Part-17
Kashish ke pair pe chot lagne ko pure teen se char din ho gaye the.........Kashish Subah me uthkar apne room me bethkar apne pair ki pati badal rahi thi jab Sujal jogging se wapas aa raha tha..........Kashish ko maloom nahi hota ki Sujal aa chuka hai.............Kashish dheere se apni pati khol ke apni aankhein bandh kar deti hai.................
Kashish
(apne aap se bat karti): kya zaroorat thi apne pair me kanch chubhane ki...........yeh jante huye bhi ki muje khoon dekhke kitna darr lagta hai phir bhi...........Dadi sach hi kehti thi ke hamesha hi apne pair pe khud khulhadi marti hoon.............(put the dettol on it)......AAHHHHH.........bahot dard ho raha hai lekin kisi ko meri fikar hi kaha hai.........kash dadi aap yaha hoti.............main aapko bahot miss karti hoon..........muje aap logo ki bahot yaad aati hai.............(puts the bandages).........muje aisa sochna bhi nahi chahiye kyunki muje koi hakk hi nahi banta...........ek beti hoke maine bahot se logo ke dil dhukhaye hai............shayad isi ki saza mil rahi hai..........Kashish wipes of the tears........and sees sujal is standing at the door looking at her.......
Kashish: tum.....
Sujal: tum ro rahi thi.......
Kashish: nahi to........aur agar main ro bhi rahi hoon to tumhe kya.............tum to khush hi honge na.......
Sujal: jaisa tum samjo.......main subah subah tumhare saath suru hoke apna din bigadna nahi chahta......muje aur bhi bahot se kaam hai...........
Kashish: jaise dusro ki zindagi kaise tabah karni...............
Kashish waha se jane hi wali thi jab woh apna santulan kho bethti hai aur woh girne hi wali thi jab Sujal aake uske kandhe se kashish ko pakadta hai............dono ek dusre ki aankhon me khoye huye the jab charu zor se chikhti hai.........
Charu; Bhaiyaa................Bhabhi jaldi se neeche aao.........
Kashish aur Sujal daud ke neeche jake dekhte hai to charu veena ko lekar khadi hoti hai.....
Kashish: charu kya hua......bata naa....
Charu: bhaiyaa...........mama ko dil me dard ho raha hai.......hume use abhi hi hospital lejana hoga...........
Sujal: chalo.........jaldi se..........main car nikalta hoon........tum dono mama ko leke aa jana..........
Kashish veena ko leke peeche bethti hai.................aur charu sujal ke pass...........sujal paglo ki tarah car chalata hua hospital pahunchta hai.........
Sujal aur Kashish dono veena ko leke andar jate hai.........
Sujal: Doctor............doctor.......
Doctor: Mr. Garewal aap...............aur yeh sab.......
Sujal: dekhiye doctor........yeh meri maa hai aur abhi ise dil me bahot dard ho raha hai......
Doctor: nurse inhe foran ICU me le chalo........
Doctors and nurses are all inside veena's room.........
Sujal is standing and kashish is standing opposide to him and charu is siting beside kashish..........
Charu: Bhabhi...........aap ka pair..............isme se to bahot khoon beh raha hai......
Kashish: kuch bhi nahi hai...........
Sujal: Kashish tum is tarah........chalo tumhe nurse pati bandh degi......
Kashish: nahi is waqt mama se badhkar mere liye kuch bhi nahi..................main thik hoon..........
Charu; Bhabhi.......
yeh kehke kashish ke gale lagkar rone lagti hai.......
Charu: Bhabhi.....mama thik to ho jayegi na........
Kashish: are pagli.........yeh kya bol rahi ho.......kuch nahi hua hai mama ko...........aur kabhi ho bhi nahi sakta.........kya kabhi koi itni pyari beti ko chod ke ja sakta hai...........ab tum yeh rona bandh karo.......agar mama ko pata chala ki unki beti ke aankh se aanshu gire to woh muje dategi........aur tu kyun pareshan ho rahi hai....main hoon na.........kuch nahi hoga mama ko.......samji.......
Kashish sujal ki aur dekhti hai jab doctor bahar aata hai....
Sujal: doctor woh mama.......
Doctor: jee mamuli sa dil ka dora tha..........koi ghabrane wali baat nahi........kal subah tak to hum unhe ghar bhi bhej denge..........aap andar jake unse baat kar sakte hai lekin koi bhi stress wali baat unke liye abhi thik nahi hai.........main thodi dair bad aake check karta hoon..........
Sujal: thank u so much doctor........
Doctor: yeh to mera farz tha filhal woh aapka intzar kar rahi hai......
Sab log andar jate hai.........
Sujal (
sits and holds her hand); Kyun mama..........papa to pehle hi chod ke chale gaye ab aap bhi humse durr jana chahte hai.........mama agar aapko lagta hai ki aapke bache bade ho gaye aur woh apan khayal khud rakh sakte hai to galat soch rahe hai............hume aapki bahot zarooriyat hai.......ple mama aainda se aap apna pura khayal rakhenge........vaada kijiye ki aap kabhi hume chod ke nahi jayenge.........Veena: main vaada karti hoon ki main aainda se apna khayal rakhungi.........lekin beta ek din to sabhi ko jana hi hai...........aur muje koi fikar nahi kyunki main janti hoon ki Kashish kabhi bhi meri kami tum dono ko mehsoos nahi hone degi..........
Kashish
(wipes of her tears): kyun mama........aapko to abhi bahot kaam karna hai.........charu ki shaadi me..........aur aap sab yeh kya ro rahe hai.....kuch bhi to nahi hua..........mama bilkul thik hai.........sach kahana maine.....Veena: bilkul.....
Kashish: to phir charu ab tum college jao...........kyunki aaj tumhari exam hai na...........
Charu: nahi main kahi nahi jaungi.......
Kashish: maine kaha na tum exam me ja rahi ho matlab tum ja rahi ho.....
Charu: aaj to bhaiyaa ki bhi ek bahot important meeting hai..........to aap unhe kyun kuch nahi kehte.......
Kashish: tum bhi jaogi aur woh bhi............
Sujal: lekin mama........
Kashish: maine kaha na ki main hoon.............
Veena: kashish thik keh rahi hai..........aap sab log jaiye.......kashish yaha pe rukegi mere saath aur sujal waise tum to raat ko aa hi rahe ho.......
Charu: main bhi aaungi.....
Sujal: jee nahi.........aap apne exams ki taiyariyaa karenge..........chalo main tumhe college chod deta hoon...........mama main chalta hoon aap apna khayal rakhana........bye....
veena; bye.........
sham ko Kashish aur veena milke baatein kar rahe the......
Veena (
laughs): nahi........main nahi manti........tum aur shararati........Kashish: haa.......aur ek bar to hadd hi kar di maine......jab hum log dadaji se milne jaislmer gaye the to main kisi ko bataye bina do din tak ghar se chali gayi thi..........papa ne pura ka pura saher chan mara..........aur bhaiyaa to itne gusse huye the ki puchiye hi mat.......
Veena: waise gayi kaha thi........
Kashish: main ........registan me dur dur tak jaha koi na ho.......
Veena: waha kya karne gayi thi.......
Kashish: khule asman ke neeche raat ki chadar ke tale taro se baatein karne..........aisi baatein jo aaj tak koi na janta ho............
Veena: to tum rajshthan ki ho......
Kashish: jee.........mere papa waha ke hai aur mama delhi se........
Veena: ab aise hi muskurate rehna ...........achchi lagti ho..........
Kashish:aap bilkul mama ki tarah hai............woh bhi aisa hi kehti hai...........
Veena: maine tum jaisi ladki aajtak nahi dekhi..............jab hasti ho to aankhoin me aanshu hote hai.............jab dil me dard ho to chehre pe muskurahat.........kyun apne aap ko dard de rahi ho......
Kashish: main kaha apne aap ko de rahi hoon............dard to zindagi ne muje diye hai..........aap yeh sab baatein chodiye woh dekho nurse aapka khana la rahi hai.......
Veena: muje nahi khana...........yeh bilkul bhi achcha nahi hoga............
Nurse aake khana rakhke chali jati hai jab Sujal darwaze ke pass khada rehta hai......
Kashish: yeh hospitalwale bhi itna bura khana nahi banate..........janti hoon............aur agar aapke bete ko pata chala to woh muje itna datega ki puchiye mat............agar aap apne liye nahi to mere liye hi sahi..........ple
............(kashish apne haath se use khana khilati hai jo sujal dekh raha hota hai).........Kashish khana khane ke bad pani lene jati hai jab woh sujal ko dekhti hai.......
Kashish: tum.....
Sujal: main bas abhi aaya.......
Veena: waha kyun khade ho.........yaha aao......
Sujal: ab aapki tabiyat kaisi hai.......
Veena: jab itni pyari bahu dekhbhal karne ke liye ho to muje kya ho sakta hai............aaj kashish ne meri bahot seva ki hai..........ek pal ke liye bhi muje akela nahi choda............ab sun.........use bhi bhukh lagi hogi........dopahar ko bhi kuch nahi khaya...........ab tum dono jake dinner kar aao.....
Kashish: nahi mama main bilkul thik hoon......
Veena: dekh maine teri baat mani ab teri bari........aur waise bhi nurse hai na.......
Kashish: thik hai..........hum jaldi se hi aayenge..........
Sujal aur kashish nurse ko kehne ke bad hospital ke canteen me jate hai...........dono ke beech ek ajeeb si khamoshi hoti hai.........shayad dono kuch kehna chahte hai lekin kehne ki himmat nahi ho pa rahi........dono khane ka order dekhe bethe huye hote hai......
Sujal: Kashish...
Kashish: hmmmmmm.............
Sujal: Thanks....
Kashish: kis liye....
Sujal: aaj tumne jis tarah mama ke liye.....
Kashish: shayad tum apne sanskar bhul gaye the lekin main kabhi apne sanskar aur maryada nahi bhuli.........main bhul nahi sakti ki tumne mere parivar ke saath kya kiya .........lekin yeh janne ke bad bhi main tumhare liye aisa nahi kar sakti.........jante ho kyun...........kyunki mere maa-baap ne muje shikhaya hai ki kisi aur ki galti ki saza kisi aur ko mat dena...........main tumhare jo chahe karu lekin mere dil me Mama aur Charu ke liye hamesha pyaar, maan aur maryada rahenge...........main aaj tak sinha khandan ko kabhi zukne nahi diya........usi tarah main kabhi Garewal khandan ko bhi kabhi zukne nahi dungi...............lekin tum ......tumne kya kiya.........kabhi koi soch bhi nahi sakta ki ek devi jaisi aurat ka beta itna gira hua..........aur ek baat mama ko hamare bare me sab kuch pata hai.........shaadi se pehle hi unhe sabkuch pata lag gaya.........lekin woh chup hai to sirf meri waje se........kyunki muje kabhi mama ke aankhoin me aanshu dikhe nahi jayenge jo khud uska beta de sake...........tum aaj tak khud ke liye jite aaye...........ab ek bar dusro ke liye jee ke dekho.......shayad tumhare is jeevan ko uska makshad mil jaye........kyunki jitna pyaar aur apnapan hum kisi ko dete hai to badle me usse jyada milta hai.......tum hamesha hi apne kamyabi ki rah me itne aage nikal gaye ki tumne kabhi mudke apne parivar ki aur dekha hi nahi......kabhi tumne mama ke pass bethke unse do meethe baatein ki........kabhi charu se pucha uski college kaisi chal rahi hai.......nahi.....Sujal hum apne liye nahi apno ke liye jite hai.....shayad tumhe meri baat samaj na aaye lekin ek din tum zaroor pastaoge......muje koi fark nahi padta lekin kam se kam us Maa ke liye to ek achcha insaan banne ki koshish karo..........muje jo thik laga woh main keh rahi hoon kyunki aaj mama ke kareeb rehke pata chala ki woh kitni tanha hai..........
kashish yeh kehke apna khana khane lagti hai aur sujal sirf use dekhta hi rehta hai...........thodi dair bad sujal aur Kashish dono veena ke pass aate hai.......jab woh dekhte hai to veena so chuki hoti hai.........Kashish veena ke pass bethke wahi so jati hai aur sujal khidki ke bahar andheri raat me kahi khoya hua hota hai.......
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Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi
+ 10
16 years ago
welcome back..hope you had a great holiday.. continue soon me waiting for the next part eagerly.. sun_42339472.3019560185
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
continue soon yaar,
missing u and ur ff a lot. Arshie39471.3316435185
kashish @goodkashish
+ 2
16 years ago
Hi! Friends.......I am back from my trip.........i like to thank those friends who remembered me when i wasnt here........i am glad to say thaht i am going to continue my story from now............thanks you all for your support and love.....
love
Kashish
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi
+ 10
16 years ago
superb.very good going..i'am completely loving it.. story bohat achcha jaa raha hai..super-duper cooll...nice.. amazing... you have a good holiday...and me waiting for the next part of your fanfic eagerly.. sun_42339422.1789699074
nikita @beauty_niki
16 years ago
kashish what a part yaar . mein tumhare harr part pe fida ho jati hu yaar. itne ache parts kaise likhti ho tum sach....samaj hi nahi aata . it's like you know puri link laag jati hai parts padhte waqt they are that good . ohhhhhh hoooooooo toh sujal ne kashish ki baatein chori chupe sunn li huhhh.....about she talking to herself .i am damn sure usse uss waqt bura laga hoga kashish ke liye, uska dard dekhkar usse bhi dard hua hoga .u know woh keheta nahi ya dikhata nahi isska matlab yeh nahi ki sujal ko kuch feel nahi hota ya emotions nahi hai . balki he is more emotional that kashish . that i can see from his behaviour and nature . ohhhhh wowwwwwwwwww and the best thing was when veena gets that heart pain . kehete hai na joh hota hai ache ke liye hota hai !!! that's soooooo true . i mean i agar veena ke saath aisa nahi hota toh naa kashish ko kabhi veena ka itna khayal rakhne ko mauka milta . aur agar moka nahi milta toh sujal kabhi dekh hi nahi pata ki kashish ke dil mein uske parivaar ke liye kya jazbaat hai . lekin aaj joh hua bohot acha hua . veena ki iss halat mein kashish ne uska itna khayal rakha that was toh fully expected lekin yeh expected nahi tha that sujal will listen to what kashish is saying and how is she recovering veena from her bad health . kitne pyaar se khana khilaya veena ko yeh dekhkar toh sujal ko bohot andar se acha aur bura dono laga hoga 100% sure . hmmmmmmmmmmm............and i loved the way kashish gave a long but a true lecture to sujal about how one should be in life . that was aaaammmaaazzziiinnngggg !!! kashish itna sab kuch keheti hai aur sujal uski baatein sunn raha hota hai and then he keeps on staring at her .i know and i am definately sure ki sujal ko bhi yeh saari baatein pata hogi . it's like just ki sujal ki pecheli zindagi bohot kharab gayi hai . it's not like kashish na ki bada parivaar jismein underatandings hai, khushiyan hai, pyaar hai and all .usse naa aik baap ka pyaar mill paya aur aik maa ka pya
Hana @HhAaNnAa
16 years ago
wow kashish dear awesome part loved it tooo tooo gooood vechari kashish uski dadi sahi kehti hai apne hi pairon par gulati lol abbh sujal aur kashish harrozh subha shaam shuru hojate hai choti choti baton par fighting kind a its cute lekin kabi kabi serious hojate hai...i liked kashish's relationship with veena she has surely created a strong bond between them fairly to say i think her bond is even stronger than sujal's ...veena acts as if she knew kashish before sujal...finally after the incident with veena and kashish taking care of her sujal said sorry to her but still he doesn't realise how it feels to be far from your parents and going through their hatred..but hope he realises soooon ...wah kashish neh kya lecture diya hai too gooood continue sooon dear can't wait more
ananya7736 @ananya7736
16 years ago
awesome part... hope sujal changes soon.. jaldi continue karo wait nahi hota
jyothi @jyothi_cool
+ 2
16 years ago
hey lovely part hey plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi se cont karo
kashish @goodkashish
+ 2
16 years ago
Hi! friends i am going to india for six weeks.....i am leaving on dec 7th and coming back on jan 20th.........i will not be able to post any new part.....but i will try overthere.......but i am definetly going to continue my story after that regularly.........thanks love kashish goodkashish39420.7555555556