her function, why god hate me.. I am also god child right .with pout face.

Sharmila smiled : ur good in heart , why u cannot attend sister function

Geet : oh.. aunty..

Sharmila noticed hesitate face and dont want compel her : its ok .. but remember if groom  see u first he want marry u rather ur sister better  dont go infront of them .. with naughty tone.

Geet blushing face : aunty , apb bina ..

Sharmila : Geet dear, will u help me .. I am going near mall. U select gift for me .. if u have free time.

Geet : sure aunty .. I never shopping with my mom..she died after my birth  with painful voice

Sharmila understand her hidden pain word : lets go beta, my daughter & daughter in law join us.. u never bore with old woman.

Geet : no aunty , ur heart more younger than  me.

Shopping mall

Sharmila & geet have great time in mall.. Geet first time enjoyed mother warmth from sharmila..

Sharmila : geet beta, see that shop  Sonia collection s ..her collection very elegant.. u come with me ..we select dress from that shop ..geet nods her head ..

Sharmila phone ringed and she attend the call : beta where r u ..i am in Iptida shop .. u come soon and cut the call

Geet : who aunty

Sharmila: my daughter & daughter in law..

Geet face changed to pale (mind): geet , why show ur dull face with her..she is not her mother..u enjoyed her company few minutes ..dont wish more its never happen in ur life ..

Sharmila : lets go beta..

Geet smiled brightly : ok aunty..

Few minutes Annie & Meera reached the place.. annie shocked seeing geet with sharmila.. both shopping with happy face.

Annie : Meera bhabhi , I am in dream world or real ..

Meera : u always in arjun dream world .. I am 200 % sure , u r in dream world with teasing tone.

Annie:where arjun  come between here.. I am talk about Geet bhabhi..

Meera: u mean Devar ji lady love..where is she..her eyes searching there and here..

Annie: see mom side, she was talking with mom.if mom know about maan bhai love or its coincidence ..

Meera: really she so beautiful , annie with enthusiastic face ..

Annie : meera bhabhi , why u more enthusisatic meet geet bhabhi ..with chuckling face.

Meera: she will become our family member soon..we need know about her everything.. let go meet her first.

Sharmila :Meera & annie beta, why u standing her..come here ..

Geet surprised seeing Annie : Hi annie. Your r  aunty daughter.. annie nod her head ..

Meera : hi geet ..

Geet : hi Meera, Aunty talk about u more.. u r lucky got like  mother in law..

Meera: u too ..geet..

Geet : Ji..

Annie : meera bhabhi what tried to saying u also get mom like mother in law ..with sheepish tone..

Meera : yes geet.. annie angry glare to Meera ..

Sharmila: Annie u already know Geet..

Annie :  yes, me & dadimaa met her Sharma house party function..

Sharmila: ok select ur dress.. Geet u too select ur dress ..

Geet : but aunty..no .. I don't need anything..

Sharmila: I said right..annie take geet with u .. meera & annie dragged geet to Anu Gurti's  collection section.

Geet overwhelmed their love and cursing her fate (mind): don't waste ur time with cursing ur fate.. each sec very valuable for me.

Sharmila paid their dress and geet touched her feet while seeking blessing from her .. she blessed geet with whole heartily ..geet left the place..

Sharmila : Girls, what u thinking about her..she will become my maan wife ..my maan become lucky person right.

Meera & Annie unison: Maa, ur wish already fulfilled ..she is our maan bhai/devar lover..

Sharmila : sachi..with excited face..

Meera: yes , maa..

Sharmila:why u did not say before then why she called me aunty.. with sad face.

Annie : because ur buddhu son not realize his love with her.. u need wait until ur son bring her home ..

Sharmila : hmmm.. with sad voice.

After Long two months

Restaurant

Maan sitting with Girl .. he freely talk with her, she also very comfortable with him..Priya & geet passed restaurant ..priya caught maan talk with some girl ..

Priya mouth open widely : What the hell, why that girl mingle with maan ..

Geet : maan.. where .. her eyes searching everywhere

Priya turn her face to restaurtant side and geet face change to sad ..

Geet : Maan talk with her friend..lets go from here..

Priya : u cannot interfere them but I can..

Priya marched to place and geet have no choice as come behind her ..

Priya : maan.. what r u doing here.. with shocked look at Girl..

Girl jerked up chair: u.. what r u doing here ..with same shocked face.

Geet : Priya, u know her ..

Priya : yeah I know very well.. She is SD ..

S.D : u shout up ,PD ..

Maaneet Unsion: who is PD & SD ..

Priya : she is SD .. sanjana devil

Sanju : no maan, I am sanjana dear .. she is pD ..priya devil ..

Priya : maan don't trust her word , she is dayan ,devil ..

Maaneet confused look at each other : they don't know what u say..

Girl come to restaurant place and  tried  stop their fight ..

Maan: Ms, who are u ..

Girl turn back and look at maan : when they start their fighting..

Maan : 2 minutes before ..

Girl : oh now they did not finished . hi I am kalpi ..their assistant..

Maaneet : really , ur priya & sanju assistant.. with doubting face

Kalpi: yes ..

Maaneet : u look like normal person.. so we have doubt..

Kalpi : what do u mean..

Maan : we mean u became mad right but u still behave like normal person.

Kalpi: why I  became mad with horror face.

Maaneet unsion : because u r their assistant..

Kalpi smiled : yes ..

but both are sweet and nice, just when both come front each other behave like this...that's not mean both hate each other but both are friendship is like that...Big smile

Sanju & Priya stop their fighting unison : what u both said ..

Maaneet & kalpi: nothing..

Kalpi : Priya ,I come for u only .. u need sign paper.. u come with me .. bye guys.. dragged Priya from restaurant ..geet nod her head for priya to approve go to her .

Sanju : time god , devil run out from place.. maan u not intro with her ..

Maan: she is my geet, my friend , collegue..with proud tone .. sanju noticed his eyes  visible more love for geet .

Sanju : oh she is geet, u daily talk about her .. geet lightly blushing as sanju noticed her blushing face.

Sanju (mind): oh some thing something between them .let me help them..

Sanju locked her arms in maan arms : long back we chat .. I will order ur favourite drink.

Geet eyes starred sanju hand in maan arms and her heart bothering something .. ..

Geet : Maan.. with slow voice.

Maan : yes , geet .. he sensed some uneasy in place..he never saw geet like that..

Sanju: Geet , u love anyone .

Geet : oh.. sudden sanju question geet voice stambbering ..

Maan seeing her face expression and he don't why he did not like  her sad face.

Maan: geet,. I need go now.. bye  sanju..come geet ..i will drop u ..

Geet : sanju ..

Maan: she go herself.. sanju mouth open widely ..

Geet smiled and left with maan leaving sanju in shocking state.

Sanju : I confirmed , they love each other.. now I need my crime partner.. call Priya instantly .. this devil not pick my call..once again try sanju .. u r sweet person ,no one bothering u.. Priya  pick up her call ..

Priya : yes , SD .. what u do want ..

Sanju : PD .. I need ur help.. u only help me ..

Priya : wow SD need my help ..today sunrise in the west..

Sanju : I need help for maan & geet love matter.. both love each other ..i don't know they hide from each other or not recognize.

Priya : I am also same doubt sanju .. we will find out  first..let mission start Maaneet together .

Sanju : yeah.

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