Trials Of Fire

Trials Of Fire Ongoing G

Chapter 39

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saxena_hgt
saxena_hgt @saxena_hgt 5 years ago Wow u weave love life so beautifully with family love. Having kids at home, can turn any grim atmosphere into fun loving.. that is d innocence of a child.. seeing whole family together is alwayz feel good. Finally chandani helped advay to take one more step towards attaining peace with his past.. looking forward to this best friend & all d colours he will bring in life of all d raizadas ...
Loving2Missing2
Neha @Loving2Missing2 5 years ago
yes Ann. correctly guessed...I love it when you shrewd readers guess correctly... she will start a new life; but eventually...not immediately.
AnnDan
AnnDan @AnnDan 5 years ago Thanks Neha Does Puja start a new life?
Loving2Missing2
Neha @Loving2Missing2 5 years ago
Thanks so much, Hima. Your genuine appreciation of the small points in my story writing overwhelms me. yes it's step by step process, as Naani said to Chandni...you can't come out of pain in just one instance in life...it's a journey.you remember, in one of the earlier episodes, Chandni said to Dev, he does not share his pain...while she does...the loneliness is what is causing the turmoil...this time he shares the pain, not through words but through tactile means...that's his first step to inner peaceThe song from the show was really good. They should have reused it... anyway, I am doing now. And the other one is Apt for Advay's mood at the moment.I loved his expression both times...when he stifled the smile first...and then broke out in full mouthed, all white toothed smile The man takes our heart.
Loving2Missing22019-02-26 20:46:50
Loving2Missing2
Neha @Loving2Missing2 5 years ago [QUOTE=saxena_hgt]Uff 20 chapters in one go.. what a day for me.. Pranam Nehaji.. after a long time, really long.. but its so good to see u writing once again.. sorry i was kind of vanished from here. Last i checked this forum must b december.. glad u remember me & send pm. I would b very sad, if i miss this one.. & girly u r going good. Your approach is unique. Every character seem to b battling their own war, which in turn effecting every relationship.I remember having sent few PMs in october for TGDIF release...maybe some mis-connect. And yes, I am sorry that I PMed you late. I just wanted to make sure there were sufficient no of chapters for you to read.1st of all haye ye shaadi ka ladoo. It is like this only. Its something on which one has to work continuously & both sides must b ziddi enough to make it happen with love & trust. No scope of giving up. Maturity comes with time, so does wisdom. Chandani needs to give time to every matter. Getting impatient is a recipe for disaster. So is anger, which advay must learn to control. But that is journey to life & i m sure adni will b there.So aptly said!Veer & Shikha needs a taste of life, real life.. which i think u must b planning. Excited to see what u have planned or pooja & revenge in allahabad.. one question why PP for meghna? Just curious how u come up with this.Wow! That's a nice question! This is what I loved in our earlier days. You people asked questions which made me go deep in my own thought process and ponder.Firstly, I liked PP, the character as it came on screen...he not only brought comic relief but also had an innocence around his face and in his smile.The baby was a real mess for me to properly handle in the story...As Advay pondered about his Allahabad plan...that he had himself maligned Chandni's name, now it would backfire in her being accepted as Mahanatani, his wife. So naturally, it has to be disclosed and convinced to people that the babay is not hers but Meghna's.That disclosure puts Meghna'
binc0802
binc0802 @binc0802 5 years ago I love the whole update and also all pictures dear. They are very apt for the scene. I like the way you take things one by one like how Advay is coming out of his pain and open up more slowly in this chapter. The songs are so apt and thanks for English Translation. You put so much effort in your writing Neha that's why the story is so good.
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