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Love
Part 11
Recap: We see Preeti siting on the bench crying.
P: (out loud) Y did I feel so bad when abhi said that neev wrote all that? Y do I care? If it was someone else then I would of kicked their butts but y did I just feel like getting away from HIM? But then also y do I feel like he didn't rite those things about me? I got to find the note!
Preeti gets up n hears a voice. Voice: v
V: its prob. Cuz he didn't.
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Preeti looks up n sees love.
P: huh? Wat r u saying? Abhi read the note!
She asks with a very confused look
Love sighs.
L: my darling jaanu wat abhi said was alllllllll wrong. Dev wrote something COMPLETELY different…but u noe wat I don't believe is that u actually thought that Dev would call u those things!
Preeti takes the note n reads it aloud.
P: dear Preeti,
I noe ur mad at me but b4 u crumble this paper up n throw it I my face at least listen to me yaar! I noe u hate me for kissing u..but…I don't noe how to explain this…but…if YOU want we can forget about it cuz I value our friendship more then anything else. So I am sry…plz forgive me if u can…again sry
A friend seeking forgiveness,
Dev
Preeti has tears in her eyes as she reads it again n again. N then she looks up at love.
Love just gives a i-hope-ur-sry look.
Preeti runs to find Dev. She kind find him anywhere…or at least she thinks...she is about to turn around when she bumps into someone…its….DEV!
D: (without looking at who it is) sry
Preeti looks at him n sees his eyes r puffy n red...from crying? He is about to leave when she grabs him.
P: Dev!
Dev is surprised by the voice n turns around. N sees the Preeti too has been crying..
D: (thinks) oh man she has been crying…no wait…she is STILL crying…man I cant wait to meet this abhi girl.
D: yeah?
She goes up to him n hugs him. Dev is confused, but cant help to hug her back
D:(whispers) I am sry Preeti.
P: no don't be..its my fault…I should of never listened to abhi..i don't deserve to be ur friend
She starts crying again.
D: no no Preeti don't cry! Anyone could believe her! She is a damn good liar! If I hadn't wrote the note then even I would of believed her. N about not deserving to be my friend! Now that's just B.S..
The come apart n Dev wipes her tears with his thumb.
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While this is happening can u guess who is listening in on their convo?
YES u r right it is the biznatches from hell …..Abhilasha n Ripikia (sry for rong spellings on ur names)
A: AHHH I hate this…at this rate neev will never come to me!
R: we're doing this so Dev will come to u?(she asks dumbly)
Abhi just gives her a i-cant-believe-i-even-hang-out-with-u look
A: DUH!
R: oooo ok(smiles)
A: sigh
Dev's house
D: hey I am home!
Dev's mom: DM; Fev's dad: DD
DM: Dev beta tumare dad tumko balhare hai(UR DAD IS CALLING U)
Dev goes to his parents room
DD: beta come
He points to the chair next to the bed.
D: so dad wats up?
DD: Dev have we ever not given u wat u want?
D: u have…
DD: so then ur mum n I r asking for something from u today..will u listen to our request?
D:…I guess…but wat is it that u want?
DD: there is a rishta for u.
D: WAIT! wat? Huh? How? Who?
DD: (laughs at his son) her name is abhi.
D: ABHI!!??? No no no no no n nooo way!!
DD: but y? she is perfect..she is rich..beautifull
D:(laughs) haha ur kidding rite? Lozl rich yea ok whatever, but beautiful? Lmao!
His dad gives him a glare
D: (sigh) ook I will try?
ON THE OTHER SIDE
Preeti is also called by her parents
Preeti's mum: PM; Preeti's dad: PD
PD: Preeti tere liye ek rishta hai
P: sigh
PM: PREETI! Stop n listen to ur father!
PD: he is rich...handsome…n comes from a good family. Give him a chance. Haven't we given u everything we ever wanted?
P: ahh y do u always use black mail? Ok fine..i will see!
PD: don't u want to noe who he is?
P: yea ok who is he?
PM: ADITYA NARYAN!
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How does Preeti react? Is she happy?
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Sabrina @sabrinaa.
+ 4
16 years ago
waiting for the part!
but dont forget ur pic of homecomming!
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
ok i am about to post the next part in a couple hours....just typing it now
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
hun i will try to cont. by tonight...atleast i hope..if i dont..which i will..but if i dont then i will do it on sun. cuz HOMECOMING is tom!!! ahhh!
Sonal @swt.smileee
16 years ago
hey preeti..wen r u goonnna continue....just checkin...
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
LMAO U GUYZ!! i just reread the last part n my god!! i screwed up on copying n pasting lmao sry about that!! SRY!! plzz forgive me!! thankz
Sonal @swt.smileee
16 years ago
hey dear...just read ur last few parts....continue soon...
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
hun u wanted to be evil!!! u told me on msn!! i even have it on msn memory!!! lmao
~*!Ripi!*~ @~*!Ripi!*~
16 years ago
OMG i'm a biznatch...ok fine wateva j/k..lolz..y did i have to be evil??...i never asked to bee...hehe its okk..
great part!!.
OMG Aditya Narayan...!!..
Continue real soooon i really wanna knw wat happens next!!