part 4
America
We zoom into the huge khanna mansion
There nothing but quietness in the house….
We go into mukti/ridz room
Suddenly the alarm rings ….showing it's 7:30 am
R: ahhhhhhh….wat?(looks at the clock)
R: oh shit get up ridz u will be late for uni(short for university)
After a while comes out wearing a white long skirt with a yellow top ties her hair up wears a silver necklace with matching earrings and white sandals. then looks at herself in the mirror …..(thinking)
R: WOW .ridz you look too cute .just like a princess……lets go to uni now
R: (about to leave her room when she thinks about her bros)… oh shit ridz bhaiya ko bhi udana chalo ab unke room mein warna late hogoagi….
Adi/angad room
Ridz goes in the room and see it's very messy and empty……..she understands they are getting ready…..she decide to go to milind's room to wake him up…
R: let go and wake up milind bhaiya..hmmmm…good idea
Milind room
Ridz looks at the room and see it very neat and tidy….(thinks)
R: hmmmmmmm. Bhaiya seriously needs a girl in his life……(sees milind is still sleeping and decides to wake him up)..
R: (goes near his ear and shouts)……BHAIYA……
M: ahhhhhhhhh………..wat happened are u okie????(still drowsy from sleep)
R: yes bhaiya I'm okie and perfectly fine
M: then why did u scream??
R: to wake you up..!!!
M: okie theek hai meri maa ab joa angad aur adi tumhara wait kare honge…….bye.luv u
R: okie bhaiya I'm going byeeeeeeee!!!!!!!..luv u too
Downstairs
Ridz comes down to see angad and adi waiting
Angad wearing jeans and navy blue shirt
Adi wearing torn washed out jeans with a red nike shirt and wearing a white collar shirt on top of the t-shirt
A: lo aagayi Jhansi ki rani
An: toh maharani aap tayar hain or there is still something left to do???
R: bhaiya stop annoying me and yes I'm ready lets go!!!!!!!(says it loud)
A: finally lets go(about to leave ….when)
Gaythari= G
G: wait breakfast toh karlo
An: nahi mom hum lait ho rahe hain….bye luv you
A/R: bye luv you
G: love you too….bye…
Saint Marian University
Angad, adi and ridz arrive at the university
(Note: Angad is doing an additional course in the university while recording his albums)
R: okie bhai mein ja rahi hoon …mujhe late horaha hai…bye
An/A: haan bye ridz
Ridz running through corridor to reach her class while going bumps into a guy…..
R: I'm soo sorry…..
V: it's ok jaaneman hota hai….
R: excuse me control your language!!(angry)
V: jaan don't bhi angry I am just trying to get to know you…
R: whatever I don't have time for extra people bye….
Ridz is leaving when vivek holds her hand
V: itni jaldi nahi jaan ……stay with for awhile
R: haath choro ..or I will shout…
Vivek holds ridz very close and is about to kiss her when…….
(Laksh = Angad/adi/ridz close friend)
L: u bas***d leave her alone
V: kyun teri kon hai yeh yeh…chal phut yahan se…..
L: tu yun nahi manega….
Laksh beats up vivek …principle comes ridz talks to him and he expels vivek from the college
V: just wait I will get me revenge……(shouting loudly)
L: yayyyaa now get lost…..
Vivek leaves and laksh sees ridz crying …he goes and consoles her
L: don't worry he is gone now
R: thank-you soo much laksh( crying very much)
L: okie ab joa class ke liye aur late hojoa gi bye….
R: thanks….bye
Ridz goes to class and explains to the teacher what happened the teacher understands.ridz joins the lecture…
At lunch
Angad and adi are sitting and listing to what laksh is saying and are getting realling angry at vivek….but laksh tells them he left the uni
Ridz comes and hugs her brothers and start to cry again….
An; ridz jaan chup ho joa he is not even in the college anymore
A: come ridz I thought u said u are not a baby and look u r crying..she is a crybaby(hoping to make her laugh)
R: adi bhaiya…I am not a cry baby…(says it smiling)
An: now that's like a good girl
L: if done with emotional stuff lets have lunch
R: okie…
After university is finished and they have three week march break before it starts again
At home
Laksh comes home Angad adi and ridz because he has news to share with them…when they come home they see milind home already.
R: milind bhaiya………(about to cry but controls herself)
M: hi ridz how was university and now you have a three week break
R: uni was good and I'm excited about the break……..
L: wait I have an annoucment to make I'm getting married…
An: really who????
A: yes laksh finally you found someone
R: soo who is she
L: her name is krishnatulsi …kt for short…
R: wow laksh congrats
L: thanks
M: yea laksh I'm soo happy for you
An/A: us too congrats
L: thanks and u all are invited and it happening in the break so u all have to come!!
M: they can come but me……
L: no bhaiya u have to come or I'm not getting married
R: bhaiya u have to come
M: fine okie
A: where is it held??
L: It's held in Greece in my dad's farm house
R: wow cool…..going to be fun!!!!!
An; when do we have to leave
L: tomorrow at 7:00am
An/A/M: what ??? tom
R: great I'm going to pack .bye
M; laksh we have to ask mom and dad
L: don't worry mom spoke to them and they are fine with it….mom said they won't come with you guys but they'll come on wedding day because they have work
An/A: fine…lets go pack
M: okay if u say so…….
Laksh leaves so he can start to pack
Next update part 5: the the bajaj house packing to leave but where???? Both families parent can't attend the wedding why???....plzz comment i spent so much time writing this part is long soo i hope u enjoy it.....i promised part 6 will have the couples meet each other
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unknown cute @yogzz
+ 3
15 years ago
awesome part yaar...............
it was fantastic.....................thanx for pm
Nidha @nidha1983
+ 5
15 years ago
awwsome too gud yaar so sweet vivek is out of college cool plz continue it soon and thanks for the pm"Koi chand se mahobbat karta hai Koi suraj se mahobbat karta hai, Hum unse mahobbat karte hai, Jo hum se mahobbat karte hai."
priya @kelly789
15 years ago
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Tahira @cutie13
15 years ago
i just read the whole story
it is gr8
all r my fav couples
cont soon
Saba @stars_shine*
15 years ago
gr8 part
thnx for the PMcontinue soon
Mini @cool_pisces
+ 3
15 years ago
Hey thanks for the PM loved both the parts very cute, hope the couples meet soon, looking forward to their scenes together.
megha sharma @MS-meghasharma
+ 4
15 years ago
thanks for the pm
nice part
waitin for the meeting of all the couples
Samina @Iqbal Neha1
15 years ago
amazing part
i really liked the way laksh saved ridz and then adi and angad consoling her i hope vivek doesnt do anything bad 2 ridz .
i think the bajaj children are also coming 2 greece cant wait 4 all the youngesters 2 meet each other .
i hope the wedding is gnna bring them closer 2 each other.
i really liked the way u added pictures of the house it helps 2 imagine where the charachters live and helps 2 read the story better
Iqbal Neha12008-09-01 07:28:46
Swancy Cherry xx @-Cherry-
+ 4
15 years ago
amaizng part kelly sweety
i loved it soooo much
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
swanzy
sehar @sweet honey
15 years ago
hey....awesome part....poor ridz....vicky desrvd it....cont sooon