Tears of Love

Tears of Love Completed M

Chapter 16

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Daebak
Daebak @Daebak 16 years ago heyyyyyyy!! where r u yaar!!!!!!!! u didnt continue any of your 3 ff's since 28th
Kashish_88
Aalia @Kashish_88 16 years ago continue soon, i just love ur ff, i mean the idea is very unique....i love the way their new "fight" will begin n i love how veena n akshat r trying to bring them close together...its sumthing different n kool....will love to see how they get together.... plz cont soon... waiting badlee
Paru6
Parvathi @Paru6 16 years ago god kashish made him do all those things he deserved it lol gr8 part cont soon
Arshie
Faiza Sait @Arshie 16 years ago Very nice yaar, poor sujal, ilike the way kashish is taking her revenge but i don't know how long it will last.
aishwaria
saba @aishwaria 16 years ago man that was one hilarious piece of work One song dedication Sujal- 'main joru ka ghulaaam aaray ban keh rahoon ga' The part was just terrific, marvelous, mindblowing But this Sujal aur uska yeh ego its just too much i m sure 1 day he would realise his mistakes . Please try to continue soon me waiting for the part eagerly .
beauty_niki
nikita @beauty_niki 16 years ago holyyyyyyyyyy smokesssssss....man kya part tha..... extremely well written and hilarious . yeh sujal toh joru ka gulam hi bann gaya kuch waqt ke liye .ha haaaaaaa.....that was soooo funny ki kashish haar kaam sujal se karvati hai mamma ki dhamki dekar .kya patni hai yaar . kuch toh training leni hi chahiye usse . sach kya nachaya sujal ko apni ungliyin paar usne aaj . sujal ki shakal dekhne layak hogi naa .wowwwwwwwwwwwww.....aur abb toh asli jung shuru hogi where sujal will also attack kashish with his cunning nature and his guts . dono abb jaise medan mein khade utre hai aik doosre ko khatam karne .even i am excited ki yeh jung unn dono ko kaha lejati hai, kis mod pe yeh jung khatam hogi aur kis tarah hogi .goshhh!!!kashish i am waiting for next part really very very eagerly .the part was great !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzz..........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare.
Daebak
Daebak @Daebak 16 years ago Arey sare naukar kaha gaye......sujal naukar ko kyu nahi kehta....veena ye thodi na kahegi ki namak bhi nahi la sakta naukar
Surya.Ravi
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi 16 years ago
very good going..yeh sujal , kashish ka attitude na... uff.. meri tho samaj mein hii nahii aatha..problem yeh hai kii both of them are equally egoistic..and their attitude..they seriously fight like small kids..i dont know kab bade honge dono...keep up the good work going... cooll... do post the next part soon..me waiting eagerly to read the next part... sun_42339408.1744212963
ananya7736
ananya7736 @ananya7736 16 years ago hey awesome part.... loved the way kashish was ordering sujal around.. hope sujal soon gives away his "attitude problem" and accepts kashish.. do continue soon
Aamnakideewani
sheela @Aamnakideewani 16 years ago nice part yaar yeh dono kitna bachon ki tarh larte hain huh!kkkkoi aik bhi samjhdar nahi hai pata nahi kya hoga is rishte ka?????/ ne ways try 2 cont Asap
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