ok so i am cont. i noe its short but the best is yet to come
Canteen
Preeti laughing: haha omg! Wow dv I never new u could be sooo mean! I am proud of u my son!
D: (smiles) well…wat can I say? She gets on my nerves. I would of died if I married her….our (d n a) kids would be mental but now…OUR (d n p) kids will be perfect…speaking of kids I want A LOT….like a cricket team…no wait….make that 2 cricket teams. J one is girls n other is boys.
Preeti's mouth is wide open
P: now if u think I will got through all that labor…I don't think so hun!
D: awww…plz?
P: nope
D: fine…I guess u want me to be sad….for the rest of my life….cuz u don't want to give me kids….
P: haha I didn't say I wont give u any kids I said I wont give u THAT many kids….but 2 is enough J
D: 10?
P: 2
D: 8?
P: 2
D: 6?
P: 2
D: 7?
P: 1
D: ok ok 2 is fine (dissapointed)
P: (pats his cheek) now that's a good boy
Love n josh laugh uncontrolably.
J: (trying to stop laughing) haha!!! U …..guys….r..sooo…in love!!! Haha!!
P: (sarcatic) duh! Its cuz we r!
The day come to an end
Part 16
….. as preeti n dev were leaving……
P: hey remember we have to finish our project…
D: oh yea! Ok come over my house today…we can start our project n…(smiles) start our plan.
P: haha…ok…bye
D: (grabs her arm) wooo…. Not like that …abhi is right there. U have to say bye the right way!
P: oh really?
D: yes…(smiles naughtly)
P: (giggles) n wat way is that?
D: a kiss…of course!
P: ok…
Preeti goes close to him n kisses him on the cheek. She is about to leave but dev grabs her arm again.
P: sigh…wat now?
D: I meant a kiss on the lips….
P: haha in ur dreams!
D: so the kiss on ur brithday was in my dreams?...oh yea n last night was in my dreams?
P: YUPP! (laughs n leaves)
D: (smiles) man she is impossible!
N has dev said abhi was watching all this n was fuming in anger.
A: ahhh! I cant believe this! Ripi I need to noe wat happened aat the club that changed things so much!
R: but first of all…y weren't u there in the first place?
A: oh …I ..uh…(embarrassed) I was following adi
R: oh ok…
AT DEV'S HOUSE
DING DONG!
Dev's mom (DM) comes n opens the door.
DM: oh preeti!
P: hi auntie how r u?
Both hug
DM: I am good….u? (confused)
P: good…n I see that ur son the duffer hasn't told u that I was coming right?
DM: (laughs) he didn't but ur always welcome here!
Now u see dev running down the stairs.
D: mom can u call preeti's parents over for dinner? (with out waiting for an answer) ok thanks!
He grabs preeti's hand n takes her upstairs.
DM just laughs at her son.
will cont. on mon. or tues ...whenever i get time to rite a part
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~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
[QUOTE=sonalkhullar]
i hope it does......awww..itll suck...but oh wel...u keeping up de suspense....hey wats wrong wid u...dance classes wid gujjus...then private voilin lessons..r u a music freak or sumthin....
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lmao! haha yeah i am! i LOVE music! music is my life! whenever u see me i will be listening, humming, playing, or dancing to music! i cant help it yaar! haha
Sonal @swt.smileee
16 years ago
i hope it does......awww..itll suck...but oh wel...u keeping up de suspense....hey wats wrong wid u...dance classes wid gujjus...then private voilin lessons..r u a music freak or sumthin....
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
haha i noe wat u mean sonal...gujjus can be annoying but hey...just the ones in america hahaa...i am dont typing but since its halloween n noeone will have the time to read my part n i am leaving for my private violin lessons i am not posting the part i will tom. cuz then u will come home from a hectic day at skool n my story will message u haha
love,
Preeti
Sonal @swt.smileee
16 years ago
[QUOTE=hotaditya][QUOTE=sonalkhullar]
awwwwww...y dont u like dance classes.....i luv dance..but i dont take classes tho....i would like them if they were my culture....i will do american ...french watever! but i am punjabi not gujju thats wat my mum doesnt get....i mean i am like the only punjabi there n all the gujjus stare at me but i LOVE dance...its my life!!! i am a musical person!!! haha.....
ok i wrote like half of the part now i am writing the second half....i try to post it soon or tom....my mum thinks i am doing HW...but shhhh plz dont tell her i am writing this or i will get in trouble
love u all
XOXOX
Preeti
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i can understand....im a punjabi tooo....but all these gujjus in my skool...no offense...but they r a bit annoying...wen it cums to dance....wel..cant wait intli u r doen typing up...
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
[QUOTE=sonalkhullar]
awwwwww...y dont u like dance classes.....i luv dance..but i dont take classes tho....i would like them if they were my culture....i will do american ...french watever! but i am punjabi not gujju thats wat my mum doesnt get....i mean i am like the only punjabi there n all the gujjus stare at me but i LOVE dance...its my life!!! i am a musical person!!! haha.....
ok i wrote like half of the part now i am writing the second half....i try to post it soon or tom....my mum thinks i am doing HW...but shhhh plz dont tell her i am writing this or i will get in trouble
love u all
XOXOX
Preeti[/QUOTE]
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
thank u dear! will try to cont. soon
Sonal @swt.smileee
16 years ago
awwwwww...y dont u like dance classes.....i luv dance..but i dont take classes tho....
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
thank u my dear sonal haha...i will rite the part tom. n then try to type it on the comp. tom. after skool if i dont have to go to dance practice early i dont like dance class :(
Sonal @swt.smileee
16 years ago
[QUOTE=hotaditya]
sonal...i love how ur always encouraging me...lolz i would update today but i cant...cuz i didnt have the time to rite the update....i usally do it in english class haha or math but lately i havent been doing my hw so i am doing my hw at the time that i used to write the parts lol
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....tahts exactly wat i do in my eng n math class....no lie...im alwayz doin other stuff...n later i realize i didnt do my hw for a while...ooh wel..itss alriite...just update wenevr u can....
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
[QUOTE=sonalkhullar][QUOTE=hotaditya]
[QUOTE=proud_2_b_mysel]awesome, nice part thank u! i love to see ur comments haha...would u like to predict wat happens next?
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THIS GOES FOR EVERYONE....PREDICT WAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT.....
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sum romantic scene b/w DP... good prediction...hmmm maybe ur rite....i really dont noe...i havent decided wat gonna happen next...
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sonal...i love how ur always encouraging me...lolz i would update today but i cant...cuz i didnt have the time to rite the update....i usally do it in english class haha or math but lately i havent been doing my hw so i am doing my hw at the time that i used to write the parts lol