ok i decided to post it cause i am not going trick or treating....so here is the next part!
hey ok this is only half of part 17....i noe i noe i have been doing a lot of halves! sry!!!
DING DONG!
Dev's mom (DM) comes n opens the door.
DM: oh preeti!
P: hi auntie how r u?
Both hug
DM: I am good….u? (confused)
P: good…n I see that ur son the duffer hasn't told u that I was coming right?
DM: (laughs) he didn't but ur always welcome here!
Now u see dev running down the stairs.
D: mom can u call preeti's parents over for dinner? (with out waiting for an answer) ok thanks!
He grabs preeti's hand n takes her upstairs.
DM just laughs at her son.
IN DEV'S ROOM
Part 17
D" ok so ur parents will ocme to dinner n then after dinner we will say that we r madly in love blah blah…
Preeti laughs n nods as in yes.
P: but will they believe us?
D: GOD! U n ur buts! U say tooooo much. Trust me they will! (smirks) if they don't than I will just day ur pregnant…
P: (sarcastic) haha….then they will want to have a grandchild in less than 9 months!
D: then we will just get them one….hell we will start right now!! (comes closer to her)
P: oh noooo!!! Don't u dare come close to me…or else…
D: (coming closer) or else?
P: OR ELSE I WILL SCREAM!
will dev stop? comment....
ok ok its less than half...lol next part will be LONGER! promise!
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~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
hey u guys i just want to say that this ff will be ending in a couple parts cuz i cant think of how to make it longer and i have so many better ideas for other ffs that after i finish this one than i can write a better one hopefully lol n i will be cont. that one reg. :) wat say?
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
THANK U SOOOO MUCH SONAL!!! MUAH love u too much lol i am writing it right now...n i will post it by tom.
Sonal @swt.smileee
16 years ago
i am impatiently waiting....
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
ok u guyz i noe i havent cont. in like a LOOONG time but i am going to cont. this weekend...I SWEAR!! cuz i feel really bad but the thing was that i had too many skool stuff going on...n guys stuff haha lol u noe how it is! but i promise i will this weekend cuz i am gonna get so inspiration tom. which is friday cuz i am going to the movies..with some *cough* friends *cough*.....so i am sooo sry!!!!!! plzzz forgive me yaars!!!!
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
hehe its called suspense! haha i will TRY to cont. soon...cuz my internet keeps shutting down on me
love,
Preeti
i have so many parties to go to...its kinda hard to update n do 3 essays at the same time....hotaditya39393.5507407407
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
[QUOTE=Bollywood_chic]
lol dw i was just jkin anwyas wen the next part am waiting!!! lol thankz!....i will cont. tonight when i have time like by...10[/QUOTE]
Sonal @swt.smileee
16 years ago
awesum part preeti...wel continue soon...cant wait to noe wat will happen next...
Sonia @Bollywood_chic
+ 3
16 years ago
lol dw i was just jkin anwyas wen the next part am waiting!!! lol
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
hey i said NOT ALL gujjus r annoying....i think ur the only gujju i like...so far that i have met....haha i dont care for cultures really....its just if u annoy me
Sonia @Bollywood_chic
+ 3
16 years ago
[QUOTE=...gujjus can be annoying but hey...just the ones in america hahaa...love, Preeti [/QUOTE]
lol funny u saying i am annoying cause i am GUJJU jeez am offended....lol...jokes....gr8 part....can't wiat for otha half....