thanks ripi!
I think this is part 10?
Ok recap: wat did the note say?
Prof.: abhi read the note for me.
He hands her the note
She opens the note n …
A: (GASP!)
Prof: (getting mad) READ THE NOTE!(wow do we have a temper or wat?)
A: (thinkz something n smiles)
A: Preeti your such a ***** n…(I don't want to go into detail cuz well I don't think I can say all the things here ..idk if their allowed so just pretend its like really bad ok?) Go to hell. NEVER YOURS, Dev.
Preeti just sits there with her mouth open, she wants to look at Dev but doesn't have the courage. N Dev noes that Preeti is really sad now so he just looks at abhi n abhi just gives Preeti a oh-poor-dear-look. But everyone noes that she is laughing inside as her plan has had a good start so far.
The class is over n Preeti runs out n Dev tries to follow but abhi comes in front of him.
A: hey Dev…since we have lunch next y don't u n I go get some coffee ha?
D: (trying to get away from abhi) umm.. nno thankz…byeeeee
Dev rans to find Preeti but it is too late as she already has gone to far.
Josh n Love r the only ppl left in the class room.
J: I bet abhi went to find Preeti n tell her more lies, cuz I noe Fev didn't rite that.
L: ur rite that he didn't rite that but after Fev rejected abhi she prob. Went to the bathroom to ck her plastic botax face out(munni u wanted to be a vamp!) n add more cover up to hide those big zits of hers with ripi.
L: but still daal me kuch kala hai…
J: really? I never new u could make daal.
Love just gives him ur pathetic look n runs to find Preeti. As she is looking for Preeti she sees a paper near the garbage can with Devs handwriting on it. She picks it up n gasps.
L: (thinking) now I really have to find Preeti.
Lets go see Preeti now:
We see Preeti siting on the bench crying.
P: (out loud) Y did I feel so bad when abhi said that Fev wrote all that? Y do I care? If it was someone else then I would of kicked their butts but y did I just feel like getting away from HIM? But then also y do I feel like he didn't rite those things about me? I got to find the note!
Preeti gets up n hears a voice. Voice: v
V: its prob. Cuz he didn't.
Who is that person? Wat will happen when Preeti finds out wat was really on the note? Find out …uh…tom. Or sat.
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~*!Ripi!*~ @~*!Ripi!*~
16 years ago
HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sheesh capeesh...waitingg..
AND YEAHH i wanna see ur pic in ur dress!!!!..
Sabrina @sabrinaa.
+ 4
16 years ago
lol read ur ff! its really nice!
-- id love to see ur pic in ur dress!
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
Y DO U ALL WANT TO BE VILLIANS? HUH? lmao
well if u guys all want to see me i will post my pic in my homecoming dress on here..if i am allowed..n if i dont look that ugly
otherwise u guys can im me n i will send u the pic n my homecoming is on sat. so i will prob. have the pic by...sun?
n a guy..n a dance? lmao! ur funny..dou noe who my parents r? my mom would kill me for just grinding with my friends...NOT THAT I GRIND ok? lolz n some ppl did ask me ..but they were not my type..right RIPI?lolz
P.S. i will post tom.
Krishna @snowflake0555
+ 4
16 years ago
haha whats your homecoming dress gonna look like???? good luck lolzz oooo i wonder if someone gonna ask you out or if your gonna dance w/ a guy lmao! and idc what i am as long as i have a part in your fan fic. hmmm maybe a villian??
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
lolz sonia its neev n PREETI lmao lozl
n ripi yes i do love keeping u guys in suspense..its fun to see u guys suffer
Krishna...i will put adi when abhi n ripi go away..ok? n u...hmmm wat do u want to be?
SAKI!!! lozl i dont think i did this part with u have i?
ok i will cont. on wed. cuz i have NOOOOO SKOOL!!!
omfg i am so freaking scared for sat. its HOMECOMING!! ahhhhh!!
Krishna @snowflake0555
+ 4
16 years ago
Preeeeeeeetiiiiiiiii OMG! You better freakin contine your Fan Fic.!!! We don't hate it, infact we all love it so get over it and type like a maniac as fast as you can! lolz. Haha you know the part when it had those 2 girls at the end? Well I thought one of them was gonna be me....sheesh when are you gonna put me in it? And also Aditya and the rest of the characters like you said you would? Plz continue soon! I can't wait to read it!!! ARRGHH Hurry Up!
~*!Ripi!*~ @~*!Ripi!*~
16 years ago
you just love making suspense don't u...lolz..
Great Part!!
CONTINUE really soon!!
Sonia @Bollywood_chic
+ 3
16 years ago
hey soo good....i wanna kno who the voise was too but i hope neev and prachi get togther,....
Sakshi @imdudehead
16 years ago
awsum part... whoz voice is it?? hmm...
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
srry i noe its short but to keep th suspense i had to keep it short.