PART 4:
"You deserve an explanation," he said. Aaliya just nodded.
" First things first. I am really sorry I walked in liked that but my luggage was really heavy."
(Aaliya was angry with him because his behavior earlier, but now her anger seemed to come down.)
" My name is Aamir. I am your father's friend's son. My sisters and I will be spending the night here until our rooms are ready." He said.
" Its ok. My name is Aaliya. Glad to know you Aamir".
She said this and walked towards the bed as Aamir walked towards the sofa.
" I'll wait for your sisters," said Aaliya. "You can sleep if you wish. You'll be tired after the journey."
"No, I'd rather wait for them as well. Though you don't have to stay awake", he said.
Aaliya shook her head, " I would really like to meet them."
"As you wish." Said Aamir.
Both made themselves comfortable, as neither had any idea as to how long the wait might last.
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Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
i was waiting for ur comments, i am glad u liked it so far.
I'll continue as soon as i can.
ananya7736 @ananya7736
16 years ago
sorry for not commenting.. just caught up with the last two parts and they were mind-blowing... just awesome...
do continue soon now.. cant wait
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
thank u soo much.
Finally Aamir and Aaliya have met and now i think it is time that the story took a few turns.
Don't worry i'll continue as soon as i can.
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
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sorry for not commenting in a long time on the story !!!!!!........but i'm back !..just read all the latest updates from where i left !!! ....................................................
so finally aaliya n aamir meet , but in a scarey way !!!........i would be scared to open my room door at the middle of the night 2 find a man standing there wt his lagauge n enters without a word !!!! i can understand how must aaliya felt that moment !!!! ............he introduce himself n say's that his sister n him were going to stay wt her, as their room were not ready yet !!!! .......how's aamir sister ???.......so there parents know each other ahh, n r friends !!!!!!!!/.........can't wait too read the next part !!!!!!!!!!!!!.............it's going to interesting from now on !!!!......continue soon plzzzzzzzz..........can't wait !!!!!
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i was missing ur lovely comments, its great to have u back . Stay with me throught this journey, i love ur comments they encourage me and light up my hopes.
Yeah Aamir has 2 sisters and they will be introduced soon.
U won't have to be waiting for long, i'll post the next part soon.
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
Thank u very much for taking out time and reading it, i am really very glad that u liked it.
I'll surely post longer parts InshaAllah later on.
You won't have to wait long for the next part.
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
thabk u di, yeah even i felt that it was short, i'll try to post a really long one soon.
nikita @beauty_niki
16 years ago
wowwwwwwww that part was really good .yessssss!!!! that was aamir . i am so happy that aliya met aamir.now the story will ne far more interesting .continue soon yaar plzzzzzz....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare.
zaira @le_me_star
16 years ago
sorry for not commenting in a long time on the story !!!!!!........but i'm back !..just read all the latest updates from where i left !!! ....................................................
so finally aaliya n aamir meet , but in a scarey way !!!........i would be scared to open my room door at the middle of the night 2 find a man standing there wt his lagauge n enters without a word !!!! i can understand how must aaliya felt that moment !!!! ............he introduce himself n say's that his sister n him were going to stay wt her, as their room were not ready yet !!!! .......how's aamir sister ???.......so there parents know each other ahh, n r friends !!!!!!!!/.........can't wait too read the next part !!!!!!!!!!!!!.............it's going to interesting from now on !!!!......continue soon plzzzzzzzz..........can't wait !!!!!
Rabia @SuhanaSafar
+ 7
16 years ago
Just read all the parts! Great work. You definintely have a reader in me. Please post longer parts next time. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Daebak @Daebak
+ 7
16 years ago
hey nice part.........but it was a really short one.....plzz jaldi se lamba sa part post karna