Next day
Virat came at "The park" at 9:15 itself.. and he was waiting for jacqueline aka manvi...He continuously tried to call her..but she isnt picking her phone..He got irritated now..
V: yesterday she was reluctant to give her number..so did she gave any fake number..oh my goddd....no no..if this demon (jacqueline) had done something like that i will kill her...Ok will try one more time..
Here in manvi's room she is in a deep slumber...she got irritated on hearing her mobile ring..she picked it without seeing the caller id ..
M: what the hell is ur problem...? y did u woke me up from my sleep...
V: Oh woww..am the one who has to scold you..and see whats happening here..(muttered under his teeth)
M: what...
V: am sitting in the park for atleast 20 minutes now the time is 9:35..
M: so what
V: so what...?...ma'am u asked me to come to the park to start our virman mission..
M: I never told u that i will be involving..
V: ma'am plzzz...dont tell me like that..then i will commit suicide..
M: (thought) what is this..if i dont go over there and if he commits suicide and if he writes letter that am reponsible for thatt and what if police arrests me...oh no...
M: Ok ok calm down..i will come..(virat just smiled at her)
Manvi got ready and kissed her dad's cheek said good bye...and took cab to reach the park..
@The park
Manvi saw virat standing there waiting for her..
V: Ok now tell mee...where is my manu staying and what is she doing.. and...
M: hellooo wait.. ur manu...
V: yeah my manu...r u jealous..
M: jealous me...
V: yeah u are.. ok leave that answer my questions..
M: oh godd..ok will take u there...
V: what..wow...
M: wont u get an auto atleast..
V: yeah sure..
He got an auto and both got inside..
They reached before a building...as soon as auto stops virat got down and started to shout
V: Maanvi..Manvi darling...Manu....
M: Too much excited.....?
V: yeah actually i cant expresss how excited i am...I..
Auto driver: ma'am. money
M: Ok virat give him money.. and come..
V: what ...he took out the wallet and saw he was having only 500
Manvi took that 500 and gave to auto driver..
Auto driver: ma'am no change..
M: thats ok u have that
V: whatt...
Auto went...virat got mad now...but still he maintained calmnes..
V: ma'am..plzz atleast tell me the address now
Manvi thought for sometime..He started t admire her...but dont know why..
M: Ok now listen to me..take two left and one right and a u- turn and take left..
As soon as he heard the address he ran...
M:what kind of person he is ...a cute girl is standing in front of him..here he is madly and deeply in love with that chudidhar hmm.. interesting...
an unknown smile came..
A girl tapped manvi's shoulder..
M: Hey jacqueline...
Ja: who is that and where are u lost..
M: yesterday i told u right..that guy..
Ja: ohhoooo...
M: Hey stop teasing mee...
Ja: Ok wont you introduce me to him..i didnt even see his face..
M: dont worry i will ..
Ja: Manvi y did u tell him my name as ur name.
M: i didnt mean to tell ur name as my name, i saw a pic of jacq fernandez..thats y..
Virat reached the place which was told by manvi..He saw one man who is looking like 40 to 50 yrs old watering the plants in garden..
V: sasurji....
That man ignored him...thinking he is calling someone
V: Sasurji..
Man got understood now
Man: r u calling me...
V: yess sasurji..
Man: how dare u call me that.. i didnt even got married and u are calling me sasurji.. as if i have 4 to 5 daughterss..
V: dont lie to me..am ur son in law..(he said while blushing) ...and ..ii know u r my sasurji...my manu is here...
Man:I got bald but my age is just 40...
V: i dont want these details sasurji.. i want my manu...
Man: (he thought to give virat a lesson)..oh love affair..
V: yeah sasurji..
Man: how many days...my daughter never told abt u..
V: she doesnt evn know..me..
Man: oh ...she dont know u and u wanted to get commit with her.. for that i need to help u..
V: Exactly.....sasurji..
Man slapped hiis shoulder...
Man: get...out...am i looking like a broker for u...
V: sasurji..manu...
Man: what..manu... tanu...go away from here...i didnt even got marry ...just now my marriage proposal came and u r telling that am already married am i looking like that..
Virat got angry..
V: how dare you ...u will never ever get married...
Saying that he ran towards the house where he dropped manvi
Meanwhile here she came out of jacquelin's house..he saw her and went toward her angrily..
V: y did u give me wrong address..this is too much..
M: too much..?...I dont even know u or ur character.....and if i give her address...
M: what if u go behind her and torture her..
V: what..
M: what if u rape her..
V: RAPE....
M:or what if u murder her...
V: Murder.....
M: or what if u throw her deadbody somewhere....
V: oh my godd.. stop it...u r looking like an innocent girl but ur brain thinks like a terrorist....(he got shocked)
M: whattt
V: Oh ..plz... am not like those men...that girl is my life,,,ma'am....plzz...i never ever done aything wrong with her,,, trust mee..
M:( thought) yesterday only we met.. and u r talking as if u know me long back..
V: plzz.. ma'am i will neve ever do anything bad with her..plzz make her meet me only once.. plzz..
M: But what if her dad sees u..
V: Oh my godd...(muttered under his breath)
M: dont worry will make an arrangement to make u and manvi meet..ok ? now..smile...OK?
V: really... thats so sweet of u...(he pulled her cheek and kissed his fingers)..(thought)...thank god... bandariya have accepted to help me atleast..
V: ok tomorrow where should i come..
M: what tomorrow noway..tomorrow its ganesh chathurthi..so i cannot come..
V:Ok yeah..ok u call me then we can plan our next meeting..
Saying that he turned but suddenly something striked his mind..
V: Arreeyyy..u r a christian right...then how come u celebrating ganesh chathurthi..
Manvi dont know what she should do..
M:(thought) oh no am gone
M: who told u am a christian.. my dad is a christian and wmom is a hindu so i celebrate both hindu and christian festival ok?
V: oh sorry...ok call me.,,when we can have our next meeting..
M: sure...bye..
Virat ran from there with enjoyment....and manvi touched her cheeks..while blushing..
Its night
@Virat apartment
Virat couldnt control himself he is in such a happy mood...y not he will be soon meeting his love...
Viren and jeevika were waiting for virat in the hall...but virat didnt even see them and about to turn towards his room...when he saw manvi waving her hands...he too waved his hand at her..
Viren and jeevika saw this and jeevika turned behind them to see if really someone is there..
Vi: Jeevika...is he waving his hand to us..
J: i think soo...(and she too waved her hand)
Vi: now what happen to u..
J: he is waving right...
Vi: u both have become mad..
Virat saw manvi gone so he mentally scolded himself and moved towards his room..
Viren turned towards virat
Vi: Virat.....
Virat still didnt hear him...he abt to enter his room when viren shouted his name again
vi: Virattt...
V: what happen?
Vi: what happen we had been calling u but u r straightly going into ur room...
V:Oh bhaii..sorry..i didnt see..
Vi: u didnt see...will go and freshen up and come...
all gathered at hall after having dinner..
all were watching 3 idiots movie..suddenly viren spoke
Vi: so who is that girl?
J: itskareena kapoor..
Vi: Jeevika...am asking virat..
V: which girl bhai...
Vi: the girl whm u love..
V: bhai...(he got shocked)
Vi: I know it happens...
V: actually bhai. her name is manvi.. but i have never seen her..
J: what...?
V: yeah babhi.. i have never seen her,, and then he explained how he touched manvi's fingers and got electric feeling and all the thing happened those two days..like how he met jacqeline and how she agreed to help him...
J: Viratt..am surprised u belive all thiss..
V: evven am surprised babhi..
Vi:woww bhai...magical love...congrats...so when u gonna meet her..
V:jacquelin will tell me..hmm..hope my first meeting will become the best meeting..
J: dont worry viru...
V: babhi ...(he got irritated because he hate that name)
both viren and jeevika....shouted again and virat got irritated and went to sleep
Vi: atlast virat got his love..
J: yeah... virenji
@manvi house
Manvi standing near her window..
Flashback
When manvi was standing at the bus stop she saw virat beating some boys brutally and she also saw a girl who was weeping thr .
Manvi: oh god he will not change.always goes behind same girl and gets into a trouble . same would hav happened . he would hav proposed her and she wud hav brought her brothers. Hmmm k leave it manvi why r u looking thr ?
At that time she heard a lady saying something which she cudn't believe.
Lady: god had sended him to save that girl else wat wud hav happened?
Manvi: wat happen aunty?
Aunty : actually tat girl was waiting for the bus but those rogues started to eve-tease her .they were drunk and they r rich tooo and they tried to molest her but suddenly this boy came and saved her .
Manvi:u cud hav informed police na
Aunty: we informed but they didn't arrive at all.
Manvi:oh ...
Then manvi got into her bus. But her thoughts were still on virat.
Flashback ends
M: I should do more research on him...He is so sweet na ...
She couldnt stop smiling..
but why is he so interested in me? what manvi r u in love ...am i...no manvi wat r u thinking ? u lack ur energy thats y u r thinking like this..now go to sleep k.
But she cudn't sleep. all she cud feel is his touch on her cheeks..his smirk..his cuteness...his pleasing face..atlast guilt.of not telling him that she is manvi......with great difficulty she went to sleep.
Next day
Manvi got ready and she was going to temple as its ganesh chathurthi, but she was stopped by 3 children . those three children lives next to her house . they. usually wish her good morning.
Payal,mehna,nia: hi manvi di
Manvi: hi
Payal: di we wanna ask u something?
Manvi: wat?
Mehna: if payal is having b'day wat will u do?
Manvi: wat type of question is this.? What will i do..if ..its her birthday..i can just gift her something..
Nia: will u go to temple and take blessing from her..
Manvi: what...? wat happen suddenly why u ask these types of question?
Nia: di we have a doubt. Today ganesh chathurthi na which means ganesh's b'day but why we r preparing sweets for him and doing pooja and getting blessing from him... Why we r celebrating his b'day
Manvi: k k I understand hmm... (thinking for sometime ) .he wants us to celebrate his b'day so that we will share the sweets with our neighbours and relatives and to be happy. he is god na he wnts our happiness only..and thats a gift which can be given to him by us..
Mehna: di then we r ur neighbours na give me sweets.
Manvi: so u want sweets and thats y u r doing this drama...sorry dear I'll go to temple now and while returningi'll buy some chocolates for u all. K
Nia, mehna,payal: k di we love u
Then manvi went from thr.
that time a man came and he saw payal who was playing with nia and mehna wearing a gold chain. He came towards payal and tried to snatch the chain. But he was caught by a man who punched him and he fell on the floor.he was none other than virat.before virat cud make a move he ran away from thr.
Nia,mehna,payal:[shocked]
Virat: hey r u k?[towards payal]
Payal: thankooo uncle
Virat:[confused] thankoo... oh thank u? k k
mehna: uncle u saved my friend. Thank u so much.
Nia: uncle wats ur name?
Virat : virat
Mehna: oh vilat
Virat: vilat nahi virat
Mehna: vilat
Virat: haha...k leave it. By the way where do u live?
Nia: we live in these 3 houses[showed the opp house].
Virat: ok get inside the compond and play safely.....k bye. I have to go.
Nia, payal, mehna: k uncle bye
Then virat went to the ganesh temple.
He stood infront of the ganesh temple and closed his eyes.
Virat: ganesha .though I don't have mom and dad.i consider u as my brother and I used to tell u whatever happened that day. Today also I had the same dream where I was beating a drum with tears in my eyes and a blurred girl drawing something . I don't know wat u r trying to say. Whether that girl is my manvi? Plz give me a sign if its true.
Ding ding...
That time he heard the bell sound.he opened his eyes .
V: yeah the girl in my dream is manvi.
Precap: payal: uncle she is manvi di.
virat:oh where?
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Taahir @taahir004
+ 10
3 years ago
Hilarious and Beautiful Chapter . Virat wanting to commit suicide while Maanvi thinks she'll be trapped then Virat calling the man as Sasur when he is not even his in law . Virat compliment Maanvi while also saying she talks like terrorist
Mansi @Vampire2468
+ 5
3 years ago
Beautiful update😍😍Loved it so much😚❤Precap is exciting😘😘Very excited to read further😙
tehreemsajid @tehreemsajid
3 years ago
Nice update dear..... virman
Jasmine @jasminerahul
+ 8
3 years ago
manvi thinking that if virat really commits suicide she will be trapped was funny.virat calling that man sasur was funny.he saying that he is not even married but he is calling him sasur was funny.he saying though he is bald he is only 40 was hilarious.virat saying that though manvi is looking innocent she talks like a terrorist was funny.good that manvi realised that virat was actually saving that girl from the goons.never thought that manvi was actually having a friend named Jacqueline. manvi kids scene n virat becoming their saviour was nice.perfect pics