PART 35
She took slow steps, and went to the spot where she saw the
figure.
Suddenly, from the back, a hand reached for a mouth,
closing it with it, and pulling her closer.
" Don't move, or I'll kill you." Said the voice.
Aaliya was shocked, completely shocked. It was familiar,
too familiar.
Aaliya was too shocked to move, or even try to get away
from the person behind her.
The voice, the touch, everything so familiar,
" But this is an impossibility." She thought.
A tear flowed from her eye and ran down her face,
and fell on the hand that held her.
Aaliya did not know, but it was this teardrop that
had softened the grip of the hand.
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Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
di u don't have to say sorry at all, i know u were not well and u don't have to explain urself at all.
I am glad u like it.
aamir came back in time warna morcha woow, it would have been fun yaar, i should have waited for some more time.
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
thanks yaar, i'll continue soon.
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
aamir aaliya se mar to nahi khaye ga bu aur kya khayega u'll have to read to find out.
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
I don't want to kill u or vandu di, i would like to live for a long time.
I am glad that u are happy, but let me tell u, plz don't keep ur hopes high,
kyuin jab umeindein thooth ti hai tab dard zyada hota hai.
anyway keep commenting and enjoy urself.
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
thanks di, jhadoo i want it anyway lol
and vandu di ko kill karna mera kam hai.
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
thanks a lot yaar, hope u like it later on as well
Bluefalls @Bluefalls
+ 2
16 years ago
Faiza just read the parts which I did not previously.Must say one thing...U have been successful to create suspense .Firstly, sorry for commenting after such a long time but u know I was not well and i am sure i dont need to give u any further reasons .Waise, I am happy about one thing.I did not get the chance to suffer like vandu . Or else main yahaan apne comments mein naara lagtaati about "bring aamir back" .
I am glad to find out that u finally did increase ur post length .Great FF dear.Keep up the good work .SAHELIGSWM39467.6221180556
Parvathi @Paru6
16 years ago
gr8 parts finally he's bk *sigh* lol cont soon
varallikka @Varallikka
16 years ago
ha ha ha a gaya sada hero..kya entry hai..but abi kameeno ko jute parwa sadii heroine se itte din dur rehne ke lye plus usko darane ke liye
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi
+ 10
16 years ago
faizu vandu ke saath saath kill me too..aamir ke haathon maarna is just jannat ke barabar..yippeeeeeeeeeeeee...me so khush yaar aamir is back..aaliya ke aasoo.. these are tears of happiness kyunke aaliya recognizes aamir's voice,his touch.. aur more than anything i think aaliya aamir ko apne kareeb mehsoos kar rahii hai..because she has that ehsaas sirf ussi wajah se uske aankhon mein aasoo hai.. hyee.. hyeee...kya baat hai..just too good yaar...you know i seriously could not believe what i was reading...when i heard that person say don't move,or i'll kill you.. i knew straight away just like aaliya that hum sabka aamir, aaliya ke dil ka rajkumar aamir padhare hai..yahoooooooooooooooo.. aamir is back..balle..balle.. party time... yaar tumhari story ki kitni bhi tareef karoon kum hai..keep up the good work going.. faizu dear do continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly...actually very damn eagerly.. sun_42339467.4361574074