Next day…….
Aksh arrives in bhumi's home early morning……..arjun notices this……..
After nearly 1 hour aksh and bhumi along with chintu come out of the house laughing…………..chattering……….this irks arjun…he feels jealous……….and decides to follow bhumi……….
He follows them and reaches a beach…………
As: bhumi chale beach main……..
B: nahi aksh main yahi theek hoon tum aur chintu chaho to jao……..
As: to theek hain hum yahi baith the hain (pointing towards sand filled land)
B: theek hai
Bhumi warns chintu against going into beach……chintu,who was more than eager to go to the beach……….but on bhumi's instructions he falls silent………and makes a face a sits beside playing with sand……..
After a while bhumi and aksh both start listening to music in their walkman
Bhumi and aksh were sitting in a small shade and facing back to sea……..
Chintu took advantage of this and whisked away to enjoy the beach water……..
Arjun who had been following bhumi………..couldnt see bhumi and aksh properly since they were sitting in shade……
All he was able to se that they were both sitting inside a shade………and he could not bear the thought of what they could be doing there……he gritted his teeth……..
Suddenly he heard a voice of someone in the beach……some child was drowning……..bhumi and aksh did not hear this since they were listening music………
Arjun rushed ……dived and caught hold of the child, who was abt to drown, in right time…………..and bought him out……..
He recognized the child as the one who was with bhumi…..patted his face …but the child did not respond…..after a few times the child opened his eyes……….
Everyone around was relieved……….arjun saw bhumi still in the shade……….he was furious……he marched to the shade……..
Similar at that time……..
Bhumi called aksh and gave her earphone to him to make him hear the music……..aksh came near her to hear the music……..
Just then arjun arrived and was furious to see them like that and caught hold of bhumi's hand very tightly ……..
Bhumi was shocked and looked up and was stunned up to see that it was arjun…
B: tum…….(getting up)
But before she could complete ……….arjun drew her forcefully to the beach………..aksh following them…………..
B: (painfully) mujhe dard ho raha hai!!
Arjun angrily not looking at her……but looking straight and gritting his teeth……he took her to the spot where chintu lay and released her arm………
B: ahh (on seeing chintu……) CHINTU!!(kneeling down) she took the child's head to her lap……….
Aksh came near her and started patting chintu calling his name……….
Some other ppl who were standing…looked and commented
.....Abhi……..yaad aayi bachche ki……..agar thodi der ho jaati to bache ki jaan hi chali jaati………..kaise log hai..itne chote bache ko akela chod diya……..
Bhumi was looking at them as they narrated
.....Agar yeh bhala insaan nahin hota(pointing at arjun) to najane yeh bacha zinda bhi hota ya nahi……
Bhumi looked at where the lady pointed her finger to see arjun standing over there………….
she felt really happy and aksh got up and bought his hands forward to shake hands with arjun and thank him……….
But arjun ignored him and looked at bhumi……….his eyes were red with anger……bhumi saw this and was frightened …..
And more than that couldn't understand his behaviour………..
A: arrey inhe romance karne se fursat mile to bachche ke bare main sochenge naa….kyun madam………(looking at bhumi)
Bhumi was shocked to hear these words from arjun………She felt like crying………
B: aisi baat nahi hai…..
Interrupting her……
A: to phir kaisi baat hai……..AGAR BACHCHE KO SAMBHAL NAHI SAKTE TO PHIR ZIMMEDARI KYUN LETE HAIN……….hmmmmmm
Arjun was literally shouting……..and tears flowed down bhumi's cheeks………
A: NAJANEY KAUN BEWAKOOF THEY JISNE BACHCHE KO AAPKE HAATON MAIN DE DIYA…………..
Aksh interrupting
As: aap galat samaj rahein hai…main aur bhumi……..
Arjun looks towards him and interrupts
A: main aur bhumi kya……………kya huh (coming near to him)….us shade ke peeche baith kar romance kar rahe the…..
B: NAHIN……….NAHI YEH SACH NAHI HAI……..(looking tearfully at arjun and getting up)
B: aaksh chalo yahan se……….(wiping off her tears………..angriliy….looking at aksh)
Aksh and bhumi leave taking chintu……….arjun is left behind……..ppl in the beach disperse talking randomly abt the incident………
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Meenal Desai @mj_desai16
17 years ago
where is the update iam waiting to know whats further pppppplllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
tuhina @tunna
17 years ago
very good part sia dear !!!
Actually itna jyada coincidenc ho rha tha aksh n bhoomi ka ki arjun to gussa hoyega hi....
very nice part
waiting to c how the issue is resolved
sia @sia_lovely
+ 2
17 years ago
thats so sweet of u dear......and really happy that u liked the fan fic
Lizzie89 @Lizzie89
17 years ago
sorry i forgot to respond sia,gr8 going . i read the whole of ur ff in one go and i really loved it.continue soon, must say u r really fast at updating. u r doing a good job keep it up
parvatisrikant @parvatisrikant
17 years ago
Had read it but forgotten to respond Sia.....going good...
sia @sia_lovely
+ 2
17 years ago
erm .....a bit long part.....pls read and respond