Trials Of Fire

Trials Of Fire Ongoing G

Ep 98 Ch 28 Call of the loving heart... Revenge Drama Actual.... Shikha stressed

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binc0802
binc0802 @binc0802 5 years ago I understand Neha. No problem. Take your time.
Loving2Missing2
Neha @Loving2Missing2 5 years ago
Thanks Hima! A second update in week's time is surprising isn't it?. But I'm going to be caught up in some college chores for my daughter so next update might get delayed... Please bear with me.
binc0802
binc0802 @binc0802 5 years ago Wow 2nd update in a week. Love you dear. Another outstanding update. I hope both are safe. You left us at cluffhanger. I am eagerly waiting for your update. You are doing a great job darling. You are a very good writer. Thanks for giving nice story.
binc0802
binc0802 @binc0802 5 years ago Yes Neha I agree. Its about the show. Actually I am not active in this forum. Mostly I just come to comment on Barun. I searched in google for Advay and Chandni stories and this happened. Then I started reading. The story is soo good and the characters are very close to the show. May be I connected to story quickly. You said its not about me Neha. Hmmm but its about your writing that made story more beautiful. Yes I totally understand the distance between Advay and Chandni. You stick to your characters and they dont behave out of characters. That's the beauty. Yes I truly feel this story reach so many people. Sorry about long comment
Loving2Missing2
Neha @Loving2Missing2 5 years ago
Thanks so much Hima for your open appreciation. It means a lot to me because you yourself are a genuine-hearted person. And I cherish your comments a lot because it motivates me to write...I truly hope more people read the story... it's not about me...it's about that original show we had all loved and felt bereft on its closure... it's about fans visiting this forum with a spirit like the 3 idiots song Jaane nahi denge tujhe...(we won't let you go away).Chandni Advay will meet soon, they cannot remain separated...but you must be knowing how married life is...fights are the pickle in the plate of marriage, isn't it?
binc0802
binc0802 @binc0802 5 years ago Wow he started his revenge. Now the story takes new interesting turn. Missing Advay and Chandni moments little bit but the story should be like this . Otherwise it become daily soap. For trp, we can change the entire story. You did great job as writer Neha. I hope more people read your story. Thanks for PM dear.
Loving2Missing2
Neha @Loving2Missing2 5 years ago IPK3 untold saga...Lingering moments...Chapter 27Chandni stirred from her fitful slumber... The night had left
her restless and perturbed...desperately waiting for Dev to return... to have Dev
around her... with her!...Her world reeled...her heart ached... her breath stopped...
she couldn't focus... just couldn't... a state of complete lassitude and then
suddenly, she saw Dev, in bed next to her.
"Dev, you have come back!"
She screamed in ecstatic joy...reluctant to dismiss the
sight in front of her as a mere imagination...her inner desire materializing into
a lucid dream...The same loving eyes..so soft, so tender...the faint rays of early morning sun
reflecting off his smoky brown irises rimmed with dark chocolate ...as dark as
his possessive morning desire!The same absurdly sensual smile...drenched in his hot blooded wickedness...yet tender with love...and filled with a promise...a promise that made her mind go in directions it definitely, definitely shouldn't...She
knew, in a moment, he would draw her close, flush against his hard contours... until she could feel every hot and
hard inch of him...And then the unhurried, languorous almost- kisses would
start to tease her... His mouth so warm and persuasive...And playful indulgent whispered
words of love to seal the spell...and electricity crackling in the air...And
then the inevitable!... kissing her senseless...his taste so good, so warm, so
familiar...Chandni could feel it...Yet not feel it...because nothing
happened, no response came ... A faraway mirage turning into a soul soaking
elixir... She clutched her chest, her eyes squeezed shut in unbearable anguish.
But then, the morning wind
carried his voice... Suddenly pulling her heart to him ...He touched her with
that voice...in trance, she stood up to his level...to his calling... He hugged her close to
his bosom...like the most precious gem in his life's treasure...with tender
smile...with open heart... his
breath so warm so near puttin
AnnDan
AnnDan @AnnDan 5 years ago I will wait for meeting of Advay and Chandni
Loving2Missing2
Neha @Loving2Missing2 5 years ago IPK3 untold saga...Lingering moments...Chapter 26
Shikha felt
ecstatic as she came out of the college...Her professor had applauded her for perfect
timely completion of her assignment and also the quality of her work...He had
offered to recommend her for a renown scholarship as well as a reputed sponsorship...All
her friends including Mihir had clapped for her and suggested a celebration...She
loved the feeling of friends and relatives pampering her...and as she came out,
her lips widened in a happy smile seeing Veer waiting for her next to his SUV.
Even from a distance, his masculinity reached her like a
crackling energy...He looked handsome wearing white shirt keeping his top
buttons open that revealed the solid mass of muscle on his chest and
tantalising glimpse of dark hair...Veer walked towards her with his assured
gait; she felt the air between them thicken with passion. His mesmerising eyes
looking at her always far too closely. She could feel her skin heat under his
regard. Feel the temptation build.As he put his possessive arm around her waist, a grip firm
but gentle, his mouth quirked on one side, making him look even sexier with a
mouth sculpted to sin. It brought her feelings to the surface, reducing her
ability to fight off her attraction to the man whose strong arms were draped
around her waist. He was always in control of his actions around her, showing
the passion and possession but never crossing the thin line of decorum. While
she appreciated him being such a gentleman, now she craved physical connection
with him. Looking up into his dazzling eyes, she turned to close the distance
between them, pressing her chest against his and wrapping her arms around his
neck. It was a stretch, due to the height difference. But as their bodies met,
she knew it was worth the effort. Flush with him now, she could feel every
muscled inch of his body, even through the layers of fabric that separated
them. Feeling the hard lines of him press
Loving2Missing2
Neha @Loving2Missing2 5 years ago
My genuine heartfelt thanks for your appreciation.Regarding Advay being protective, he is! Right from the first shot in the series when he saved that cute puppy...even when the story went haywire, he was shown to be protective with Naani, pooja and aadi... It's his nature, he takes responsibility.In next chapters you'll see how he takes and acts on his responsibility as Mahant.I feel it's about Barun. Once he gets into a character, he maintains the characater nuances throughout even when stories get haywire...He did it for Arnav and then he did it for Advay.
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