Chapter 8

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"Hmmm....baara to aapke chahere pe baje the Major.....Pasand nahin aayi aapko....aapki, 'Nayee Date"?'

Raj smiled.

"Maine kaha tha biwi....ki tumko mujhse behtar koi milega hi nahi....afterall....."

"Yeah....woh logon ka reaction to aapne dekkha hi....."

The two of them straitened themselves....and started walking...when Raj caught her by her hand....

"Waise maine kaha ki aap saari main.....gazab lag rahin hain??"

Naina turned back....and smiled....came closed and planted a peck on his cheek....

The entire hall went mad......clapping....and in the middle of the upload....Mr. & Mrs. Shekhawat walked towards the tables.....

....finally, as they came to a reasonably quieter corner....

"Kaisi rahi Major?"

"Huh....?"

"I earned a clear win today...."

"Well, you would have......"

"Magar tumko pata kaise chala, ki main......"

"Hum to aapko laakhon main dhoondh lete hain....", he said in an old-hindi-movie-hero-style.....making an annoying face....

"Kaise.....bolona....!!!!"

Raj tenderly took her hand.....

"Har chor ki tarah....tumne bhi surah chod diya.....ek chotisi bhool....aur yeh kamal ka plan.....Flopp!!"

"What?", asked Naina surveying herself......

"Yeh....hamari nishaani.....ise dekhte hi main samaj gaya....ki tum mujhe ullo banane ke liye....shaadi ki angoothi nikaal sakti ho.....par yeh simple si pyaar ki nishaani ko kabhi khud se alag nahin karogi!", and he kissed her hand....quite proud of her!

"Well done Major.....", she smiled....

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After some more time in the party....when Naina and Rajveer walked towards the dining area.....

"By the way....where's Shalini....?"

"Dr.....mujhe nahin pata..."

"Mujhe laga woh tumhare saath thi...."

"Well, is plan main woh shamil thin....par salon se nikalne ke baad woh gayab hi ho gayee....."

When she caught a glimpse of Dr.Shalini.......

"Hey there you are....Raj, woh rahin Doctor....chalo..."

And both of them rushed towards her!
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Comments (7)

this ff is sooo cuuute!!!!pllz continue soon....

17 years ago

Hey this is great, yaar, I only just found it and it's sooooooooo cute, just what I need to cheer me up from being depressed in the season break! Please please post the next part soon!

17 years ago

Jus read da last few parts.... they were absolutely amazin... n i jus luv da fact dat this ff is lite hearted, its absolutely awesome!!!!!

17 years ago

hey great jivora good job pl continue soon i am wating

17 years ago

hey by the way can u plese give the next updates for the other fanfic u post updates for from the orkut community plese do post the next parts for tat fanfic soon

17 years ago

wow just awsome..itz truly awsome..plz continue soon

17 years ago

well people, we writers are encouraged by your comments....tell me if the story is boring, or gross....or u like it or you dont..... pleeeeeeeese comment...to keep us going! cheers, jiv

17 years ago