The Tale Of Ekayan And Daivik

The Tale Of Ekayan And Daivik Completed G

Chapter 2

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Nikita_99503
Nikita @Nikita_99503 4 years ago This is just AMMMAAAZINNNGGG!!! Nushy.... A big big BIG hug to you for writing this!!!! You used to say that I am unbelievably awesome... But instead of me, it is you who is unbelievably awesome!!! The description of all the events was simply awesome... You described each and every thing, the Shalaka track where Pia helped Mo, the Dev track where Mo helped Ansh to save Pia or the finale episode with the special "Hum to doobenge sanam, tumko bhi le doobenge" moment was fabulous!!!And this line: "I need Gangajal to cleanse my soul after what I have just read!!!” EPIC!!!Not to forget, your description of Jinn show... That was actually the perfect description of that show. And when you mentioned that if the 'love' shown there is actually the real 'love', then the 'love' which Ansh and Naman had for Pia and Dilruba was definitely not 'love'...So, another big hug to you for writing about the 'love' shown in the Jinn show... That was just a bang on description!!I just lovveeddd reading it... PS. This line:"sometimes in the hand of her husband, our legendary Davaansh Babu Ansh"Personally, here I feel that either you should have written it like this: 'legendary Davansh Babu, Ansh' or 'legendary Davansh, Ansh Babu'... I found this bit slightly odd... Nikki_srk2020-04-07 04:34:22
Madhura..
Madhura @Madhura.. 4 years ago FirstlyFlavours of Naman and Saavi were captured so well!! You deserve a pat on the back.Then, description of Mohona and Pia, their encounters, bonding, soulmate connection was great and Saavi ofc losing her temper reading this, was great!! Like blasting him. But the justification and connect was wow!Like the way jinn roasting happened, was bang on! True love, and Ansh and Naman didn't do that, and then soulmate theory, so great way Naman blended these 2 concepts. Saavi is smart, asking how he saw so much and lunch line was epic!Totally hilarious one. Loved it.
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