The Tale Of Ekayan And Daivik

The Tale Of Ekayan And Daivik Completed G

Chapter 1

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Madhura..
Madhura @Madhura.. 4 years ago If it's your story and not emotional? Not happening!Beautifully executed, and written. I loved this specially cos the focus was on Saavi and Naman, and the way they discussed their past or fears, which they had hid but it was there. Like even Nishant's side was really interesting and how she understood the reasons later, for Pia and it was natural way she felt sad too at start, cos she didn't see his side. Even Naman's part was great, how GM treated him and the idea was really amazing and interesting. The flow of their conversation was great, they discussed, had fun. Disneyland line was epic!The end becomes a beginning, and it was a great punch.
Nikita_99503
Nikita @Nikita_99503 4 years ago So you finally wrote this!!! Amazing start... Loved Naman and Saavi's interaction...Saavi got emotional remembering the past, how Nishant had become strict after Divya left with Pia, how she saw his human side for the first time when they got to know that Pia was alive...Saavi's description of Pia's state during the time when she was pregnant with Pari made me emotional...Then as usual their banter had me in splits... That Guruma showering her blessings on Naman part cracked me up.The most hilarious part was where Naman lost his balance as he was shocked because Saavi liked his idea... So, Naman has made a comic book for Dafli considering the fact that she reaches all those places that she sees...You are one amazing writer who can write emotional as well as funny sequences so amazingly... Loved it... Waiting for the next part...Nikki_srk2020-04-05 06:05:10
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